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Old 04-18-2013, 12:31 PM   #1
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Default Oatmeal & Genocide.

A collab we didn't carry all the way out.
Me and oat have had several attempts at puting a collab together in the past. This was what we left off with last go around. Enjoy.

Oatmeal:
I'ma be illmatic till I'm ready to die
Fuckin you doggy style with liquid swords, machetes inside
All 36 chambers of your pelican pride
there's just no reasonable doubt to how we're better with rhymes
so step to the side, analyze and start to search for meaning
in whatever endeavor that leaves you hurt for reaching
but when the sediment settles beneath the words you're reading
I defy you to find a single bar that isn't worth repeating

Geno:
the work of demons, this shit been in the making for months
You weak writers playing god shoulda been praying to one
The waiting is done, I've seen enough false idols and profets..
To make a nigga wanna dumb out, in spite of my logic
Homocidal with topics, turning every piece I've composed to classic
The way the priest turns water into wine for catholic
I'm what growns in cabinets where its cold and blackest
Get your soul ripped out, as if you didn't know what happens

Oatmeal:
Geno and oats the rap savages known as black magic
The most advanced standin so don't be haphazard
Too close you'll catch cancer, the flow is stacked canisters holding gas, plastic explosives
Thats havoc for clones and wack amateurs
Ho's get backhanded and bros get Snap! Crackle! and...domes get capped backwards now toast to that, scavengers-
A massacre, so quit bragging your successes
Y'all so average it's staggering, we got failures more impressive

Geno:
We rarely show low aggression, contrary to those who doubt
While your fearing the revelation, we carry the omen out
Voluntarily broke it down, oats renowned, gen as crafty as hell seems
Lousville to your chimes, baseball bats in your bellfries
Oatmeals hazard to health leaves me to clean up the waste
But your deaths will come as slowly as the speed of decay
While you deplete everyday, the pain of my verse gets intense
Blow off some steem through stab wounds, its your personal vent*
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Old 04-18-2013, 12:37 PM   #2
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Best from Oat:
Thats havoc for clones and wack amateurs
Ho's get backhanded and bros get Snap! Crackle! and...domes get capped backwards now toast to that, scavengers-
A massacre, so quit bragging your successes
Y'all so average it's staggering, we got failures more impressive

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We rarely show low aggression, contrary to those who doubt
While your fearing the revelation, we carry the omen out
Voluntarily broke it down, oats renowned, gen as crafty as hell seems
Lousville to your chimes, baseball bats in your bellfries
Oatmeals hazard to health leaves me to clean up the waste

Dope collab here guys. Nice little flex piece from the both of you. The two of you blended together quite well it reminded me of the Pat and Whys collab from the other day. All in all nice drop fellas I enjoyed it.

Feed would be appreciated on ZenLand Part II if yall get the chance.
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=5502

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Old 04-18-2013, 12:40 PM   #3
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this was nice, both of you compliment each other so well that if i didnt know i would have thought it was written by one person. it was rugged, raw and had an all around grimey as hel feel to it. and if this was a failed attemt that wasnt carried out i wanna see the masterpiece. thanks for the read guys
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