Color Blind.

Geno · 12-31-2013, 05:46 PM

eyo..
i black-out and it fades to grey
to many thoughts of the past make me fade today
its plain, im losing my brilliance, color wise at least
the paints gone dry, find another line that bleeds
a rhyme that speaks, a hue that talks, a you that listens
distance, another who, what, when, where, why thats missin'
my oh my, the gimmicks, and where have i been driven
given that, im in living color blind decisions
ride the prism, future lookin bright today
made a left turn, that i had a right to make
its money over everything with a price to pay
a stripe to take, i maybach out if the hype is fake
if it lights the way though, then my life could change
i just write the pain that the world relates to
because my biggest fans had a girl that's hateful!!
in a world that hates you, and my worlds the same to.

werd.

big baby · 12-31-2013, 07:25 PM

Just something to get off your chest, huh? I do these all the time. Except I time myself. And I have a 10-15 time limit. Depends on the length, it varies. I try to do it to get better writing on the spot, rather than in long periods of time. Because I don't have time. This is cool. I'm about to comment your other piece, where I see vasts amount of improvement.

Exis · 01-02-2014, 08:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide

its plain, im losing my brilliance, color wise at least
the paints gone dry, find another line that bleeds
a rhyme that speaks, a hue that talks, a you that listens
distance, another who, what, when, where, why thats missin'

^^Dope.

This is slick man...scheme wise it's tight, what I quoted I felt most but the closer is also nice with it.Had a bit of everything' tbh and it seems keyed?? So yeah...kudos G.

Stay upwards.

CopyPat · 01-03-2014, 05:39 AM

super nice man. been really really feelin all ur shit for the last while here, real smooth, confident writing, all FITS too.. i know u spit all ur shit so mad respect for that aswell. its alot easier to just write "text" then to write a song.. o obviously know that anyways, but yeah props for ur style in general. dopeness

when u had that bright today scheme and then added the lights the way THROUGH i was hoping you would continue the "through" rhyme on the next bar and then Boom! you did. hahaha so that made me like this even more. keep up the good work bruv, and for fuck sakes make some half decent recordings out of these instead of ur wack phone. thx!!

Geno · 01-04-2014, 11:53 AM

But yo copy. All my shit was uploaded correctly. It sounds like is supposed to now
Urbangenocide
Search it on soundcloud for my page. I'm the only name that pops up and listen to the shit now.
I uploaded from PC. Took all the phone uploads down and restored my shit with the proper uploading. It bangs now. Holla
@CopyPat

Wise Wiggles · 01-04-2014, 12:00 PM

nice to see you blessing us again homie

12-31-2013, 05:46 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Color Blind. eyo.. i black-out and it fades to grey to many thoughts of the past make me fade today its plain, im losing my brilliance, color wise at least the paints gone dry, find another line that bleeds a rhyme that speaks, a hue that talks, a you that listens distance, another who, what, when, where, why thats missin' my oh my, the gimmicks, and where have i been driven given that, im in living color blind decisions ride the prism, future lookin bright today made a left turn, that i had a right to make its money over everything with a price to pay a stripe to take, i maybach out if the hype is fake if it lights the way though, then my life could change i just write the pain that the world relates to because my biggest fans had a girl that's hateful!! in a world that hates you, and my worlds the same to. werd. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

01-03-2014, 05:39 AM	#4
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	super nice man. been really really feelin all ur shit for the last while here, real smooth, confident writing, all FITS too.. i know u spit all ur shit so mad respect for that aswell. its alot easier to just write "text" then to write a song.. o obviously know that anyways, but yeah props for ur style in general. dopeness when u had that bright today scheme and then added the lights the way THROUGH i was hoping you would continue the "through" rhyme on the next bar and then Boom! you did. hahaha so that made me like this even more. keep up the good work bruv, and for fuck sakes make some half decent recordings out of these instead of ur wack phone. thx!! __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

01-04-2014, 11:53 AM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	But yo copy. All my shit was uploaded correctly. It sounds like is supposed to now Urbangenocide Search it on soundcloud for my page. I'm the only name that pops up and listen to the shit now. I uploaded from PC. Took all the phone uploads down and restored my shit with the proper uploading. It bangs now. Holla @CopyPat __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

01-04-2014, 12:00 PM	#6
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	nice to see you blessing us again homie __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"