On The Real Yall were Right..I Took Heed.. This Any Better? Me at my humblest

Quarter O · 07-15-2016, 07:59 AM

I'm on point no rounding to the nearest hundred
Benjis - find me near a hundred in retros like Dear Summer
While shorty got her bareskin toughened
She so a head of the game sum need to get their head gear adjusted
Knock ya self out I'm in my boxing ring, tap jaws in boxer range
Meaning she's in my boxers, Hanes
You lames buying lobsters steaks with a claw in face.
We just smoke ...she vents like crawl spaces
.......you can't sign up to what we par-take in
Pussy ass mouth cover all holes like golf ranges
Tiger. She can't get nuff of the wood call park rangers
Good times after dark. Later reported neighbors
Courvoisier imported in crates
In portions I take. In liquor stores somewhat of an important face
Who you know drinks listening to NPR
Take shotguns like CPR out of state in rented cars
Gone for the weekend no logical reason
But to see skins like its a tropical season
Bring that out of town energy back to the city
Where the bitches act bougie with no back or some titties
Local bar tipsy, back to back like I'm Drizzy
She got a tat of the city on her back I'm like can we
Road map outta here for a quickie?
Come back when we 50, sit back - we a bit weak
I like to business trip, mind your business don't trip
In a Dodge Magnum, I pull out.... So quick
No complaints cuz I, keep a dame that's fine
Don't need a rock to pitch, to show the game is Mine.

sral · 07-15-2016, 08:53 AM

Gone for the weekend no logical reason
But to see skins like its a tropical season

that shit type dope

business trip was nice too, felt the second half a lot more than the first infact

stay up bruh

keep that pen moving!

Witty · 07-15-2016, 06:06 PM

Yeah this was better...still a few places where literally all you need to do is drop a syllable or two and it would be much smoother. Cool tho.

07-15-2016, 07:59 AM	#1
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	On The Real Yall were Right..I Took Heed.. This Any Better? Me at my humblest I'm on point no rounding to the nearest hundred Benjis - find me near a hundred in retros like Dear Summer While shorty got her bareskin toughened She so a head of the game sum need to get their head gear adjusted Knock ya self out I'm in my boxing ring, tap jaws in boxer range Meaning she's in my boxers, Hanes You lames buying lobsters steaks with a claw in face. We just smoke ...she vents like crawl spaces .......you can't sign up to what we par-take in Pussy ass mouth cover all holes like golf ranges Tiger. She can't get nuff of the wood call park rangers Good times after dark. Later reported neighbors Courvoisier imported in crates In portions I take. In liquor stores somewhat of an important face Who you know drinks listening to NPR Take shotguns like CPR out of state in rented cars Gone for the weekend no logical reason But to see skins like its a tropical season Bring that out of town energy back to the city Where the bitches act bougie with no back or some titties Local bar tipsy, back to back like I'm Drizzy She got a tat of the city on her back I'm like can we Road map outta here for a quickie? Come back when we 50, sit back - we a bit weak I like to business trip, mind your business don't trip In a Dodge Magnum, I pull out.... So quick No complaints cuz I, keep a dame that's fine Don't need a rock to pitch, to show the game is Mine. Last edited by Quarter O; 07-28-2016 at 12:07 AM.

07-15-2016, 08:53 AM	#2
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07-15-2016, 06:06 PM	#3
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Yeah this was better...still a few places where literally all you need to do is drop a syllable or two and it would be much smoother. Cool tho. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.