Kill Yourself-ThryJoe

Thryjoe · 08-03-2016, 01:04 PM

Hey, first verse on this site. Been rapping since April of 2015. Friends call me Thry, not Joe. Haha, hope to look around some here. (Btw, this isn't always my style, just trying something new.)

Why you giving up?
Why you hurting now?
Just kill yourself,
It'll keep the worry out

You been pulled through this for a long time, like an utter's cow
Your butterflies are fluttering around, what'd you eat with your gutter's chow?

Why you giving up?
Why you starting to doubt?
Just kill yourself,
It'll keep the worry out

You ain't used to this, he just rapped you down, gave you an uber dis, what you gonna do now?
Throw up on the ground, keep the animals out, go berserk and scream and shout, "hey! ow!"

Oops you just started a fight...

Why you giving up?
Why you killing now?
Just kill yourself instead,
It'll keep the worry out

Oh no, you just jabbed him in the leg with a popsicle stick, he's on the floor with a pencil full of lead
He shoves it in your ass, what an embarrassment, the whole crowd starts to laugh, stabs you in your calf

Why you giving up?
Why you hurting now?
Just kill yourself,
It'll keep the worry out

Went home with a bloody leg, mom said "what's with this, you piece of funny shit?!
You been out with them girls, eh? motherfucker, you got a puddy dick!" even ma's got you lonely, bitch

Why you giving up?
Why you depressing now?
Just kill yourself,
It'll keep the worry out.

PancakeBrah · 08-03-2016, 03:45 PM

I honestly don't think anyone's ever called you Thry.

Mr. J · 08-03-2016, 04:21 PM

Its only his lisp

sral · 08-04-2016, 11:13 AM

@Hush that you?

Split Eight · 08-04-2016, 11:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

I honestly don't think anyone's ever called you Thry.

what a horribly nickname anyways

Split Eight · 08-04-2016, 11:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Thryjoe

Went home with a bloody leg, mom said "what's with this, you piece of funny shit?!
You been out with them girls, eh? motherfucker, you got a puddy dick!" even ma's got you lonely, bitch

.

Name change to Puddy Dick

big baby · 08-04-2016, 04:32 PM

bb Laff

sral · 08-05-2016, 05:03 AM

puddy dick already been reserved by Lil Witty FYI

Witty · 08-05-2016, 08:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL

puddy dick already been reserved by Lil Witty FYI

Confirmed.

Witty · 08-05-2016, 08:48 AM

Also, this was enjoyable.

It was not good...not good at all.

But I laughed.

Thryjoe · 08-05-2016, 07:10 PM

Well... you faggots obviously don't know how to give feedback. But I don't give a shit about the hate you say, you guys couldn't rap any better, the only reason you all get "dope shit" from others is because you know one another.

Y'all get two fingers and two hands from me, goodbye ya puddy dick riders!

Witty · 08-05-2016, 07:46 PM

First of all, you didn't rap anything.

Secondly, everybody who commented itt is better at writing than you.

Goodbye my friend, we barely knew ye.

Dope girl · 08-07-2016, 10:04 PM

Next think or creative topic with lyrics
mayb you'll get respect

weak verse

Geno · 08-08-2016, 08:19 AM

Yo. This aint a verse and it aint a song. Poem? Chuckled during thd contdnt matter hear and ther. Stay around and learn man

08-03-2016, 01:04 PM	#1
Thryjoe Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 2 Rep Power: 0	Kill Yourself-ThryJoe Hey, first verse on this site. Been rapping since April of 2015. Friends call me Thry, not Joe. Haha, hope to look around some here. (Btw, this isn't always my style, just trying something new.) Why you giving up? Why you hurting now? Just kill yourself, It'll keep the worry out You been pulled through this for a long time, like an utter's cow Your butterflies are fluttering around, what'd you eat with your gutter's chow? Why you giving up? Why you starting to doubt? Just kill yourself, It'll keep the worry out You ain't used to this, he just rapped you down, gave you an uber dis, what you gonna do now? Throw up on the ground, keep the animals out, go berserk and scream and shout, "hey! ow!" Oops you just started a fight... Why you giving up? Why you killing now? Just kill yourself instead, It'll keep the worry out Oh no, you just jabbed him in the leg with a popsicle stick, he's on the floor with a pencil full of lead He shoves it in your ass, what an embarrassment, the whole crowd starts to laugh, stabs you in your calf Why you giving up? Why you hurting now? Just kill yourself, It'll keep the worry out Went home with a bloody leg, mom said "what's with this, you piece of funny shit?! You been out with them girls, eh? motherfucker, you got a puddy dick!" even ma's got you lonely, bitch Why you giving up? Why you depressing now? Just kill yourself, It'll keep the worry out.

08-03-2016, 03:45 PM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	I honestly don't think anyone's ever called you Thry. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

08-03-2016, 04:21 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Its only his lisp __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

08-04-2016, 11:13 AM	#4
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08-05-2016, 05:03 AM	#8
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	puddy dick already been reserved by Lil Witty FYI __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

08-05-2016, 08:48 AM	#10
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Also, this was enjoyable. It was not good...not good at all. But I laughed. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

08-05-2016, 07:10 PM	#11
Thryjoe Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 2 Rep Power: 0	Well... you faggots obviously don't know how to give feedback. But I don't give a shit about the hate you say, you guys couldn't rap any better, the only reason you all get "dope shit" from others is because you know one another. Y'all get two fingers and two hands from me, goodbye ya puddy dick riders!

08-05-2016, 07:46 PM	#12
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	First of all, you didn't rap anything. Secondly, everybody who commented itt is better at writing than you. Goodbye my friend, we barely knew ye. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

08-07-2016, 10:04 PM	#13
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Next think or creative topic with lyrics mayb you'll get respect weak verse

08-08-2016, 08:19 AM	#14
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Yo. This aint a verse and it aint a song. Poem? Chuckled during thd contdnt matter hear and ther. Stay around and learn man __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*