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Old 07-16-2013, 02:06 AM   #1
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Default Notorious - Juicy (Netcees Remix)

It was all a dream, I used to read open mic magazine
Rawn Mcdon was heavily up on admin’n steez
Hangin stickies on em all
Every habit stayed matter fact, disregarding all these laws
I let my thread rock till my thread dropped
Posting feed and blast through shit ya call writers block
Way back, when I had to tell the facts some were wack
With the raps to match
Remember that shit dudes? Uh Huh, Uh Huh
You never thought the big ‘Cop would take it this far
Now the shit is highlight cause ya’ll rhyme tight
Time to spit aids, show up write some dope flames
Born winner, the obvious go getter
Remember when we used to eat mc’s for dinner
Peace to Vul G, Jewish heat, sick indeed
Plumbags is fresh, dub dub(WW), Larsy
I wrote it up like I thought I should
All legit, stay humble, ain’t hood
It’s all good



I made the change from a pompous geek
To upmost mature the most honest G
And accomplishing, I flow nuts with my peeps all day
Spread love, it’s the Netcees way
The dope way the talent stays keep me busy
Words used just slickly
Love how you type letters up in this piece
Forever thought it could happen, this rappin stuff
Always just knew I had the phattest stuff
Now something ain’t dope unless they butter made flows
From the sickest spitting down to the least gross
Bomb flows with ease, been so critiqued
Doled out feed to see kids evol-ving
Rippin mics without fear
Puttin rhyme lyrics in ya lady girls ear
Hunches, gumption, it’s the truth how I do
The sickest of dudes cause I rocked out a rhyme flu
Stereo likes it when Pat plays, it’s understood
That it’s still all good



Playstation 4, Xbox One shit!
When I was on Rapflava I couldn’t picture this
56 reads, one could seem hella dope but
Got 2 replies, shitty feed what a joke uh
So ill about 2 magazines back
No need to worry, the mods handle that
And the whole crew astoundin
Text away every day, no more fuck aroundin
Thinkin back on my one rhyme raps
Now my jots isn’t wack, legit on the track
And I love to show it off, of course
Smile every time I get some love from the boarders
We used to fuss when the rap boards tits up
Mostly cause someone fucked the shit up, this sucks
Nerds hate in the worst way
But they spits sound lame in the first place
Uh, damn right ignite the mic I rip
Cause I went to veteran from novice kid
And it’s all…
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Old 07-16-2013, 02:17 AM   #2
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Old 07-16-2013, 04:38 AM   #3
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appreciate the shout!

i read it
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Old 07-18-2013, 11:55 AM   #4
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so did I - lol was slightly off in some places but did its purpose, was a light hearted and enjoyable read.
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Old 07-18-2013, 12:18 PM   #5
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Dope, 'nuff said.
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Old 07-21-2013, 10:19 PM   #6
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You gotta choose more songs I know. I'm not really into Biggie much lolz.
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Old 07-22-2013, 11:04 AM   #7
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lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LMMFAO like whuuuuut

shit was jokes, iunno if you intended anything else, but yeeeeuh

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Old 08-01-2013, 02:21 AM   #9
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ahah this was amusing, appreciate the shout as well...read pretty clean to the way the song was (which was the point obv), few small hiccups, nothin major tho...nice lil re-creation. I always enjoy reading ya sht man. Glad to see u still postin.

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