Imitation

Nigma · 08-31-2013, 02:59 PM

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Re: Imitation of Style

The task at hands to match the stuff you struggle to handle
The trouble with that, I've done it but I'm humble in action
To sum it quick I'm lappin past the trash of an amateur
I want none of it, like the last expansion of Candada
Take a straight gaze at the path, don't day break around Afrika
Date raping giraffes with the pack of beta apes thats attractin ya
Damn, it's like ya summoned from a dungeon how you creep up the steps
You think you're something but you're nothing.. The Placebo Effect
I'm the type to write a section reminding men of all 5 they senses
And then say try to test like the mindset of a tribal medic
Spewing the facts of life, you only true when the task is dying
Knew he had passed his prime so I threw him on past horizons
Viewing the crashing site and the beauty it catalyzes
Too much moving, we act in signs like students of acting
Commuting through hands and smiles like Nubian pantomimers
Inhale fumes till I catch on fire in a rapture minded stature
I am choosing the last survivor with the catch-a-liar method
Your task, to draft a writing on the master of fire..

If I was there I'd say that I'm a cleric of the of newer ages
Barrels full of silver seein werewolves in the lunar rays, the
Tarots cards are truthful, pay off the tariffs for my rule breaking
Tearing human brains I'm like a Pharaoh in a tomb awakened
Scarin them like half a page will contract AIDS and get cancer
I'm a black mage on the Sabbath, the last days of a rapture
A man trained as assassin, I'm Max Payne with a cannon
Land, wait, and inhabit.. The whole planets alarmed!
Grown, planted, and farmed in our botanical garden

It don't matter, regardless you'll be cloning my figure
A poets only limits what he knows and can deliver
If you hold that inner wisdom let it grow before you pick it
If your goal is to persistently bring growth to all your writtens
But you're focusing on winning, only know you'll never get it
Pathetic, they saying that all I do is flow?
Yeah, in my writtens it's potent
But that simple shit you quote
Is just a ripple in my ocean
And I've grown so bitter cold that it's the only shit I'm holding
When emotion grips my shoulder and it lifts me from this coma
It is youthful food for thought, I'm like a gypsy with ambrosia
When the seconds stem from minutes and the gimmick scene is closing
Hope you scribbled in some notes cause you will miss me when it's over
So I'm always solitary and alone the poems can rescue me
Boatloads of the recipe, coke-nosed to suppress the beef
Patron, smoke, and some ecstasy, my own soul is repressing me
Own homes at the depths and I'm stone cold like it's wrestling
Before I let them in on my perception of investment,
I'ma end the clip like men before the credits of a western flick

I guess it's just a...

Limit breaker, switch the pace from basic to phase two
And if you want to imitate my style, I don't blame you

YDK · 09-01-2013, 02:33 AM

This was dope as fuck, allusions metaphors similies even delayed rhymes an more complex schemes in places were all done very well. This is wat a bragging type piece should be like, let the writing show the skill an hope ppl can see the subtle parts that be very difficult to so properly. Was wondering how you were gonna end it an I loved it lol overall it was a solid drop man above average flow an dope ass content. Good Shiite man keep droppin

Geno · 09-01-2013, 11:38 PM

will feed at another date and time. upping for now

Nigma · 09-05-2013, 01:42 PM

<3

veritas · 09-05-2013, 02:34 PM

Quote:

You think you're something but you're nothing.. The Placebo Effect

put that on a shirt. doppppppe

Vulgar · 09-10-2013, 09:43 PM

Really good. Dynamic rhyme schemes that don't end when you expect it, and very electrically charged. You are definitely a flag-bearer for the new generation of topicalists because of your flow manipulation, which is a no brainer as to why you're a standout.

Knew he had passed his prime so I threw him on past horizons
Viewing the crashing site and the beauty it catalyzes
Too much moving, we act in signs like students of acting
Commuting through hands and smiles like Nubian pantomimers
^Solid.

So I'm always solitary and alone the poems can rescue me
Boatloads of the recipe, coke-nosed to suppress the beef
Patron, smoke, and some ecstasy, my own soul is repressing me
Own homes at the depths and I'm stone cold like it's wrestling
^You seem to hit your stride best with these 4 line strings. Nice work. @Nigma

08-31-2013, 02:59 PM	#1
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Imitation Private Messages in Folder: Outbox Re: Imitation of Style The task at hands to match the stuff you struggle to handle The trouble with that, I've done it but I'm humble in action To sum it quick I'm lappin past the trash of an amateur I want none of it, like the last expansion of Candada Take a straight gaze at the path, don't day break around Afrika Date raping giraffes with the pack of beta apes thats attractin ya Damn, it's like ya summoned from a dungeon how you creep up the steps You think you're something but you're nothing.. The Placebo Effect I'm the type to write a section reminding men of all 5 they senses And then say try to test like the mindset of a tribal medic Spewing the facts of life, you only true when the task is dying Knew he had passed his prime so I threw him on past horizons Viewing the crashing site and the beauty it catalyzes Too much moving, we act in signs like students of acting Commuting through hands and smiles like Nubian pantomimers Inhale fumes till I catch on fire in a rapture minded stature I am choosing the last survivor with the catch-a-liar method Your task, to draft a writing on the master of fire.. If I was there I'd say that I'm a cleric of the of newer ages Barrels full of silver seein werewolves in the lunar rays, the Tarots cards are truthful, pay off the tariffs for my rule breaking Tearing human brains I'm like a Pharaoh in a tomb awakened Scarin them like half a page will contract AIDS and get cancer I'm a black mage on the Sabbath, the last days of a rapture A man trained as assassin, I'm Max Payne with a cannon Land, wait, and inhabit.. The whole planets alarmed! Grown, planted, and farmed in our botanical garden It don't matter, regardless you'll be cloning my figure A poets only limits what he knows and can deliver If you hold that inner wisdom let it grow before you pick it If your goal is to persistently bring growth to all your writtens But you're focusing on winning, only know you'll never get it Pathetic, they saying that all I do is flow? Yeah, in my writtens it's potent But that simple shit you quote Is just a ripple in my ocean And I've grown so bitter cold that it's the only shit I'm holding When emotion grips my shoulder and it lifts me from this coma It is youthful food for thought, I'm like a gypsy with ambrosia When the seconds stem from minutes and the gimmick scene is closing Hope you scribbled in some notes cause you will miss me when it's over So I'm always solitary and alone the poems can rescue me Boatloads of the recipe, coke-nosed to suppress the beef Patron, smoke, and some ecstasy, my own soul is repressing me Own homes at the depths and I'm stone cold like it's wrestling Before I let them in on my perception of investment, I'ma end the clip like men before the credits of a western flick I guess it's just a... Limit breaker, switch the pace from basic to phase two And if you want to imitate my style, I don't blame you __________________

09-01-2013, 02:33 AM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	This was dope as fuck, allusions metaphors similies even delayed rhymes an more complex schemes in places were all done very well. This is wat a bragging type piece should be like, let the writing show the skill an hope ppl can see the subtle parts that be very difficult to so properly. Was wondering how you were gonna end it an I loved it lol overall it was a solid drop man above average flow an dope ass content. Good Shiite man keep droppin __________________

09-01-2013, 11:38 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	will feed at another date and time. upping for now __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

09-05-2013, 01:42 PM	#4
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	<3 __________________

09-10-2013, 09:43 PM	#6
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Really good. Dynamic rhyme schemes that don't end when you expect it, and very electrically charged. You are definitely a flag-bearer for the new generation of topicalists because of your flow manipulation, which is a no brainer as to why you're a standout. Knew he had passed his prime so I threw him on past horizons Viewing the crashing site and the beauty it catalyzes Too much moving, we act in signs like students of acting Commuting through hands and smiles like Nubian pantomimers ^Solid. So I'm always solitary and alone the poems can rescue me Boatloads of the recipe, coke-nosed to suppress the beef Patron, smoke, and some ecstasy, my own soul is repressing me Own homes at the depths and I'm stone cold like it's wrestling ^You seem to hit your stride best with these 4 line strings. Nice work. @Nigma