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Old 02-04-2013, 05:23 PM   #1
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Hopefully you'll be able to pickup the flow with the beat. Was strolling through instrumentals and came across this, then decided to read some of the bars that were posted and I didn't like them so I wrote some of my own.

Let me kick it on the realness
Shoutout to Rosenberg the king bitch
Sick of faggot teen kids on YouTube
Writing drama queen riffs
When they never seen a deep clip
Like "Homie come and peep this"
You'd be lucky if you don't get your fuckin' teeth ripped
Right out of socket walking husky cause you obese and speechless
I combat with these pricks by stacking green chips
No they're not a snack rollback down your sleeves, shit
What the fuck is this when your stomach can fit
Three or four children and their strollers within
You need a facelift better yet a taste kit
Get your chins checked anticipating McDicks is some gay shit
Wait until the belt holding up your waist splits
Take each strand and whip you into shape quick
You're the new slaves to this land wits
Are getting replaced by shakes and greasy sandwiches
Stupid fucking kids
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Old 02-05-2013, 02:48 AM   #2
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lol this was funny, you seem mad breh!

i wasnt feeling that beat, but it still was a nice little funny verse



What the fuck is this when your stomach can fit
Three or four children and their strollers within
You need a facelift better yet a taste kit
Get your chins checked anticipating McDicks is some gay shit
Wait until the belt holding up your waist splits
Take each strand and whip you into shape quick
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