Camp Bell (1-0) vs. Defiant (0-0) DEFIANT WINS

[Camp Bell]

you ever been bit by the upset bug? lol

10 lines. due friday.

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[Camp Bell]

those lies you serve weak and extra soft
i bet defiant verse bleak, even tho this a separate loss
ima heavyweight that's dope and my scripts is sicker..
dude tryna mum, me...but I body wraps til it copycat egyptian figures
i grip the trigger, pull it then pop a shot, see tragedy..
the bullet that hit you had a coppertop...that'll unplug D battery
you think ya beef flattered me? i chief wit the greats, u suck!..
they show me crew love wit each new bud...you spend weeknds listening to drake, boo'd up
his bitch into faith and bust nuts when we sext..
she only tryna crush me...but yall know defiant pussy is fucked in the end
you the strong type?..never!, my punches crashed better heads
now THIS the newest most brutal KO of all time ever...not badweathers' thread

[Defiant]

yawn

you gotta new mentor?...you'll still get slayed cause you just bore
ironic u went to namix for new ideas, but your verse has more played ideas than before
everyone thinks your a faggot n wants u gone, so dont lie kid
anyone could get known if they just band camp, like that girl from american pie did
your punches have no impact and this brawl'll prove G
that theres zero reaction for campaign, like the reception of that will ferrell movie
in the tournament u got crushed and was made to pay u see
in the first round they didnt just give knux an olive branch, he got a oak,pine and maple tree
ya bitch cheated on u so many times, somethings gotta give sir
ya girls the type u only do when hammered, n she musta hit u w/ one to be seen w/ her

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

those lies you serve weak and extra soft
i bet defiant verse bleak, even tho this a separate loss
Kind of works
ima heavyweight that's dope and my scripts is sicker..
dude tryna mum, me...but I body wraps til it copycat egyptian figures
nope
i grip the trigger, pull it then pop a shot, see tragedy..
the bullet that hit you had a coppertop...that'll unplug D battery
eh
you think ya beef flattered me? i chief wit the greats, u suck!..
they show me crew love wit each new bud...you spend weeknds listening to drake, boo'd up
eh
his bitch into faith and bust nuts when we sext..
she only tryna crush me...but yall know defiant pussy is fucked in the end
really basic wordplay, rhyme was weak too
you the strong type?..never!, my punches crashed better heads
now THIS the newest most brutal KO of all time ever...not badweathers' thread
I like how you tried to work a forum thing into your verse, but it wasn't particularly hot here

Camp's improved, that opener was a pretty solid personal, and I felt like the closer was definitely on the right track. You're starting to get off the ground as it were. Keep at it, especially with namix's help you should be making strides soon.

Originally Posted by Defiant

yawn

you gotta new mentor?...you'll still get slayed cause you just bore
ironic u went to namix for new ideas, but your verse has more played ideas than before
okay
everyone thinks your a faggot n wants u gone, so dont lie kid
anyone could get known if they just band camp, like that girl from american pie did
lol
your punches have no impact and this brawl'll prove G
that theres zero reaction for campaign, like the reception of that will ferrell movie
alright
in the tournament u got crushed and was made to pay u see
in the first round they didnt just give knux an olive branch, he got a oak,pine and maple tree
solid
ya bitch cheated on u so many times, somethings gotta give sir
ya girls the type u only do when hammered, n she musta hit u w/ one to be seen w/ her
lol

Def had funny lines, good personals, all around solid verse. Camp's starting to get some bite in his lines, but Defiant's still the better battler. I can break down further if necessary, but this isn't too hard a decision.

V/ Defiant

[RPK]

Camp is elevating, based on his verse. I can tell he's making the progression from longbar. However, he just needs to get some better concepts and wording. Keep it up.

Defiant had some nice bars, like American pie,campaign and Olive branch. Didn't like the closer cuz it didnt rhyme. Nice verse overall though.
In the end, think defiant took this. sorry im so brief.
V/Defiant

[Scott Akers]

camp bell
those lies you serve weak and extra soft
i bet defiant verse bleak, even tho this a separate loss

defiant
you gotta new mentor?...you'll still get slayed cause you just bore
ironic u went to namix for new ideas, but your verse has more played ideas than before
everyone thinks your a faggot n wants u gone, so dont lie kid
anyone could get known if they just band camp, like that girl from american pie did

I gottta vote for defiant on this one, his verse was more personal, and just more clever than camb bell.

cambell is trying to hard, which is effecting his wording a bit, seen better from defiant but he still attempted to attack his opponent more.. i liked the feel of defiants verse overall.

v/defiant

[Defiant]

3-0

[Joe Boston]

Campbell

those lies you serve weak and extra soft
i bet defiant verse bleak, even tho this a separate loss
Ok personal

ima heavyweight that's dope and my scripts is sicker..
dude tryna mum, me...but I body wraps til it copycat egyptian figures
Wording made this lack impact felt the creativity on the wp missed

i grip the trigger, pull it then pop a shot, see tragedy..
the bullet that hit you had a coppertop...that'll unplug D battery
Nice direct hit concept was pretty cool

you think ya beef flattered me? i chief wit the greats, u suck!..
they show me crew love wit each new bud...you spend weeknds listening to drake, boo'd up
Nah

his bitch into faith and bust nuts when we sext..
she only tryna crush me...but yall know defiant pussy is fucked in the end
Nah

you the strong type?..never!, my punches crashed better heads
now THIS the newest most brutal KO of all time ever...not badweathers' thread
Mild hit again wording off

Defiant

yawn

you gotta new mentor?...you'll still get slayed cause you just bore
ironic u went to namix for new ideas, but your verse has more played ideas than before
Lol


everyone thinks your a faggot n wants u gone, so dont lie kid
anyone could get known if they just band camp, like that girl from american pie did
Lol nice wp

your punches have no impact and this brawl'll prove G
that theres zero reaction for campaign, like the reception of that will ferrell movie
Good np but could've displayed better wording

in the tournament u got crushed and was made to pay u see
in the first round they didnt just give knux an olive branch, he got a oak,pine and maple tree
Nice personal

ya bitch cheated on u so many times, somethings gotta give sir
ya girls the type u only do when hammered, n she musta hit u w/ one to be seen w/ her
Lol nice flip

Well Campbell had a decent opener as well the copper top line other then that some missed hits and lack of wording hurt him. Defiant I felt was more creative had some decent np attempts and couple personal.

V/Defiant

[Ox]

[QUOTE=Camp Bell;14297]those lies you serve weak and extra soft
i bet defiant verse bleak, even tho this a separate loss

Personal it hits smooth

ima heavyweight that's dope and my scripts is sicker..
dude tryna mum, me...but I body wraps til it copycat egyptian figures

ehh
i grip the trigger, pull it then pop a shot, see tragedy..
the bullet that hit you had a coppertop...that'll unplug D battery

Not really feelin this cool attempt at WP

you think ya beef flattered me? i chief wit the greats, u suck!..
they show me crew love wit each new bud...you spend weeknds listening to drake, boo'd up
nah

his bitch into faith and bust nuts when we sext..
she only tryna crush me...but yall know defiant pussy is fucked in the end
you the strong type?..never!, my punches crashed better heads
now THIS the newest most brutal KO of all time ever...not badweathers' thread

Not really diggin this



you gotta new mentor?...you'll still get slayed cause you just bore
ironic u went to namix for new ideas, but your verse has more played ideas than before

Personal its not bad liked campers opener better

everyone thinks your a faggot n wants u gone, so dont lie kid
anyone could get known if they just band camp, like that girl from american pie did

lol ok
your punches have no impact and this brawl'll prove G
that theres zero reaction for campaign, like the reception of that will ferrell movie

lol alright

in the tournament u got crushed and was made to pay u see
in the first round they didnt just give knux an olive branch, he got a oak,pine and maple tree

Ok Cool hit nice personal smooth tbh

ya bitch cheated on u so many times, somethings gotta give sir
ya girls the type u only do when hammered, n she musta hit u w/ one to be seen w/ her

lol ouch

V/Defiant