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Foreva us, neva them.
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![]() NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @R!canTheoryz @2tripple0 Last edited by Allen Knight; 09-19-2016 at 06:32 PM. |
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death warmed over
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And again
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Bullying Yall Bitches.
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death warmed over
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The 1-2 league alright but man I need a real session to spit like ten lines
I could think of a million ways to flow but still none of em says Rican nice
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Bullying Yall Bitches.
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Let's get down to the nitty gritty, leave pieces of you across the city literally,
& be left with nothing else but to Split 2 Down the Middle like 50-50 |
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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2...set up didnt have anything to do with punch....and ricans not nice isnt really a punch
Rican... ur set up coulda juz ended at nitty gritty...but 2nd part tied in with punch... split 2/50 50... nameplay hit pretty hard Vote- Rican is Nice |
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Tsk Tsk
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I like what you did crip, it was more of an indirect slight then a punch, but I liked it all the same. Rican had a nice concept, but i feel it didn't hit as hard as it could have. Also, not sure about the end rhymes, literally/fifty-fifty doesn't work the best. You had more of grimmie bar which goes a long way, but its something about crips misdirection that I really do like
V/2k
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I got 2tripplo here....weird
Rican yours might have sounded good in a live battle but came off as weak in text 2trip youre wasn't anything special but I liked it better and the wording was good Vote tripple |
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Barrin' Out
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V-Rican... His made more of an impact
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Rican did it
Tripple0 was bland |
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If 2 trip had a better set up.
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Try this shit
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2 trip could have had a better set to take this
Rican was soft but landed more than 2trips did vote ric
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Vote -- RicanTheoryz. Tripple was too light.
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
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lmao thats one of 2trips best
got Rican winning slightly though
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Trip-was okay not hard enough for the win
Vote-Rican Punchline connect better compare to trip |
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Triple is taking feedback to the heart & improving a bit...However this wasn't enough to beat Rican...Trips punch just lacked the sting at the end... Rican came with a very live battle like approach...which I can see why...His hit was just better imo...My vote goes to:
Rican
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2's bar was aight but reek was more aggresive and direct
vote Reek |
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Lime Life
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Lol Ricans reminded me of that Pun 'dead in the middle of little Italy'...could have been better but enough to beat 2trip who is improving a lot every week, keep going bro. Just a little too soft here.
Vote Rican.
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