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Old 08-13-2021, 01:38 PM   #1
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Plausible Deniability

It all started with an angels fall from grace
When God’s holy law was all but changed
In the Caucuses caves by the Coptic slaves
Who’s true family roots were the crops of Cain
But were not his name, for Nimrod was their king
And his flock became the Phoenician elite
A secrete society of ancient police,
bankers and thieves, mayors and chiefs…
of major belief systems and cults
Who paid homage to a god half demon and goat
Known as Baphomet’s ghost
Who sat atop a throne made of vomit and skulls
Which were not exposed to the masses they ruled
Through cash institutions and their Vatican schools
See, what happened was shrewd black magic was used
To manipulate the language in a way that confused
our subconscious mind to divide and then conquer
and acquire our wealth under threats of extortion or a permanent hell
On the Earth they dwell using curse words and spells
The Brotherhood of the Serpent has a church at Yale
Harvard and well…several estates
Located on the grounds where the pharaoh’s remains
are desecrated and plundered in a ritual act
By the Pope and the Queen and a criminal pack
of Rothschilds and Sauds and material tyrants
Who fund whole revolutions just to revel in violence
Not to mention the virus and the fear it creates
Which is “liken” to blood that the vampires drank during Dracula’s reign
This draconian state operates under NATO and a cartel of banks
The puppet masters of fate, finance and faith
That just so happen to make all the medication you take
You can say that it’s fake or that’s it’s all a facade
But at the end of the day Amen-Ra is ya God
The politicians are frauds and the cops are the cons
And the judges not Johns are way more likely to rob

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Old 08-14-2021, 01:10 AM   #2
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pretty dope dude..

i like the topic basis.. centralized on corrupt civilizations - you didnt hold back

rhyming nice with strong vocab..
structure was pretty tight even if loose some times, it was just a key..

nice one dude
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I missed your work!

This was refreshing and a treat to read. Lots of unique references tied together unconventionally. I think every line held a higher meaning and was relevant to the underlying concept here, which I think you wrote on before but you elevated it even more with the references of origin. The “phoenician elite”, “Caucuses cave” and the “fate, finance and faith” lines are only some of the highlights to me. Some of the terms you used, like the brotherhood of the serpent, I’m unfamiliar with. But they still reminded me somewhat of K Rhino (in a good way). Of course I loved the Amen-Ra play and reference too, you usually incorporated those mythological aspects so effortlessly without them seeming out of place.

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Old 08-15-2021, 04:36 AM   #4
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Appreciate the read and the feed, people’s. Much love!
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Dug the content and delivery. Write more. The first few lines were silky smooth.
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aiiite though.

reads like a conversation - skimming the surface of some dense subject matters - nothin too creative in how you put it forwards & shit.

but i still liked it.
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Much love and respect, fellas.

Thanks for reading.
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