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![]() SUNRISE MEDITATION {Continuation...} In this day and age it's all confusion. They set the stage then they play the music and turn the play into a grand illusion. 'Amazing Grace' is what they sang to Judas as strange fruit dangled from the noose! Tell the truth, I don't blame Brutus cos blood stains on his blade laid the blueprint to modern day revolution! THEN AGAIN ... that's just my 2ยข. A penny for your thoughts is what they promise. An educated fool I thank college. They trained me like a stooge to pay homage. Cos keeping us robotic is exactly how they $prophet$. Man, I swear to DOG they really got us! And I feel like Harry Potter... cos our schools are like a tomb if you really know the knowledge. What you're talking is the problem. We're imprisoned by linguistics pay attention it's subconscious. When they teach us how to spell using cursive for the cursing raising demons out of Hell. Cos the Gospel's just a God-spell and the churches know this well. Turning words into terms... that'll sentence us to jail. First they'll book you then they'll crook you. You ain't getting out so bail. Let me tale you what to do. Be mindfull what you say in the mo(u)rning when you wake. Don't condem me to Hel-low where the Helios is gray or go 'n sacrifice your soul in the evening when you pray/prey. Cos when they *bless you they'll substract you in a supernatural way. Using language makes us languid if we never learn the game. Cos their Alpha Bet is rigged and we're all gonna pay Be Safe! ![]() *b-less
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The first thing I always notice about your drops is the fucking structure. The structure and the rhyme scheme. Very intelligent and professional. You also have always had this ability to send such a strong message without being over dramatic with your wording. I always have admired that. You keep the flow so solid while sending your message with authority. I love that. I liked the ending line in your first verse about "prophet". You killed it with the yellow wording I enjoyed that a lot. For real SELF you just keep upping your game every time you drop.
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I hate the structure...this whole centerin' shit is ehh, but whatev's do you...slick piece bro...You seem intellectual as fuck, had some nice imagery & emotion here while holdin' shit down with a pretty consistent flow...
Liked it, stay good hombre. |
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nasty.
one of my personal fav from u. |
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