Week 2: Maximus (0-0) vs. SMaSH (0-0) - MAX WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due Wednesday by 11:59 PM PST.
• Goal is for voting to end Saturdays
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
• To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance


Line Limit:
• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 20 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.


Voting:
• I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls.

General Rules:
• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


@Maximus
@SMaSH

[SMaSH]

Check

[Maximus]

Check check.. 10-12 lines

[Maximus]

covid-19 got us isolated at home, but you'll still get murked when i drop ten
been keeping it locked and giving out works remotely it rivals modern job trends
coming with played out concepts, you need an overhaul of your methods
you're far from fresh, So Stale like a female hog's caudal appendage
aint no surviving this, you're gonna be a victim when the rifle's triggered
shoot you for real and handle the Ratchet Kickback like bribes for bitches
dude is broke as fuck but lies that he splurges, this sucker's life aint real
claiming he Blew Green, we never saw that like being color-blind to Teal
i come with berettas like i promised for the vendetta cos i'm brolic
bring your whole squad, i'll leave 'em silent like the first letter in mnemonic

[~RustyGunZ~]

@SMaSH this is why they didn't put you in the mag

[SMaSH]

So.... I .. I guess you wouldn't assume much facts to this
But if I am to give This guy a shot.....look at his name...I'm sure that Max'll miss
This is more than likely sad... If I'm in his home than it's facts he mad.....
PERIOD
nothing but blood if I happen to run through Maxi pad
But... Just to make it clear I'm tough u probably bearded fuck ......and this the only time were Max power is not nowhere near enough
It's not about the line efforts or who is the rhyme setter
....its just if I had to put M in it(eminet).... it only really means that I'm better
And I was very drunk when I wrote this shit
Blue didn't know I had bars when he set this up.............My condolences

[SMaSH]

Originally Posted by Da Brayn Lord

@SMaSH this is why they didn't put you in the mag

......ima teach em not to be so disrespectful.

[Aura]

Job trends & Blew green

Vs.

Eminent




V - Max

[Wanderer]

Maximus I liked your opener but wasn’t feeling much else. Some other bars had potential but lacked sting. Not feeling much else overall

Smash I didn’t enjoy the way your verse was written and wasn’t much hard hitting shit in there.

I’m voting Max

[Flow]

So.... I .. I guess you wouldn't assume much facts to this
But if I am to give This guy a shot.....look at his name...I'm sure that Max'll miss
max'll miss only works one way
This is more than likely sad... If I'm in his home than it's facts he mad.....
PERIOD
nothing but blood if I happen to run through Maxi pad
fair attempt, not much to it though
But... Just to make it clear I'm tough u probably bearded fuck ......and this the only time were Max power is not nowhere near enough
presuming your trolling tbh
It's not about the line efforts or who is the rhyme setter
....its just if I had to put M in it(eminet).... it only really means that I'm better
eminet... That's not a word. Do you mean eminent? Lol
And I was very drunk when I wrote this shit
Blue didn't know I had bars when he set this up.............My condolences
you don't. Not here anyway. Lay off the sauce. Don't shot and drop kids

Vote max

[Allen Knight]

ratch kick back & blew green

Vs

Eminent

Got Max takin this one, his verse hit harder all around acouple quotes.
maxi pad had potential, Props to both.

[Cashius]

This was...not great. Felt like Maximus had some played concepts (blue green) and some stuff that didn’t have a lot of impact (opener, mnemonics). Smash was worse to me though. A blood/period line? An explanation in parentheses? Not feeling much from his verse.

Vote-Maximus

[Clout]

Ratchet kick back and blew green

Vs.

Eminent

Bothbhad alackluster showing this week, keep it up though gents.

V/ max

[Blue Bayou]

Maximus wins