Week 9: Wanderer (4-2) vs. FGR (4-4) - WAND WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Wanderer
@FGR

[FGR]

Check going ten

[FGR]

@Wanderer I sent blue my 10

[Wanderer]

I’ll send by tonight

[Blue Bayou]

Wanderers Verse

Pretending u ain’t shook. It’s just bravado & surely a scam
Fear ain’t just creeping in... it’s got blueprints and took out ur security cams
Holy Christ u soft whereas I could be censored.. it’s worth debating
How ur shit not suitable for kids either but STILL get a universal rating
Plus ur girl sneaks over to mine. Ignoring texts & evading calls
Not just YOU she leaves High & Dry... we smoke blunts then she drains my balls
I’ll smash ur whip Windows & grab something sharp I can hatefully plunge in
It’ll be the Shard to the Dome then the Eye like sharing snaps from vacations in London
Or a headshot’ll convince em that I slay with hard intent
Ghetto grip. mind blown, arm twisted.. call it a persuasive argument


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FGR's Verse

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Your such a bitch when I bang them sticks... I'm not sure why I even bother
Until u start running your mouth then I wanna raise that Smith like Jaden's father
Your easy work you jerk.... I few mild punches and this guy is done
I guarantee your taking this ellwand or I'll beat you over the fucking head with one
This soft fuck will get balled up. Head kicks will work just fine
Everyone here knows you tibia bitch, now I'll break ur fucking jaw with mine
Burners in both my fist... Stand your ground or I'll pump some rounds
Dude better face this calories gonna run.. either way I'm dumping the pounds
I'll leave this faggot lifeless. Everyone will be able to smell that you died
Your body'll start to Rotwand, when I take u to that mountain n dump u off the side

[Aero]

Very dope battle. Will vote later.

[evaD]

Wanderers Verse

Pretending u ain’t shook. It’s just bravado & surely a scam
Fear ain’t just creeping in... it’s got blueprints and took out ur security cams
Decent start
Holy Christ u soft whereas I could be censored.. it’s worth debating
How ur shit not suitable for kids either but STILL get a universal rating
Not really sure what you mean be universal rating, is that a diss?
Plus ur girl sneaks over to mine. Ignoring texts & evading calls
Not just YOU she leaves High & Dry... we smoke blunts then she drains my balls
Nice
I’ll smash ur whip Windows & grab something sharp I can hatefully plunge in
It’ll be the Shard to the Dome then the Eye like sharing snaps from vacations in London
This is great, think you tried a shard line before that didn’t come off but this ones nice
Or a headshot’ll convince em that I slay with hard intent
Ghetto grip. mind blown, arm twisted.. call it a persuasive argument
Decent finish

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FGR's Verse

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Your such a bitch when I bang them sticks... I'm not sure why I even bother
Until u start running your mouth then I wanna raise that Smith like Jaden's father
Nice opener I think Dave did a similar line about Black Smiths but this is fresh enough
Your easy work you jerk.... I few mild punches and this guy is done
I guarantee your taking this ellwand or I'll beat you over the fucking head with one
had to google ellwand and still not sure here
This soft fuck will get balled up. Head kicks will work just fine
Everyone here knows you tibia bitch, now I'll break ur fucking jaw with mine
Lol like this
Burners in both my fist... Stand your ground or I'll pump some rounds
Dude better face this calories gonna run.. either way I'm dumping the pounds
Niiice
I'll leave this faggot lifeless. Everyone will be able to smell that you died
Your body'll start to Rotwand, when I take u to that mountain n dump u off the side
had to google again and I get it but it takes away. Almost feel like you googled ‘wand suffixes’ or something to get some fresh name flips?


Liked both verses but I think Wanderer just edges it. FGR the name plays were just too obscure but you had some fire as well

Vote - Wanderer

[Adverse]

Kudos to you two for going head to head twice this week and still finding ammo

Wand:
Pretending u ain’t shook. It’s just bravado & surely a scam
Fear ain’t just creeping in... it’s got blueprints and took out ur security cams
^ ehhhh it was alright but nothing major

Holy Christ u soft whereas I could be censored.. it’s worth debating
How ur shit not suitable for kids either but STILL get a universal rating
^ Wasn't feeling didn't hit

Plus ur girl sneaks over to mine. Ignoring texts & evading calls
Not just YOU she leaves High & Dry... we smoke blunts then she drains my balls
^ hahaha niceee

I’ll smash ur whip Windows & grab something sharp I can hatefully plunge in
It’ll be the Shard to the Dome then the Eye like sharing snaps from vacations in London
^ okay okay pretty okay

Or a headshot’ll convince em that I slay with hard intent
Ghetto grip. mind blown, arm twisted.. call it a persuasive argument
^ i liked this one

Fgr:
Your such a bitch when I bang them sticks... I'm not sure why I even bother
Until u start running your mouth then I wanna raise that Smith like Jaden's father
^ it's okay but we still on the will/jaden smith bars? Remember that slaughterhouse cypher when that was fresh about nine years ago

Your easy work you jerk.... I few mild punches and this guy is done
I guarantee your taking this ellwand or I'll beat you over the fucking head with one
^ kinda obscure reference but i digg it

This soft fuck will get balled up. Head kicks will work just fine
Everyone here knows you tibia bitch, now I'll break ur fucking jaw with mine
^ kinda a stretch but still hit for ms

Burners in both my fist... Stand your ground or I'll pump some rounds
Dude better face this calories gonna run.. either way I'm dumping the pounds
^ okay decent

I'll leave this faggot lifeless. Everyone will be able to smell that you died
Your body'll start to Rotwand, when I take u to that mountain n dump u off the side
^ another obscure but points for freshness

Thought this was a good matchup but ultimately Wand had a few more impactful bars. Both were pretty consistent though and it was kinda a toss up

V/Wand

[Habitat]

Pretending u ain’t shook. It’s just bravado & surely a scam
Fear ain’t just creeping in... it’s got blueprints and took out ur security cams
Plus ur girl sneaks over to mine. Ignoring texts & evading calls
Not just YOU she leaves High & Dry... we smoke blunts then she drains my balls

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Burners in both my fist... Stand your ground or I'll pump some rounds
Dude better face this calories gonna run.. either way I'm dumping the pounds
I'll leave this faggot lifeless. Everyone will be able to smell that you died
Your body'll start to Rotwand, when I take u to that mountain n dump u off the side

tibia is mad close to a bar u used a few months ago. so not quoting that one. i felt wanderers verse was harder hitting so he's gonna get my vote.

[Resin M-I-C]

creep lol old concept made fresh.. shit was heat
universal was light but the concept was creative af
high and dry corny but funny, def points
googled shard, usually that takes the sting out.. but that was nasty
damn argument was fiiiiire

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smith was simple yet fuckin effective, coulda been done before but fresh to me so i fucked with it heavy
googled ellwand, was aight
surprised by tibia.. that shit was a dope wp
hard to believe i never seen a calories gun wp lol another hit
nah rotwand a miss


damn, some of these lines were straight fuckin bangers.. had to reread.. i think that closer by fgr was the deciding factor.. prob the ONLY miss in here.. not gonna lie had a lil bias too for fgr cuz i voted against him already in the same matchup today.. but wand went offf, cant front.. fgr woulda beaten alot of people here with that verse

entertaining shit guys

v wanderer

[Barcotic]

I did tibia/t'be a better

I also did 40 calories in/40 cal a reason..so it makes me not like FGR's lesser, budget version
But uh...

Pretending u ain’t shook. It’s just bravado & surely a scam
Fear ain’t just creeping in... it’s got blueprints and took out ur security cams
Holy Christ u soft whereas I could be censored.. it’s worth debating
How ur shit not suitable for kids either but STILL get a universal rating
Plus ur girl sneaks over to mine. Ignoring texts & evading calls
Not just YOU she leaves High & Dry... we smoke blunts then she drains my balls

Vs.

Your such a bitch when I bang them sticks... I'm not sure why I even bother
Until u start running your mouth then I wanna raise that Smith like Jaden's father
Your easy work you jerk.... I few mild punches and this guy is done
I guarantee your taking this ellwand or I'll beat you over the fucking head with one
I'll leave this faggot lifeless. Everyone will be able to smell that you died
Your body'll start to Rotwand, when I take u to that mountain n dump u off the side

This was close but Wand had the better concepts ftmp & better worded bars

Mvgt Wanderer, tho he definitely did get away w robbery the last time he battled me

[Plot]

Wand
Creeping in: was pretty good, liked the misdirection
Universal Rating: didnt like as much, is ok but not hard
High and Dry: thatds fucking dope mate
London: was wordy but great connections
Ghetto grip: didnt feel this one as much, think I kinda got it.

Fgr
Jaden: not a bad gunbar, think it might be a lil played tho
Ellwand: had to google, pretty good
Tibia: think Ive done it before, cool
Calories: same again
Rotwand: Another Googler. pretty cool.

Dunno this is tough, I think I liked Wand more.

[Mac]

Wanderers Verse

Pretending u ain’t shook. It’s just bravado & surely a scam
Fear ain’t just creeping in... it’s got blueprints and took out ur security cams
cool I liked this

Holy Christ u soft whereas I could be censored.. it’s worth debating
How ur shit not suitable for kids either but STILL get a universal rating
cool mild jab

Plus ur girl sneaks over to mine. Ignoring texts & evading calls
Not just YOU she leaves High & Dry... we smoke blunts then she drains my balls
hehe cool

I’ll smash ur whip Windows & grab something sharp I can hatefully plunge in
It’ll be the Shard to the Dome then the Eye like sharing snaps from vacations in London
nah not feeling this man.. too stretched

Or a headshot’ll convince em that I slay with hard intent
Ghetto grip. mind blown, arm twisted.. call it a persuasive argument
okk

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FGR's Verse

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Your such a bitch when I bang them sticks... I'm not sure why I even bother
Until u start running your mouth then I wanna raise that Smith like Jaden's father
nice I got this but a bit wordy

Your easy work you jerk.... I few mild punches and this guy is done
I guarantee your taking this ellwand or I'll beat you over the fucking head with one
a bit forced nameplay I had to google it

This soft fuck will get balled up. Head kicks will work just fine
Everyone here knows you tibia bitch, now I'll break ur fucking jaw with mine
coool I like it

Burners in both my fist... Stand your ground or I'll pump some rounds
Dude better face this calories gonna run.. either way I'm dumping the pounds
haha cool

I'll leave this faggot lifeless. Everyone will be able to smell that you died
Your body'll start to Rotwand, when I take u to that mountain n dump u off the side
not feeling this np man


tight battle.. miracle could have gotten away with this one but I wasnt really feeling the nameplays, unknown terms took out the sting for me. Wanderers verse was more consistent except for the dome then the eye stuff which I didnt really like.

v/ Wanderer

[Blue Bayou]

Wand wins