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Old 04-28-2020, 01:54 AM   #1
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Default Corleone VS Kr3wsuphyX (U.G Battle, 20 years old)

this keystyle battle is nearly over 20 years old on U.G forums but I stumbled upon the battle and laughed at the some of the lines from both of us in this battle that were jaw dropping.. I enjoyed reading it to so much, I thought Id share it with you guys..



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the truth is this..
get bruised with fists, ur 'krews-a-bitch', (crew/krewsophyx)
you 'lack skills' when you flow, ur threads are 'music-less'/
chewed to bits, 'like deceased gay folks', krews' 'over-dued' and 'dead',
if you gave 'birth to punches', you still couldn't 'produce a hit'/
abusive words, ill 'eat the earth' and spit 'U-IN-VERSE'/(universe)
i'll stare into the sky and make the suns pupils-hurt,
this cat better lose his nerves, before I strip him of his blood streams',
i 'CRUSH DREAMS' and 'squeeze skulls' for absolutely nothing...


consider me a 'surfer dude' cause i RAISED THE BOARD, (I was the admin who revived U.G forums)
get blazed and torn in war with grenades and swords/
one of a kind, this knive'll leave you guttered-inside,
wondering why, i had to detach ur retna from your eye/
get smashed with the raw shit, Im an immaculate martian,
traveling the farthest, soaring across the earth onna flying carpet/
mastering contortion, 'fuck mathematics', i'll 'screw the problem',
so sick, I'll 'place ur back on the newspaper' and read ur 'spinal-colum'/
perfected excellence, a specimen; created from genetic artificial intelligence,
relevant to brilliant element's inscripted in bible testaments/
the baddest, my lungs consist of tons of cryogenic acids,
attack quick; swallow u whole till my stomach fastens/
i don't need to touch u, my brain waves'll move-and-crush you,
my bullet's go threw more AIR then ur fuccin LUNGS do/
the greatest..
i'll uninstall ur aol component's and leave you AIM-LESS, (instant messenger),
niggas'll get the PICTURE when they see u FRAMED kid/
im known to flow the coldest shit, leave mics 'frozen-stiff',
load the clip, then im CLEARY 'rollin-off' like 'gel deodorant'/
i ain moses kid, but ill damn well make the oceans split,
the mic is like 'air' to u, cause u ain't 'never holding it'/
'repair ur whole-clique', now ur 'crews-so-fixed'(krewsuphyx),
this cat thought 'throwing tapes' in 'cake badder' would keep him 'in the mix'/
the murderous tongue; krew gets serviced and hung,
crush ur skull with my hand's till ur eyes merge into-one/
an artistic kid, with-an incredible flow that's type-ridiculous,
i'll KEY in ur 'organs' and use them as 'music-instruments'/
blow out ur intestines, the best kid; i taught einstein his science lessons,
murder u in just an minute; so now u 'gone in 60 seconds'/
i shadow-box lighting, and spar with thunder,
ur levels below the pavement, i stand on the 'ground' ur 'under'/ (U.G)





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gifted spitz with used wrapping paper;
no wonder ur verse iz trash..
showed up actin obsurd n brash..
u stuck a penny in ur rectum;
cuz no one iz savin ur worthless ass..
dont try to bite son;
on the mic ur tyson - forced punches..
gifted izn't really ill;
hiz mirror has syphillis and The Source lovez 'em..
when did u get infected with thiz arrogance..
flamboyant - no ur a flame boy ant;
who getz erectionz when ya stare at men..
now as i proceed to burst ur bubble..
just know thiz;
but i didnt really read ur wordz of rubble..
i'll make u bleed internal;
trouble - iz what u get for awaking the cross..
i'll hand u ur own death certificate;
how'z that for taking a loss?..
i dont even needa battle;
cuz we all know krewz been proven..
but i'll still rip u inside an old car;
cuz i heard ur used to losing..
a useless groupie;
who doezn't deserve my disses..
i'll manipulate u psychologically;
and make u reverse ur wishes..
now learn to listen;
like i filled ur earz with textbookz..
ur done like justin did britney;
ur a sequel to spearz - a next slut..
dissin me?;
either u got ballz or ur missin ur nutz..
i could include a condom with my linez;
but itz already obvious - gifted iz fucked..
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Nice read. I wish I saved my stuff over all the years
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Old 06-12-2020, 06:37 PM   #3
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Nice read. I wish I saved my stuff over all the years

yeah, I hear you, those days were the shit..
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Second guy killed this shit


Can’t believe that’s a 20 year old vers

That nigga fire
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Second guy killed this shit


Can’t believe that’s a 20 year old vers

That nigga fire
true but I still destroyed him.. lol
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Old 06-12-2020, 07:42 PM   #6
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Can’t believe that’s a 20 year old vers

That nigga fire
it's his style which I like.. it's not so generic to a point where you couldn't mistake any of his work with anothers.. that shit is raw.. he said.. "gifted izn't really ill; hiz mirror has syphillis and The Source lovez 'em" lolol classic line..
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That was the one I didn’t get
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true but I still destroyed him.. lol
Nah bro he got this one


Plus u had way more lines so if anything it’s a DQ by modern rules
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Plus u had way more lines so if anything it’s a DQ by modern rules
you really think so? I beg to differ.. he had one quotable in my opinion that I shared to you and that was that siphllus/source line.. as for myself, I had several quotables for punchlines that are worthy to mention. Also, I posted my verse first and that's all he responded with so technically, it's not a DQ on my end due to my verse being subjectively longer, per say, as those were never the rules to begin with (lol) but I understand what you are trying to imply. Essentially, this was a diss verse that I put out there on U.G and then came his response. Either way, you are a voter so in essence, vote away, lol.. peace
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second guy destroy 1st guy nice read thx
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If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
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Fyi that's not what subjective means

And it's 'per se'

Maybe it's meant for a different audience? Like your forum regulars?
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Fyi that's not what subjective means

And it's 'per se'

Maybe it's meant for a different audience? Like your forum regulars?
Its actually worded perfectly as seen. I majored at English brosky, and was a signed author and writer under, "Tate Publishing" back in 2013.. but to enlighten you just a little bit, it's all in the way you phrase those words. Peace
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Fucking gone

Please explain to me how your verse is subjectively longer.

Where'd you go to school/get your degree? The publishing stuff isn't anything post 2008... Tate was a vanity publishing co

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tate...26_Enterprises

It's pay to get your work published. You'd generally be better off self publishing
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I would literally destroy you in a rap battle, you faggott. They're wouldnt even be a chance for you to look good at your first set of bars during our match and I could quote you on a few posts that you've made already in previous threads where you praised the ali baba out of me, referencing my subjective, dope "lyrical skills". Please, take my dick out of your mouth. :)

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Yo Sharp don't ever ban this nigga lol, as gay as he is...durin' these crazy times we live in I need a reason to smile.
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Yo Sharp don't ever ban this nigga lol, as gay as he is...durin' these crazy times we live in I need a reason to smile.
Gay? lmfao far from gay my dude and correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't it you who sucks cock for a living? Britain boy, chill. Collect that good ol' masonic check and be about your way.
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I'm Spanish/American, live in Australia just fyi...you have me confused with someone else bud...maybe that exoduzt dude or whatever, never heard of that nigga man, honestly haven't.
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