No Repeating Letters

[Mike Wrecka]

Specific Task - No same letter in the same sentence


In the beginning of my sentence, received a letter from mom,
she wrote, hope every things ok, just try and remain calm,
we have the appeal process started, give it a chance,
and it will be proven that your just a victim of circumstance,
take a glance, I sent papers, legal documents,
so in court you don't seem feeble, but instead confident,
its really common sense, that youll be home soon enough,
don't worry about a place to live, your old room hasn't been touched,
just give it a couple of months, have faith and discover,
that god created miracles, ill keep praying, Love Your Mother

a lot of time had passed, still didn't receive a letter,
everyday lifes getting worse, hoping for a note to make it better,
feeling really disconnected, from the outside world,
no contact from my kin or that supposed ride or die girl,
I sit and reminisce, envisioning happier times,
till finally a letter came, with a name, on the front that was mine,
it read, Dear Client, sorry for all that you've been through,
ive been working on a solution but alas things are never simple,
the appeal has been negated, despite my continuous persistence,
you will remain incarcerated and no longer can I provide assistance,
an invoice will be sent to the address we have on record,
best of luck, Sincerely The Firm of Siben and Fletcher,

that was it, game over, my optimism had come to an end,
until someone hollered "another letter, this one from your girlfriend",
it said, writing this is awkward, words cant describe,
how much I wish for an embrace together, away from prison, outside,
these last few months have been strenuous, really quite a wild ride,
and yes I mentioned we'd be forever, but it seems that I lied,
I was drowning in an ocean of emotions, just mentally broken,
when someone threw me a life vest, now I confess, I am floating,
please do not think of me simply as a filthy whore,
but im eight weeks pregnant, and the baby is his, not yours,
so this message is the last im sending, done pretending,
Best Wishes, stay healthy, this is how we are ending

so I sit in my cell lonely, alone, forgotten,
the fruits of my labor have all grown so rotten,
a man is fucking my girl and I cannot physically stop him,
my whole family shuns me, like an embarrassing problem,
each letter that ive shared, rare, one of a kind,
never repeated, each one a different person has signed,
no one wants to hear, about horrible things Ive seen
life moves on, they get back to a daily routine

and picking up a pen and paper, to write a criminal is not part of it
but some day ill be free, and everything will be marvelous

[Frank]

my bad son. i was gonna flip the concept slightly different but similarly only more crazy.

props for the consistency though kid, along with the conceptually writing thats really shining through the forum haze. i'm proud to be partially responsible for your new approach to writing.

stay keen

[Geno]

this was ill for what it is mike

just read it in the writing challenge forum. very solid for the type of challenge you were faced with. good piece, nice way to scare the competition bro

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[Mike Wrecka]

hello

[Sho Money EMG]

This shit was hard Mike. I see that u don't use multies much but that really didn't matter considering the way it turned out. Honestly u kept it very entertaining as to what would happen next. U stayed on topic ntm a great topic to explore, an nailed it. Flow was perfect. Structure was solid. Overall bro this was really good, excited to see more frm you.

Here was my fav lines

we have the appeal process started, give it a chance,
and it will be proven that your just a victim of circumstance,
take a glance, I sent papers, legal documents,
so in court you don't seem feeble, but instead confident,
its really common sense, that youll be home soon enough,
don't worry about a place to live, your old room hasn't been touched,
just give it a couple of months, have faith and discover,
that god created miracles, ill keep praying, Love Your Mother

^^ this shit was solid as fuck, quite moving aswell

also liked

it read, Dear Client, sorry for all that you've been through,
ive been working on a solution but alas things are never simple,
the appeal has been negated, despite my continuous persistence,
you will remain incarcerated and no longer can I provide assistance,
an invoice will be sent to the address we have on record,
best of luck, Sincerely The Firm of Siben and Fletcher,

^^ lol real sick brotha, also loved the rest just liked these parts the most. Keepdropping my dude