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09-22-2013, 11:46 PM
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White Earl
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Audio: Say What You Want.
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09-22-2013, 11:48 PM
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Chillin' like FUCK!!!
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send a regular link. that one is mobile
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09-22-2013, 11:54 PM
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09-23-2013, 12:29 AM
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like i said on the first verse, the lyrics are excellent.
the second verse was a little choppy. almost as if you hadn't gone over it enough prior to recording it. aside from the few awkward pauses and running out of breath at places, this shit was ridiculous from a lyrical standpoint.
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09-23-2013, 12:35 AM
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White Earl
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ya man, there were points where that second vderse was frustrating the fuck outta me for some reasonlmao. Appreciate the peep yo.
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