my boy's recent track

FLOOR LINED · 06-10-2016, 09:47 PM

the vocals weren't recorded great, but check it:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vk8j...ature=youtu.be

lmk what u think.

Thats my boy Kalipso on the vocals.

PancakeBrah · 06-10-2016, 11:53 PM

That's your boy Kalipso?

The Dead Poet · 06-10-2016, 11:54 PM

he's got a decent flow. lyrics are meh on the cheesy and simple side. but overall not too bad.

FLOOR LINED · 06-11-2016, 01:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

That's your boy Kalipso?

yeah

my brother

PancakeBrah · 06-11-2016, 07:53 AM

Nice.

FLOOR LINED · 06-12-2016, 03:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

Nice.

ty -- I like his chorus/bridge lines better than the main verses. He was always good at those... but I think the recording/effects helped that & the main verses were recorded on a shit system.

Finnydot · 06-12-2016, 05:14 PM

Sounds like hes new to rapping. Had a hard time pytting his words together so it was crispy and got jumbled sometimes with the flow thinking it was cool but it was all rushed. Like, the beat was too fast for him.

PancakeBrah · 06-12-2016, 05:47 PM

He's like a much better infinity the relic.

Witty · 06-12-2016, 06:59 PM

Lmao

Finnydot · 06-13-2016, 03:02 AM

lol

I wasn't even trying to compare myself to this dude. But okay.

You just gotta throw some dirt on someone you don't even know?

FLOOR LINED · 06-13-2016, 08:53 AM

Speak for yourself, and I'll speak for others.
Being self-centered, and taking no blame.
K1 has been rappin for centuries, since before our existence.
Just blame me, and I promise we can exist in fluctuation and symmetry...
but please don't quote me and expect for me to be surprised by my mistakes in grammar or skills...
because while I exceed your vocabulary... I am still shit, to me.

In honesty, I understand your point.
But, don't dish out... if you are unable to receive.

oats · 06-13-2016, 11:12 AM

Oh he's able to receive all right.

Finnydot · 06-13-2016, 02:49 PM

I wasn't talking shit. I was trying to be constructive.

If i walked in here saying he was complete shit then i might understand.

Trust me, I've heard so much worse over the years. I definitely know how to take criticism.

06-10-2016, 09:47 PM	#1
FLOOR LINED Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 40 Rep Power: 0	my boy's recent track the vocals weren't recorded great, but check it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vk8j...ature=youtu.be lmk what u think. Thats my boy Kalipso on the vocals. __________________ TURN IT UP TO ELEVEN.

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The Dead Poet Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 1,138 Rep Power: 22468539	he's got a decent flow. lyrics are meh on the cheesy and simple side. but overall not too bad. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/rafael-jesus-martinez

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06-12-2016, 05:47 PM	#8
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06-12-2016, 05:14 PM	#7
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	Sounds like hes new to rapping. Had a hard time pytting his words together so it was crispy and got jumbled sometimes with the flow thinking it was cool but it was all rushed. Like, the beat was too fast for him.

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06-13-2016, 03:02 AM	#10
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	lol I wasn't even trying to compare myself to this dude. But okay. You just gotta throw some dirt on someone you don't even know?

06-13-2016, 08:53 AM	#11
FLOOR LINED Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 40 Rep Power: 0	Speak for yourself, and I'll speak for others. Being self-centered, and taking no blame. K1 has been rappin for centuries, since before our existence. Just blame me, and I promise we can exist in fluctuation and symmetry... but please don't quote me and expect for me to be surprised by my mistakes in grammar or skills... because while I exceed your vocabulary... I am still shit, to me. In honesty, I understand your point. But, don't dish out... if you are unable to receive. __________________ TURN IT UP TO ELEVEN. Last edited by FLOOR LINED; 06-13-2016 at 08:56 AM.

06-13-2016, 11:12 AM	#12
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06-13-2016, 02:49 PM	#13
Finnydot Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 2,052 Champed - Beat Battle I Rep Power: 10457441	I wasn't talking shit. I was trying to be constructive. If i walked in here saying he was complete shit then i might understand. Trust me, I've heard so much worse over the years. I definitely know how to take criticism.