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It was all a dream, I used to read open mic magazine
Rawn Mcdon was heavily up on admin’n steez Hangin stickies on em all Every habit stayed matter fact, disregarding all these laws I let my thread rock till my thread dropped Posting feed and blast through shit ya call writers block Way back, when I had to tell the facts some were wack With the raps to match Remember that shit dudes? Uh Huh, Uh Huh You never thought the big ‘Cop would take it this far Now the shit is highlight cause ya’ll rhyme tight Time to spit aids, show up write some dope flames Born winner, the obvious go getter Remember when we used to eat mc’s for dinner Peace to Vul G, Jewish heat, sick indeed Plumbags is fresh, dub dub(WW), Larsy I wrote it up like I thought I should All legit, stay humble, ain’t hood It’s all good I made the change from a pompous geek To upmost mature the most honest G And accomplishing, I flow nuts with my peeps all day Spread love, it’s the Netcees way The dope way the talent stays keep me busy Words used just slickly Love how you type letters up in this piece Forever thought it could happen, this rappin stuff Always just knew I had the phattest stuff Now something ain’t dope unless they butter made flows From the sickest spitting down to the least gross Bomb flows with ease, been so critiqued Doled out feed to see kids evol-ving Rippin mics without fear Puttin rhyme lyrics in ya lady girls ear Hunches, gumption, it’s the truth how I do The sickest of dudes cause I rocked out a rhyme flu Stereo likes it when Pat plays, it’s understood That it’s still all good Playstation 4, Xbox One shit! When I was on Rapflava I couldn’t picture this 56 reads, one could seem hella dope but Got 2 replies, shitty feed what a joke uh So ill about 2 magazines back No need to worry, the mods handle that And the whole crew astoundin Text away every day, no more fuck aroundin Thinkin back on my one rhyme raps Now my jots isn’t wack, legit on the track And I love to show it off, of course Smile every time I get some love from the boarders We used to fuss when the rap boards tits up Mostly cause someone fucked the shit up, this sucks Nerds hate in the worst way But they spits sound lame in the first place Uh, damn right ignite the mic I rip Cause I went to veteran from novice kid And it’s all…
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appreciate the shout!
i read it
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so did I - lol was slightly off in some places but did its purpose, was a light hearted and enjoyable read.
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Dope, 'nuff said.
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lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LMMFAO like whuuuuut
shit was jokes, iunno if you intended anything else, but yeeeeuh #1 |
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ahah this was amusing, appreciate the shout as well...read pretty clean to the way the song was (which was the point obv), few small hiccups, nothin major tho...nice lil re-creation. I always enjoy reading ya sht man. Glad to see u still postin.
Last edited by Rawn M.D.; 08-01-2013 at 02:23 AM. |
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