Judge these Battle Bars towards this neighborhood thug named A.R.Green

Quarter O · 04-29-2018, 12:42 PM

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Geno · 04-29-2018, 12:52 PM

Middle got promising.
A lot of it maybe went over my head a bit? Idk. This the type.of verse i need to hear for real. These battle rap verses do t ever read right to me.

Seems legit though.

Quarter O · 05-02-2018, 01:23 AM

I should've added commas where necessary.. I will edit

04-29-2018, 12:42 PM	#1
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	Judge these Battle Bars towards this neighborhood thug B Last edited by Quarter O; 05-02-2018 at 01:23 AM.

04-29-2018, 12:52 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Middle got promising. A lot of it maybe went over my head a bit? Idk. This the type.of verse i need to hear for real. These battle rap verses do t ever read right to me. Seems legit though. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-02-2018, 01:23 AM	#3
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	I should've added commas where necessary.. I will edit