King Author

Mediocrity · 05-09-2018, 03:49 PM

I’m the true King Author, crowned or not
what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock.
I sit around a lot nights, plan and plot
to surmount the odds and come out on top.
My right-hand, man, sure lands a lot
has you down in shots, sounding off
getting boos from your bars, think you had enough?
better count the cost before your account is locked.
See I’ve mastered rap, been trained to kill
amassed a vast array of skills
The last remaining ill rapper to slay the quill.
You’ve practiced rap in vein I feel
and lack the knack to make a real rap
that actually takes some skill.
I’m remarkable like whiteboards
got like 4 high scores on the all-time board.
You’re shit, like the one eye red, is an eyesore
My Lord, I’ll pay you to not write more.
Matter fact you’re not SHIT, just SH- because you’ve lost IT.
Not linked-in so you can’t connect with the bosses
call me Mr. Clean, a quick sweep and you’re washed kid.
I’ve been slept on as I fly over heads like red eye flights
yet I’d even be up on diss counts in Best Buy guides
cause while you master forcin’ Light bars like Jedi Knights
I'm providing comic relief like Henti sites.

Elemental P · 05-09-2018, 05:58 PM

Pretty str8 lil read, I actually liked the Title more than the verse lol nah, but solid multis thru out. Cool lil free verse I liked how u started but kinda tappered off as u went which is pretty usual.

Mediocrity · 05-09-2018, 10:53 PM

Thanks homie

ACTIVATE SELF · 05-12-2018, 11:24 AM

Best lines quoted below.

Quote:

I sit around a lot nights, plan and plot

See I’ve mastered rap, been trained to kill
amassed a vast array of skills
The last remaining ill rapper to slay the quill.

My Lord, I’ll pay you to not write more.
Matter fact you’re not SHIT, just SH- because you’ve lost IT.
call me Mr. Clean, a quick sweep and you’re washed kid.
I’ve been slept on as I fly over heads like red eye flights
yet I’d even be up on diss counts in Best Buy guides

I thought I fed this yesterday? Not sure what happened to my post. Anyway, I dug this. You had a fair amount of slick talk, clever puns and cool wordplay all throughout this joint. The flow was also on point. Although, I didn't like the repetition of the two "skills" being used so close together. Other than that. This shit was fly. Props.

Geno · 05-12-2018, 11:44 AM

This is straight heat bruh. Favorite post from you so far. Dug how you flipped the opener lol. Used an xcalibre line not to long ago.

Bound to rock. -dope

Geno · 05-12-2018, 11:45 AM

Oh ya. Forgot to touch on your scheme. Your shit flowed a lot smoother. The syllable count was on point a lot more in this piece thwn i remember it being previous. Well done man. Proppers for rillz

Wutzit Tewya · 05-12-2018, 12:28 PM

Yeah pretty straight forward but I'm not against that style. Rather see straight forward than trying too hard sometimes. The "trained to kill" to "takes some skill" section was my favorite of the piece. Keep doin' your thing.

Mediocrity · 05-13-2018, 12:41 PM

Thanks y’all

El Muffin · 05-14-2018, 02:30 AM

I’m the true King Author, crowned or not
what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock.

oooOOO

ok.

i see you

that was a great way to open up

not any bars that match that following it..but the whole read was clean ..i fw it

but that opening couplet is signature worthy..props

closing couplet was interesting too

btw its Hentai..i believe

Exis · 05-14-2018, 07:54 AM

I find your flow choppy @ times, if you write to a beat that obviously makes sense especially when Idk what you writin' too...I copy & pasted it then structured it to how I'd pen it up & it was alot smoother...the first bar is flames, the rest was really solid...I'm not sure if I've read anythin' from you before but yeah, first impressions be impressive man.

Stay upwards.

sral · 05-14-2018, 06:23 PM

I couldn't decide whether I loved that "I'm remarkable like whoteboards" line or absolutely hated it but I've decided it's a keeper haha!

I had that "four high scores on the all time boards" rhyme stuck in my head after reading it too for some reason.

Keep that pen moving!

Current faggot · 05-15-2018, 06:19 PM

The content was dope. The flow was on point. I really liked this man. You hard some hard hitters. That X caliber shit was dope as fuck man.......good shit homie

Mediocrity · 05-19-2018, 12:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Former Textcee

The content was dope. The flow was on point. I really liked this man. You hard some hard hitters. That X caliber shit was dope as fuck man.......good shit homie

Ah man thanks a lot it’s appreciated

Eŋg · 05-20-2018, 05:50 PM

we used to use the word calibre to measure the width of the sword's blade but with modernity it came to denote the size of the barrel for a firearm and thus the diameter of its bullets, too.

probably. and that's how you spell it.

Current faggot · 05-20-2018, 06:09 PM

Eng you sound smart
Fuck you nigga

05-09-2018, 03:49 PM	#1
Mediocrity Brother Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 518 Rep Power: 4919695	King Author I’m the true King Author, crowned or not what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock. I sit around a lot nights, plan and plot to surmount the odds and come out on top. My right-hand, man, sure lands a lot has you down in shots, sounding off getting boos from your bars, think you had enough? better count the cost before your account is locked. See I’ve mastered rap, been trained to kill amassed a vast array of skills The last remaining ill rapper to slay the quill. You’ve practiced rap in vein I feel and lack the knack to make a real rap that actually takes some skill. I’m remarkable like whiteboards got like 4 high scores on the all-time board. You’re shit, like the one eye red, is an eyesore My Lord, I’ll pay you to not write more. Matter fact you’re not SHIT, just SH- because you’ve lost IT. Not linked-in so you can’t connect with the bosses call me Mr. Clean, a quick sweep and you’re washed kid. I’ve been slept on as I fly over heads like red eye flights yet I’d even be up on diss counts in Best Buy guides cause while you master forcin’ Light bars like Jedi Knights I'm providing comic relief like Henti sites. __________________ I’m the true King Author, crowned or not what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock

05-09-2018, 10:53 PM	#3
Mediocrity Brother Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 518 Rep Power: 4919695	Thanks homie __________________ I’m the true King Author, crowned or not what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock

05-12-2018, 11:44 AM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	This is straight heat bruh. Favorite post from you so far. Dug how you flipped the opener lol. Used an xcalibre line not to long ago. Bound to rock. -dope __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-12-2018, 11:45 AM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Oh ya. Forgot to touch on your scheme. Your shit flowed a lot smoother. The syllable count was on point a lot more in this piece thwn i remember it being previous. Well done man. Proppers for rillz __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-13-2018, 12:41 PM	#8
Mediocrity Brother Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 518 Rep Power: 4919695	Thanks y’all __________________ I’m the true King Author, crowned or not what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock

05-09-2018, 05:58 PM	#2
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507456	Pretty str8 lil read, I actually liked the Title more than the verse lol nah, but solid multis thru out. Cool lil free verse I liked how u started but kinda tappered off as u went which is pretty usual.

05-12-2018, 12:28 PM	#7
Wutzit Tewya Junior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	Yeah pretty straight forward but I'm not against that style. Rather see straight forward than trying too hard sometimes. The "trained to kill" to "takes some skill" section was my favorite of the piece. Keep doin' your thing.

05-14-2018, 02:30 AM	#9
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	I’m the true King Author, crowned or not what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock. oooOOO ok. i see you that was a great way to open up not any bars that match that following it..but the whole read was clean ..i fw it but that opening couplet is signature worthy..props closing couplet was interesting too btw its Hentai..i believe __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 05-14-2018 at 02:33 AM.

05-14-2018, 07:54 AM	#10
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I find your flow choppy @ times, if you write to a beat that obviously makes sense especially when Idk what you writin' too...I copy & pasted it then structured it to how I'd pen it up & it was alot smoother...the first bar is flames, the rest was really solid...I'm not sure if I've read anythin' from you before but yeah, first impressions be impressive man. Stay upwards.

05-14-2018, 06:23 PM	#11
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	I couldn't decide whether I loved that "I'm remarkable like whoteboards" line or absolutely hated it but I've decided it's a keeper haha! I had that "four high scores on the all time boards" rhyme stuck in my head after reading it too for some reason. Keep that pen moving! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

05-15-2018, 06:19 PM	#12
Current faggot Senior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 233 Rep Power: 0	The content was dope. The flow was on point. I really liked this man. You hard some hard hitters. That X caliber shit was dope as fuck man.......good shit homie

05-20-2018, 05:50 PM	#14
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	we used to use the word calibre to measure the width of the sword's blade but with modernity it came to denote the size of the barrel for a firearm and thus the diameter of its bullets, too. probably. and that's how you spell it.

05-20-2018, 06:09 PM	#15
Current faggot Senior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 233 Rep Power: 0	Eng you sound smart Fuck you nigga