Paradoxically Speaking The Paris Clock Is Leaking..Dali

[Mr. J]

Broken outta tune & focus..losers notice sent from the lower lip & where the holster sits. stakes is high so I'm taking pride in making mine. peppered in a iron skillet the iron villain . war machine with a retiring skill set. firing steel pegs at a dart board. Heavy breathing the dark lord choking the life in a condor. Holding galaxies what you flipping pogs for? down in the slammer. abra kadabra in magic pajamas. Packing a hammer and framing Trinity. divine divinity lifted Lazarus at the chrisening. chiseling my image in a Sphinx making links to the past. riddle me. say my name and I disappear. the vision clear as the prism'd ear. sicker this fiscal year holding a pistol near. waiting for pioneers in a Plymouth the jobs almost finished but I rely on ears to grimace. melt from eargasms that's when fear has em. the mere phantasm. the mirror. fantastic. delicious morsel let you division support you. living immortal through commited cork screws. company has arrived with ciante. leaving me fancied. intrigued by the delivery last week. and if you get it. that's sweet. I wish I could envision the fantasy..but I blacked out with my right knived hand out. digging deeper than Leo's trio level plans out. goddamn clown...they saw you with your pants down. another lengthy reason to act proud...more confusion to context to the illusionist process using a concept til the contusions and bruises cause stress and break the defusing of bombs...test 1 2...test 1 2...get it together gumshoe I'm rarely diverted from you...another J and more blunt truth the high scorer you can't compare subs too. basing that out of the trunk too. the forest. the trees and the stumps to..I know...I'm stunned too...Tesla next to a receptor that's unscrewed..I don't know what to tell ya its all in the pressure. the crown and the scepter that sends you to the director. testing....1.....2....that's my Q

[Wise Wiggles]

sick

[CopyPat]

yo nuglet. first part was kinda bland i felt, a bit forced.. idunno what it is with ur verses i been hating on lately sorry hahaa. it just never feels like YOU for some reason.. feels like u tryna be something else. whatever.

more confusion to context to the illusionist process using a concept til the contusions and bruises cause stress and break the defusing of bombs...test 1 2...test 1 2...get it together gumshoe I'm rarely diverted from you...another J and more blunt truth the high scorer you can't compare subs too. basing that out of the trunk too. the forest. the trees and the stumps to..I know...I'm stunned too...Tesla next to a receptor that's unscrewed..I don't know what to tell ya its all in the pressure. the crown and the scepter that sends you to the director. testing....1.....2....that's my Q


^THAAAAAAAAAAAT was dope. my head bobbin cause my neck knows its phat. thats the shit right there

was this ur first "paragraph"? i'm liking all the different ppl trying it now. pretty cool man. i would really like to see u TAKE UR DAMN TIME and WRITE something tho. u been posting everything non stop. slow down. process what ur doing. i feel like ur a way smarter guy than u let on. i wanna see what u can really do. write something, then sleep on it, dont post it!! come back to it the next day and revisit, think about what u like and don't like, then get rid of the shit u dont like.. edit, make changes. i think u could do something super dope if u spent more than 20 mins, uknow??? stay up broseph, peep my boss linguist if u can

[Mr. J]

This isn't my first soiree with the style more of a reiteration

[BWHAHA]

Nice flex and paragraph structure, one day you'll be able to do this like me and be super kewl. just kidding! Was this a flex piece? sort of unrivaling.

[Vulgar]

chiseling my image in a Sphinx making links to the past. riddle me. say my name and I disappear. the vision clear as the prism'd ear. sicker this fiscal year holding a pistol near.
^I liked this.

You're an underrated writer on this forum. Keep the pen slidin'

[Mr. J]

just know...I am watching you

[Nigma]

The ending of this was fucking delicious. Felt it took a bit for me to really get into it but by the end I was a believer. That section Copy quoted was well worth the 5 minute price of admission, keep that shit up