Strange 5-3 vs Wanderer 5-4 - STRANGE WINS

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NBL Season 9


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@Strange @Wanderer

[King]

yyyup

12?

[Wanderer]

In bro, 12's cool

[Wanderer]

Type to pretend u got depth but regarding intelligence u the weakest sort
uppercut the closest you'll come. Them knuckles to ya chin'll make you look deep in thought
6 inch blade put u outta ya misery. Ur so broke, it's a tragic statement
but u ain't gotta worry bout numbers when I swipe, that's contactless payment
Trust I won't spare a bullet for this cross dressin fag seeking attention
depends on the Clip whether ya Wig stays in place or not & I ain't talkin bout ya hair extensions
Ur an emotional faggot, chick called time, She was at her limit
& for you spending some time Apartment you'd prolly try burn down hers with her in it
U don't comprende. think you stand a chance? get ya head blown
glock sights on ya.. It goes off to ensure u get the message like a text tone

[King]

Trash wording, concepts all reach. Everything u throw is a miss
"Wanderer" Lol Thats fitting, cuz we can never tell where ur goin w/ shit
Life's torture for a broke virgin coward,.Eat a bullet n save urself now,
Ironic he wan' a bitch but Wan'a bitch...1 more reason to take urself out
U stretch ur wording, over-do concepts. Bitch work on revisin'
Of course he cant connect, Wand belaborin' a line like he works for verizon
U 1 trick phony. Last battle u led then started to trail n collapse
Too stale w/ ur rap, u cant survive a Habitat when ur styles failed to adapt
The league is poppin', the top comps here to see who's the sickest
So it sucks dude is in this, only thing the top tier'll lose against u is interest

[SHECK WES]

Type to pretend u got depth but regarding intelligence u the weakest sort
uppercut the closest you'll come. Them knuckles to ya chin'll make you look deep in thought
alright
6 inch blade put u outta ya misery. Ur so broke, it's a tragic statement
but u ain't gotta worry bout numbers when I swipe, that's contactless payment
didnt like this, read really weird
Trust I won't spare a bullet for this cross dressin fag seeking attention
depends on the Clip whether ya Wig stays in place or not & I ain't talkin bout ya hair extensions
didnt hush or someone have one of these last week? Wasn't feelin the flip, too wordy
Ur an emotional faggot, chick called time, She was at her limit
& for you spending some time Apartment you'd prolly try burn down hers with her in it
ok at best, setup was lazy and if different would have made this a better bar
U don't comprende. think you stand a chance? get ya head blown
glock sights on ya.. It goes off to ensure u get the message like a text tone
light but ill give you this


Vs



Default
Trash wording, concepts all reach. Everything u throw is a miss
"Wanderer" Lol Thats fitting, cuz we can never tell where ur goin w/ shit
lol ok
Life's torture for a broke virgin coward,.Eat a bullet n save urself now,
Ironic he wan' a bitch but Wan'a bitch...1 more reason to take urself out
fuck no lmao
U stretch ur wording, over-do concepts. Bitch work on revisin'
Of course he cant connect, Wand belaborin' a line like he works for verizon
bell uh borin? Idk I don't get it
U 1 trick phony. Last battle u led then started to trail n collapse
Too stale w/ ur rap, u cant survive a Habitat when ur styles failed to adapt
alright cool
The league is poppin', the top comps here to see who's the sickest
So it sucks dude is in this, only thing the top tier'll lose against u is interest
ok I liked it
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huh?

Decent battle, all I really liked from wanderer was the opener. Strange had the opener, habitat, and top tier. Wanderer slipped this one with some weird wording and awky setups IMO.

Vote Strange

[Aero]

W:

Type to pretend u got depth but regarding intelligence u the weakest sort
uppercut the closest you'll come. Them knuckles to ya chin'll make you look deep in thought
lol ok ok, ok
6 inch blade put u outta ya misery. Ur so broke, it's a tragic statement
but u ain't gotta worry bout numbers when I swipe, that's contactless payment
I like the concept, good job..
Trust I won't spare a bullet for this cross dressin fag seeking attention
depends on the Clip whether ya Wig stays in place or not & I ain't talkin bout ya hair extensions
ahhhh nahh man Hush just had a clip wig line
Ur an emotional faggot, chick called time, She was at her limit
& for you spending some time Apartment you'd prolly try burn down hers with her in it
lol no, almost but needed way better wording
U don't comprende. think you stand a chance? get ya head blown
glock sights on ya.. It goes off to ensure u get the message like a text tone
aiiiiight circa 2008

I liked the verse, good concepts, cleaner wording and it's dope


S:

Trash wording, concepts all reach. Everything u throw is a miss
"Wanderer" Lol Thats fitting, cuz we can never tell where ur goin w/ shit
lol ok
Life's torture for a broke virgin coward,.Eat a bullet n save urself now,
Ironic he wan' a bitch but Wan'a bitch...1 more reason to take urself out
nah
U stretch ur wording, over-do concepts. Bitch work on revisin'
Of course he cant connect, Wand belaborin' a line like he works for verizon
no
U 1 trick phony. Last battle u led then started to trail n collapse
Too stale w/ ur rap, u cant survive a Habitat when ur styles failed to adapt
cool personal but predictable
The league is poppin', the top comps here to see who's the sickest
So it sucks dude is in this, only thing the top tier'll lose against u is interest
nah, nope 2005 ish

not feeling it here although I do like that you directed your bars at him and not being overly general



wanderer had the more enjoyable verse and concepts. Strange should've been a bit less restricted.

Cool battle


V: Wanderer

[Tic]

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Type to pretend u got depth but regarding intelligence u the weakest sort
uppercut the closest you'll come. Them knuckles to ya chin'll make you look deep in thought
Nice.
6 inch blade put u outta ya misery. Ur so broke, it's a tragic statement
but u ain't gotta worry bout numbers when I swipe, that's contactless payment
Nice.
Trust I won't spare a bullet for this cross dressin fag seeking attention
depends on the Clip whether ya Wig stays in place or not & I ain't talkin bout ya hair extensions
Not feeling.
Ur an emotional faggot, chick called time, She was at her limit
& for you spending some time Apartment you'd prolly try burn down hers with her in it
I like this.
U don't comprende. think you stand a chance? get ya head blown
glock sights on ya.. It goes off to ensure u get the message like a text tone
Not feeling this.

Originally Posted by Strange

Trash wording, concepts all reach. Everything u throw is a miss
"Wanderer" Lol Thats fitting, cuz we can never tell where ur goin w/ shit
Nice.
Life's torture for a broke virgin coward,.Eat a bullet n save urself now,
Ironic he wan' a bitch but Wan'a bitch...1 more reason to take urself out
Nah.
U stretch ur wording, over-do concepts. Bitch work on revisin'
Of course he cant connect, Wand belaborin' a line like he works for verizon
Nice.
U 1 trick phony. Last battle u led then started to trail n collapse
Too stale w/ ur rap, u cant survive a Habitat when ur styles failed to adapt
Nice.
The league is poppin', the top comps here to see who's the sickest
So it sucks dude is in this, only thing the top tier'll lose against u is interest
Nah.

This is close. Wanderer had a few nice lines that connected, then he had a few misses. Strange also had some nice lines & misses. I have to edge this to Strange because of the stronger wording and slightly harder hits. Man this was close though and could go either way. Nice battle for only 10 lines.

[SuckaFreeCashier]

@Wanderer
Type to pretend u got depth but regarding intelligence u the weakest sort
uppercut the closest you'll come. Them knuckles to ya chin'll make you look deep in thought
Eh this was alright. I don't like the setup tho
6 inch blade put u outta ya misery. Ur so broke, it's a tragic statement
but u ain't gotta worry bout numbers when I swipe, that's contactless payment
didn't like this much. Felt really contrived
Trust I won't spare a bullet for this cross dressin fag seeking attention
depends on the Clip whether ya Wig stays in place or not & I ain't talkin bout ya hair extensions
ok
Ur an emotional faggot, chick called time, She was at her limit
& for you spending some time Apartment you'd prolly try burn down hers with her in it
what is happening in this couplet
U don't comprende. think you stand a chance? get ya head blown
pause
glock sights on ya.. It goes off to ensure u get the message like a text tone
ok



@Strange
Trash wording, concepts all reach. Everything u throw is a miss
"Wanderer" Lol Thats fitting, cuz we can never tell where ur goin w/ shit
lmao on point based on the verse i just read
Life's torture for a broke virgin coward,.Eat a bullet n save urself now,
Ironic he wan' a bitch but Wan'a bitch...1 more reason to take urself out
eh felt like this was a lil weak.
U stretch ur wording, over-do concepts. Bitch work on revisin'
Of course he cant connect, Wand belaborin' a line like he works for verizon
lol solid
U 1 trick phony. Last battle u led then started to trail n collapse
Too stale w/ ur rap, u cant survive a Habitat when ur styles failed to adapt
ooook liked this
The league is poppin', the top comps here to see who's the sickest
So it sucks dude is in this, only thing the top tier'll lose against u is interest
decent closer


I didn't think strange was terribly strong, but he completely outclassed wanderer in this one.

V/ Strange

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Type to pretend u got depth but regarding intelligence u the weakest sort
uppercut the closest you'll come. Them knuckles to ya chin'll make you look deep in thought
punch is fire but good god that setup is soooo wack
6 inch blade put u outta ya misery. Ur so broke, it's a tragic statement
but u ain't gotta worry bout numbers when I swipe, that's contactless payment
this aight..creative
Trust I won't spare a bullet for this cross dressin fag seeking attention
depends on the Clip whether ya Wig stays in place or not & I ain't talkin bout ya hair extensions
ehh I kinda just said this homie but I know how it be, sometimes shit is coincidence or sub concious, this still hurt by wording
Ur an emotional faggot, chick called time, She was at her limit
& for you spending some time Apartment you'd prolly try burn down hers with her in it
eh wp is aight but the wording didnt work in this for me
U don't comprende. think you stand a chance? get ya head blown
glock sights on ya.. It goes off to ensure u get the message like a text tone
fire

Originally Posted by Strange

Trash wording, concepts all reach. Everything u throw is a miss
"Wanderer" Lol Thats fitting, cuz we can never tell where ur goin w/ shit
nice
Life's torture for a broke virgin coward,.Eat a bullet n save urself now,
Ironic he wan' a bitch but Wan'a bitch...1 more reason to take urself out
aight
U stretch ur wording, over-do concepts. Bitch work on revisin'
Of course he cant connect, Wand belaborin' a line like he works for verizon
ehh almost. not a bad verse so far
U 1 trick phony. Last battle u led then started to trail n collapse
Too stale w/ ur rap, u cant survive a Habitat when ur styles failed to adapt
nah
The league is poppin', the top comps here to see who's the sickest
So it sucks dude is in this, only thing the top tier'll lose against u is interest
ok cool

Strange got this. More consistent

[Kenny the OG]

Wanderer had an ok opener and the apartment bar was a decent enough attempt even tho the wp doesn't really work both ways. The extension/wig concept was ehhhh at best.

Strange opened up with a funny punch that connected well imo. The following bar was cool too. The habitat personal was worded nicely and hit.

Vote - strange

[jilti]

Type to pretend u got depth but regarding intelligence u the weakest sort
uppercut the closest you'll come. Them knuckles to ya chin'll make you look deep in thought
^^dope
6 inch blade put u outta ya misery. Ur so broke, it's a tragic statement
but u ain't gotta worry bout numbers when I swipe, that's contactless payment
^ok
Trust I won't spare a bullet for this cross dressin fag seeking attention
depends on the Clip whether ya Wig stays in place or not & I ain't talkin bout ya hair extensions
^sorta resembles a lisp bar
Ur an emotional faggot, chick called time, She was at her limit
& for you spending some time Apartment you'd prolly try burn down hers with her in it
^mighta seen an apartment wordplay before, dont remember. But this is cool
U don't comprende. think you stand a chance? get ya head blown
glock sights on ya.. It goes off to ensure u get the message like a text tone
^liked it

Vs.

Trash wording, concepts all reach. Everything u throw is a miss
"Wanderer" Lol Thats fitting, cuz we can never tell where ur goin w/ shit
^dope
Life's torture for a broke virgin coward,.Eat a bullet n save urself now,
Ironic he wan' a bitch but Wan'a bitch...1 more reason to take urself out
^blah
U stretch ur wording, over-do concepts. Bitch work on revisin'
Of course he cant connect, Wand belaborin' a line like he works for verizon
^ok
U 1 trick phony. Last battle u led then started to trail n collapse
Too stale w/ ur rap, u cant survive a Habitat when ur styles failed to adapt
^landed
The league is poppin', the top comps here to see who's the sickest
So it sucks dude is in this, only thing the top tier'll lose against u is interest
^nice


got strange with the edge but tbh wanderer is one my favs to read every week