Flossaurus (0-0) vs Tyler (0-0) - TYLER WINS

Sharp · 01-27-2014, 02:48 PM

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tyler · 01-27-2014, 06:47 PM

Check I'm going 12 lines

Clash · 01-28-2014, 05:32 AM

Rain Check.

Jp

12? Aight cool.

Clash · 01-29-2014, 06:42 AM

I been in the game! Hailin from LA so I'm bodyin this lame ho,
I've already dropped so many "T" bags people think I'm playin Halo!

I'll hit em wit the 1-2! Leave em abused for takin a fools chance,
Only time he hear 'throw 'bow' Ty! Is when he got down at his high school dance!

Think he great cause he won his match with a witty spin,
Bitch, the dude felt bad and no-showed to give you a pity win.

After this beatdown, I'm yellin stay down! and leavin this site tensely,
When I left they said Floss loved breaking ties with NC. (Ty's)

Dude gettin excited, And he feelin his flows but his PC not,
We only talkin to kids around kettles if we sayin 'T be hot',

Ty non confrontational, you match us just to get him buried?
Only time I'm thinkin, 'Ty down'! Is when a bitch tryna get married! (Tied down)

***his only win is from a no show

tyler · 02-01-2014, 03:09 PM

You aren't hard and if that's what u think, fuck you
Floss a boss? Yeah, and he shines my shoes and choefers me to clubs too
Your insignificant. The day I left was somethin tragic
My return is a big deal, your return is as small & pathetic as ur fuckin taxes
If we put ur skill level and iq into fruition
Well see the only smart thing you've done is pick me to win in the predictions
Your girls got a screw loose, not exceptionally suttle
If your bitch is a gold digger she's better off w/ a metal detector and shovel
Heard of the superbow fag? I'm blowin dough so far
Ill be on four squares while your on foursquare tryna creep hoes at the bar
Ur not dope or hard, everything u hear u can't believe it
Cuz if its true you need floss after every meal every bitch would be bilemic

JonTheDon · 02-02-2014, 12:05 PM

Pity win

Vs.

Predictions, 4square, closer

Floss coo seems like u got the hang of it just gotta make ur punches more harsh, didnt quoted high school cuz it could have been done much better pity win was good tyler coo verse started picking up toward the end predictions was lol, 4square was good n closer was lol u got this more quote better hits

V/ tyler

DjFlame · 02-02-2014, 04:25 PM

These niggas not allowed expos??? Llf, no personals what-so-ever.

Floss- You had some cool multi's in here, man, but you need some punches! Naa' mean? Lol liked your T bag opener, some good giggles there. I didn't quite get the second bar, it had some decent flow though. Third bar was worded awkwardly, like to the max. Didn't come off natural. Next bar was ight, seen better from you @ La for sure though. Closer had a nice nameflip/ play. Good openers and closers, just need some personals in between. Your verse gets a 6/10. Decent.

Tyler- First bar had a nice internal in it, but it was really not true and it did not hit hard for sure. If it was true, throw out an expo! The first line of the second bar was worded very awkwardly, like if you was in a conversation you wouldn't say it like that. The next bar, was it true? Like I said, throw up an expo! Assuming that it is, it was actually a nice punch. Next bar was shit imo. You don't know his wife! Lol. Next bar was alright, deffo not spectacular. Last bar was actually an OK punch, but the thing is that it was worded so awkwardly, I almost lost it. 4/10

My Vote Goes To: Flossaurus for some better wordplay. My advice to both would be to find personals and incorporate punchlines with them, and not waste your setup bar.

Allen Knight · 02-02-2014, 06:45 PM

Ty non confrontational, you match us just to get him buried?
Only time I'm thinkin, 'Ty down'! Is when a bitch tryna get married

vs

Your insignificant. The day I left was somethin tragic
My return is a big deal, your return is as small & pathetic as ur fuckin taxes
If we put ur skill level and iq into fruition
Well see the only smart thing you've done is pick me to win in the predictions
Your girls got a screw loose, not exceptionally suttle
If your bitch is a gold digger she's better off w/ a metal detector and shovel

V/tyler, he took this being more consistent an acouple more quotes, floss had way
too many nameplays switch it up an alot been done on ty already also nothin was harsh tbh work on wording, props on the battle yah'll.

Bender · 02-02-2014, 09:16 PM

to be honest I didn't feel any if Floss's verse, there was no real punches at all in my opinion. the verse just seemed kind of amateur. pity win was ok I guess .. halo line was wack...tyler I like the four square line but the lotb was the taxes line. tyler took this easy.

vote tyler

Tettris · 02-03-2014, 09:16 AM

nothing

vs

Your insignificant. The day I left was somethin tragic
My return is a big deal, your return is as small & pathetic as ur fuckin taxes
Your girls got a screw loose, not exceptionally suttle
If your bitch is a gold digger she's better off w/ a metal detector and shovel

yea...this wasnt even close...Floss needs to dig deeper than just nameplays...

v/tyler

ill nik-A · 02-03-2014, 11:40 AM

Floss, ur format is weird and ur punches come across just as is, the Ty down was ur best attempt but it's a played concept

Ty, nice to see u back, u can be creative and this was solid enough to win

Vote Tyler

Sharp · 02-03-2014, 04:48 PM

After this beatdown, I'm yellin stay down! and leavin this site tensely,
When I left they said Floss loved breaking ties with NC. (Ty's)

Your insignificant. The day I left was somethin tragic
My return is a big deal, your return is as small & pathetic as ur fuckin taxes
Your girls got a screw loose, not exceptionally suttle
If your bitch is a gold digger she's better off w/ a metal detector and shovel
Heard of the superbow fag? I'm blowin dough so far
Ill be on four squares while your on foursquare tryna creep hoes at the bar

floss was a lil corny tbh. the nameplays were his best and they were kinda weak. tyler got this one but floss should hang around, he's got the handle on text

v/tyler

01-28-2014, 05:32 AM	#3
Clash of the Titans Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 88 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 0	Rain Check. Jp 12? Aight cool. __________________ Clash dat hash

01-29-2014, 06:42 AM	#4
Clash of the Titans Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 88 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 0	I been in the game! Hailin from LA so I'm bodyin this lame ho, I've already dropped so many "T" bags people think I'm playin Halo! I'll hit em wit the 1-2! Leave em abused for takin a fools chance, Only time he hear 'throw 'bow' Ty! Is when he got down at his high school dance! Think he great cause he won his match with a witty spin, Bitch, the dude felt bad and no-showed to give you a pity win. After this beatdown, I'm yellin stay down! and leavin this site tensely, When I left they said Floss loved breaking ties with NC. (Ty's) Dude gettin excited, And he feelin his flows but his PC not, We only talkin to kids around kettles if we sayin 'T be hot', Ty non confrontational, you match us just to get him buried? Only time I'm thinkin, 'Ty down'! Is when a bitch tryna get married! (Tied down) ***his only win is from a no show __________________ Clash dat hash

02-02-2014, 12:05 PM	#6
JonTheDon Royalty Nigga Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 67 Battle Record: 0-3 Rep Power: 0	Pity win Vs. Predictions, 4square, closer Floss coo seems like u got the hang of it just gotta make ur punches more harsh, didnt quoted high school cuz it could have been done much better pity win was good tyler coo verse started picking up toward the end predictions was lol, 4square was good n closer was lol u got this more quote better hits V/ tyler __________________ They Salty, Off My Royalty

02-02-2014, 06:45 PM	#8
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Ty non confrontational, you match us just to get him buried? Only time I'm thinkin, 'Ty down'! Is when a bitch tryna get married vs Your insignificant. The day I left was somethin tragic My return is a big deal, your return is as small & pathetic as ur fuckin taxes If we put ur skill level and iq into fruition Well see the only smart thing you've done is pick me to win in the predictions Your girls got a screw loose, not exceptionally suttle If your bitch is a gold digger she's better off w/ a metal detector and shovel V/tyler, he took this being more consistent an acouple more quotes, floss had way too many nameplays switch it up an alot been done on ty already also nothin was harsh tbh work on wording, props on the battle yah'll. __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

02-03-2014, 09:16 AM	#10
Tettris Retiree Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 199 Battle Record: 10-2 Champed - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 306753	nothing vs Your insignificant. The day I left was somethin tragic My return is a big deal, your return is as small & pathetic as ur fuckin taxes Your girls got a screw loose, not exceptionally suttle If your bitch is a gold digger she's better off w/ a metal detector and shovel yea...this wasnt even close...Floss needs to dig deeper than just nameplays... v/tyler __________________ *DOHPE*

01-27-2014, 06:47 PM	#2
tyler Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 180 Battle Record: 5-9 Rep Power: 38	Check I'm going 12 lines

02-01-2014, 03:09 PM	#5
tyler Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 180 Battle Record: 5-9 Rep Power: 38	You aren't hard and if that's what u think, fuck you Floss a boss? Yeah, and he shines my shoes and choefers me to clubs too Your insignificant. The day I left was somethin tragic My return is a big deal, your return is as small & pathetic as ur fuckin taxes If we put ur skill level and iq into fruition Well see the only smart thing you've done is pick me to win in the predictions Your girls got a screw loose, not exceptionally suttle If your bitch is a gold digger she's better off w/ a metal detector and shovel Heard of the superbow fag? I'm blowin dough so far Ill be on four squares while your on foursquare tryna creep hoes at the bar Ur not dope or hard, everything u hear u can't believe it Cuz if its true you need floss after every meal every bitch would be bilemic

02-02-2014, 04:25 PM	#7
DjFlame Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 25 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	These niggas not allowed expos??? Llf, no personals what-so-ever. Floss- You had some cool multi's in here, man, but you need some punches! Naa' mean? Lol liked your T bag opener, some good giggles there. I didn't quite get the second bar, it had some decent flow though. Third bar was worded awkwardly, like to the max. Didn't come off natural. Next bar was ight, seen better from you @ La for sure though. Closer had a nice nameflip/ play. Good openers and closers, just need some personals in between. Your verse gets a 6/10. Decent. Tyler- First bar had a nice internal in it, but it was really not true and it did not hit hard for sure. If it was true, throw out an expo! The first line of the second bar was worded very awkwardly, like if you was in a conversation you wouldn't say it like that. The next bar, was it true? Like I said, throw up an expo! Assuming that it is, it was actually a nice punch. Next bar was shit imo. You don't know his wife! Lol. Next bar was alright, deffo not spectacular. Last bar was actually an OK punch, but the thing is that it was worded so awkwardly, I almost lost it. 4/10 My Vote Goes To: Flossaurus for some better wordplay. My advice to both would be to find personals and incorporate punchlines with them, and not waste your setup bar.

02-02-2014, 09:16 PM	#9
Bender Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 264 Battle Record: 11-5 Rep Power: 146919	to be honest I didn't feel any if Floss's verse, there was no real punches at all in my opinion. the verse just seemed kind of amateur. pity win was ok I guess .. halo line was wack...tyler I like the four square line but the lotb was the taxes line. tyler took this easy. vote tyler

02-03-2014, 11:40 AM	#11
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Floss, ur format is weird and ur punches come across just as is, the Ty down was ur best attempt but it's a played concept Ty, nice to see u back, u can be creative and this was solid enough to win Vote Tyler __________________ Grumpy old man.