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Old 04-04-2016, 06:10 AM   #1
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Old 04-04-2016, 03:36 PM   #2
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Old 04-05-2016, 07:17 AM   #3
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Old 04-07-2016, 09:49 PM   #4
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With me you don't want a run-in, I'm alpha & you act like a woman
How u 'pose to cell a tough image when u take selfies laying flat on ya stomach
Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong
I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long
Twin beams @his chin piece, fag dodgin side 2 side like he's cotto
when I draw 2 arms on this fruits face & put 2 dots on em like the netcees logo
Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass
The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash
After I popped nothin was the same. post traumatic damagin cats
You'll b so stressed from seein my 4-5, the phrase "views from the 6" causes panic attacks
we'll work together, ill take charge of this bloodbath, u just pitch in
slit your wrist in a tub of water then ill plug up a microwave & throw that bitch in
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Old 04-07-2016, 11:31 PM   #5
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Old 04-08-2016, 12:41 AM   #6
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Old 04-08-2016, 06:29 PM   #7
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Why the fuck are you here?

to post glamor selfies n shirtless pics wherever you can, cunt?
The way you supplied those suspect images we can tell you're on a manhunt
Can't front. Your generics are expired bro. The 05 swag been on
That ancient language reviving the dead is barely text. It's the fucking Necronomicon
No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck
Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up
I'll swing aimlessly n still knock his block off. Leaving Kenny plastered bruh
He wanna go Live? My Strahan'll Ripa bitch head off like a morning show massacre
Fuck him. I'll get his girlie next, could give a fuck bout being decent
I'll leave Ken Doll unmoving and wrapped in plastic. Call it the Barbie treatment
I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother
Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer
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Old 04-09-2016, 08:57 AM   #8
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With me you don't want a run-in, I'm alpha & you act like a woman
How u 'pose to cell a tough image when u take selfies laying flat on ya stomach
mmm idk I'm not Feelin this
Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong
I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long
decent here
Twin beams @his chin piece, fag dodgin side 2 side like he's cotto
when I draw 2 arms on this fruits face & put 2 dots on em like the netcees logo
damn I thought you were going a complete different route based on that setup, the wording and execution in the second line was bad
Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass
The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash
bud light wp played but haven't seen lime a rita, cool flip
After I popped nothin was the same. post traumatic damagin cats
You'll b so stressed from seein my 4-5, the phrase "views from the 6" causes panic attacks
ok at best
we'll work together, ill take charge of this bloodbath, u just pitch in
slit your wrist in a tub of water then ill plug up a microwave & throw that bitch in
horrorcore type bar, no concept here really.

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Why the fuck are you here?

to post glamor selfies n shirtless pics wherever you can, cunt?
The way you supplied those suspect images we can tell you're on a manhunt
lol ok
Can't front. Your generics are expired bro. The 05 swag been on
That ancient language reviving the dead is barely text. It's the fucking Necronomicon
eh decent
No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck
Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up
decent nothing special could have done more with the k camp ref
I'll swing aimlessly n still knock his block off. Leaving Kenny plastered bruh
He wanna go Live? My Strahan'll Ripa bitch head off like a morning show massacre
lol stray hand smh
Fuck him. I'll get his girlie next, could give a fuck bout being decent
I'll leave Ken Doll unmoving and wrapped in plastic. Call it the Barbie treatment
this was cool
I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother
Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer
alright


Damn idk maybe it's just me but I wasn't really feelin kens verse this week. He had a few concepts but I just wasn't feeling the connections or the way he did them tbh. Sharp had a decent verse, his opener and last 2 were cool, some shit I just shook my head at like shrahan lol.

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Old 04-09-2016, 11:56 AM   #9
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@Kenny the OG

With me you don't want a run-in, I'm alpha & you act like a woman
How u 'pose to cell a tough image when u take selfies laying flat on ya stomach
Get him!!! This was a little light for an opener but made me chuckle
Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong
I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long
This was a cool concept, but the wording in the punch hurt you. Just take out decomposing and it's a much better punch imo. Wordiness rarely makes a punchline better
Twin beams @his chin piece, fag dodgin side 2 side like he's cotto
when I draw 2 arms on this fruits face & put 2 dots on em like the netcees logo
I've read <10 battles on this site and i already know that concept is played out lol
Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass
The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash
My apologies to kenny, i fucked up this one. Wordplay works perfectly well
After I popped nothin was the same. post traumatic damagin cats
You'll b so stressed from seein my 4-5, the phrase "views from the 6" causes panic attacks
I see what you were going for, it just didn't hit for me.
we'll work together, ill take charge of this bloodbath, u just pitch in
slit your wrist in a tub of water then ill plug up a microwave & throw that bitch in
horrorcore bars are something he gotta deal with.


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to post glamor selfies n shirtless pics wherever you can, cunt?
The way you supplied those suspect images we can tell you're on a manhunt
hahaha this was dope, clever wordplay
Can't front. Your generics are expired bro. The 05 swag been on
That ancient language reviving the dead is barely text. It's the fucking Necronomicon
ehh, not really hitting for me
No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck
Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up
wooo this was dope
I'll swing aimlessly n still knock his block off. Leaving Kenny plastered bruh
He wanna go Live? My Strahan'll Ripa bitch head off like a morning show massacre
worplay unique af, really feeling this
Fuck him. I'll get his girlie next, could give a fuck bout being decent
I'll leave Ken Doll unmoving and wrapped in plastic. Call it the Barbie treatment
Didn't really hit for me, punch was kinda expected once you got to ken doll
I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother
Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer
Topical, but was solid.


Not too much else to say here, thought sharp got it clearly.

V/ Sharp

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Old 04-09-2016, 05:06 PM   #10
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Thought Sharp took this pretty convincingly, Ken just didn't have the firepower and some played concepts too. Sharp had that Strahan'll bar, K Camp, at the buzzer and manhunt and I thought those four were enough by themselves to win this battle. Ken had some good ideas but as well as with Cashier, the lime-a-rita line didn't hit for me because of the mispronunciation, it was an alright concept though. I also liked the logo line but not much else, but good verses fellas my vote goes to Sharp.

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Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong
I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long
Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass
The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash


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No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck
Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up
Fuck him. I'll get his girlie next, could give a fuck bout being decent
I'll leave Ken Doll unmoving and wrapped in plastic. Call it the Barbie treatment
I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother
Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer



V/sharp, this was a nice battle both had some dope shit tbh....kennys lime a rita bar was flames an LOTB imo... but sharp had 1 more dope bar imo to take an unc line was firee... enjoyed this read from yah'll props.
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Ascent, Lime a Rita

Manhunt not bad, K camp, UNC

Sharp didnt have too many misses, cool battle here but Kenny's fruit line hurt his verse as its been done back it was first up, closer too bland for me..
Sharps only line I didn't like at all was the necronomicon line... otherwise cool verse.

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Kenny

Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong
I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long

Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass
The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash


Sharp

No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck
Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up
I'll swing aimlessly n still knock his block off. Leaving Kenny plastered bruh
He wanna go Live? My Strahan'll Ripa bitch head off like a morning show massacre

I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother
Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer


Those were the ones from each that I really felt. Overall, I felt Sharp's wording was more crisp and concise and helped his punches more. His non-standouts were still better imo.

v/ Sharp
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