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11-22-2016, 08:10 AM
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The Biggest
Join Date: Jan 2015
Posts: 3,254
Battle Record: 67-32
Accomplishments - Gun Bar King
Champed - Fight Night 3
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Greed 0-0 vs Super Cred 1-0 - Super Cred WINS
NBL Season 10 Week 2 Due SUNDAY 11/27/16 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines - NO BITING - NO FEEDING - NO SWAYING - AGREE ON LINE LIMIT Don't edit after your opponent has posted. 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in. Don't be an idiot. Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle. May God have mercy on your souls! @Greed |
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11-22-2016, 09:49 PM
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Raw
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 1,721
Battle Record: 21-40
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At least 10
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11-23-2016, 12:20 PM
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The Biggest
Join Date: Jan 2015
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Ca$h.
I feel like writing this week. Might go the max. |
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11-23-2016, 02:18 PM
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The Biggest
Join Date: Jan 2015
Posts: 3,254
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LET ME TALK MY SHIT!
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First off.. Fuck ur throat condition! Hold that 8 steady to makem show respect My aim deadly, I'll put a hole in ur neck THROUGH the hole in ur neck Always actin like a mastermind of sum plan. Dog u're neva seen wit crooks For tryna be a Wiz you'll get Smoked with 2 K's like Khalifa Kush U fell in my Trap, ur girls on my sack n for snitchin u cud get slayed, b Ironically ur the Rat but ur bitch the 1 gettin Hit with Wood on the daily Butterfly knife to his temple. U kno he's dead as soon as the soul lifts Blade spinnin over ur head have u flyin in the air on some drone shit n if u owe chips, spray up the family van - guns like Pakistan I'll let it Ring on ALL u guys for the price of one. Thats a family plan Ur girls a slut but I aint for judgin. Textin me on how she suck it We only conversate about that neck, like wen people see u out in public Gun bar king thats my legacy. Catch a tripple H from this lemon squeeze That jus means I'm Back Snappin with 2 arms behind urs like a Pedigree Expose this gimmick. PSA in his hood bout them weak flows he's spittin Man I'm on the block talkin bout how bad Greed is like Jehovas Witness ___________________ Last edited by Cred; 11-23-2016 at 03:33 PM. |
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11-23-2016, 06:00 PM
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Raw
Join Date: Jan 2013
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Battle Record: 21-40
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Im at the precipice, u aint running this league like Trump as long as im resident
Cause your orange ass may be in charge but you will never be my president Im transcendent you transgender, you got guns i got a ginsu Boy ima release my bankai and fire a spirit bomb with perfect jutsu Fuck nigga im in yo bedroom choke slamming ya girl While u and yo big homie run the streets lookin like toe jam and earl You aint even top 20 in chicago, people want a show just that it aint yours One punch o' mine and you'll be floating over the crowd like kanye on his saint tour I gotchu this time, and yo girl im locked in her mind The damage that media will do to her is worse then tmz 'nd fox news combined Bet yo aorta beating faster, talking gunplay but im needing answers Cause so far the only thing you killing is the joy i had from reading battles When i hold a toast we say Cheers.. you "hold the toast" cause you lame I got a gun bar for you, where we serving shots and everybody know your name Talk about bad, credit aint even something you'll ever see You wanted a loan ironically thats what you'll forever be _ Last edited by Greed; 11-23-2016 at 06:04 PM. |
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11-23-2016, 07:58 PM
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Prayers won't help.
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: Baltimore, Md
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Fuck ur throat condition! Hold that 8 steady to makem show respect
My aim deadly, I'll put a hole in ur neck THROUGH the hole in ur neck Butterfly knife to his temple. U kno he's dead as soon as the soul lifts Blade spinnin over ur head have u flyin in the air on some drone shit n if u owe chips, spray up the family van - guns like Pakistan I'll let it Ring on ALL u guys for the price of one. Thats a family plan Gun bar king thats my legacy. Catch a tripple H from this lemon squeeze That jus means I'm Back Snappin with 2 arms behind urs like a Pedigree Vs You aint even top 20 in chicago, people want a show just that it aint yours One punch o' mine and you'll be floating over the crowd like kanye on his saint tour Dude cred got bars in a safe, on hold. F that, lol. But yea.. Vote - cred |
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11-23-2016, 11:15 PM
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100%
Join Date: Jul 2015
Posts: 1,803
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Fuck ur throat condition! Hold that 8 steady to makem show respect
My aim deadly, I'll put a hole in ur neck THROUGH the hole in ur neck Butterfly knife to his temple. U kno he's dead as soon as the soul lifts Blade spinnin over ur head have u flyin in the air on some drone shit We only conversate about that neck, like wen people see u out in public Gun bar king thats my legacy. Catch a tripple H from this lemon squeeze That jus means I'm Back Snappin with 2 arms behind urs like a Pedigree Vs Fuck nigga im in yo bedroom choke slamming ya girl While u and yo big homie run the streets lookin like toe jam and earl You aint even top 20 in chicago, people want a show just that it aint yours One punch o' mine and you'll be floating over the crowd like kanye on his saint tour Cred went in this week. I'm not a huge fan of that style but he does it well. Ur closer seemed played but I liked it, just couldn't quote it. Greed had a couple good lines and of the rest of his verse was on par with those lines this coulda been close, but his misses were bad. Like that a loan/alone, tf was u thinking lol. V. Cred |
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11-24-2016, 11:18 AM
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Needs no introduction
Join Date: Mar 2016
Location: Toronto
Posts: 4,496
Battle Record: 29-31
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drone shit was coo
pedigree joint was dope closer was nasty vs floating over the crowd was cool alone wp was simple/seems played af but nice cuz of the personal v/cred got this simply outgunned nice lil match tho |
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11-24-2016, 11:35 PM
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Pay Homage
Join Date: Sep 2016
Location: La Luna
Posts: 254
Battle Record: 2-3
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Im at the precipice, u aint running this league like Trump as long as im resident
Cause your orange ass may be in charge but you will never be my president type of set up was this though and since when we call a league host, the president? lol TF come on G.... Im transcendent you transgender, you got guns i got a ginsu Boy ima release my bankai and fire a spirit bomb with perfect jutsu i like this... Fuck nigga im in yo bedroom choke slamming ya girl While u and yo big homie run the streets lookin like toe jam and earl cool You aint even top 20 in chicago, people want a show just that it aint yours One punch o' mine and you'll be floating over the crowd like kanye on his saint tour decent punch here I gotchu this time, and yo girl im locked in her mind The damage that media will do to her is worse then tmz 'nd fox news combined nah wasnt liking this Bet yo aorta beating faster, talking gunplay but im needing answers Cause so far the only thing you killing is the joy i had from reading battles felt soft here When i hold a toast we say Cheers.. you "hold the toast" cause you lame I got a gun bar for you, where we serving shots and everybody know your name no Talk about bad, credit aint even something you'll ever see You wanted a loan ironically thats what you'll forever be NO vs Fuck ur throat condition! Hold that 8 steady to makem show respect My aim deadly, I'll put a hole in ur neck THROUGH the hole in ur neck decent Always actin like a mastermind of sum plan. Dog u're neva seen wit crooks For tryna be a Wiz you'll get Smoked with 2 K's like Khalifa Kush ok U fell in my Trap, ur girls on my sack n for snitchin u cud get slayed, b Ironically ur the Rat but ur bitch the 1 gettin Hit with Wood on the daily lol okay Butterfly knife to his temple. U kno he's dead as soon as the soul lifts Blade spinnin over ur head have u flyin in the air on some drone shit decent n if u owe chips, spray up the family van - guns like Pakistan I'll let it Ring on ALL u guys for the price of one. Thats a family plan nah Ur girls a slut but I aint for judgin. Textin me on how she suck it We only conversate about that neck, like wen people see u out in public nah dont like this Gun bar king thats my legacy. Catch a tripple H from this lemon squeeze That jus means I'm Back Snappin with 2 arms behind urs like a Pedigree ight cool Expose this gimmick. PSA in his hood bout them weak flows he's spittin Man I'm on the block talkin bout how bad Greed is like Jehovas Witness meh ok honestly, not sure what happened to nation of islam here lol...man u felt rushed bruh...u had some okay hits but it just felt like most bars lacked sting and just the right execution...cred had the better polished verse here imo...voting cred
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11-26-2016, 02:03 AM
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25 years later
Join Date: Aug 2013
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Cred - opener, Khalifa kush, family plan, out in public, closer
Greed - saint tour, reading battles V - cred
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11-26-2016, 10:39 PM
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
Join Date: Sep 2015
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VOTE - CREDENTIAL
Greed's concepts were stale & worded clumsily, while Cred easily did enough damage to take the W.
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11-27-2016, 10:14 AM
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Super Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 7,420
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Cred, first half was solid. Second half fell off a bit
Greed, too many jabs, no haymakers, rat was cool I got cred better overall verse
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11-27-2016, 08:15 PM
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YUUGE
Join Date: Aug 2016
Posts: 314
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Gun bar king thats my legacy. Catch a tripple H from this lemon squeeze
That jus means I'm Back Snappin with 2 arms behind urs like a Pedigree vs. You aint even top 20 in chicago, people want a show just that it aint yours One punch o' mine and you'll be floating over the crowd like kanye on his saint tour Both came pretty nice here, or evenly matched should I say. Above are my favorites from each verse. Overall I feel like Cred had more punchlines overall... Greed ended up with some soft punches in there that were basically filler lines, imo Vote - Cred
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11-27-2016, 09:33 PM
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Try this shit
Join Date: Sep 2015
Location: uninhabitable
Posts: 365
Battle Record: 5-11
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Fuck ur throat condition! Hold that 8 steady to makem show respect
My aim deadly, I'll put a hole in ur neck THROUGH the hole in ur neck Always actin like a mastermind of sum plan. Dog u're neva seen wit crooks For tryna be a Wiz you'll get Smoked with 2 K's like Khalifa Kush U fell in my Trap, ur girls on my sack n for snitchin u cud get slayed, b Ironically ur the Rat but ur bitch the 1 gettin Hit with Wood on the daily Butterfly knife to his temple. U kno he's dead as soon as the soul lifts Blade spinnin over ur head have u flyin in the air on some drone shit vs Fuck nigga im in yo bedroom choke slamming ya girl While u and yo big homie run the streets lookin like toe jam and earl You aint even top 20 in chicago, people want a show just that it aint yours One punch o' mine and you'll be floating over the crowd like kanye on his saint tour cred went in this week greed not so much voting for the harsher hits here
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