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Certified Mother’s Boy
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![]() NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Kenny the OG @Sharp |
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tutankhamen
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Check check. Ima try to have 12 up by tonight.
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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Yo
I'll match it by Thursday |
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tutankhamen
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With me you don't want a run-in, I'm alpha & you act like a woman
How u 'pose to cell a tough image when u take selfies laying flat on ya stomach Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long Twin beams @his chin piece, fag dodgin side 2 side like he's cotto when I draw 2 arms on this fruits face & put 2 dots on em like the netcees logo Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash After I popped nothin was the same. post traumatic damagin cats You'll b so stressed from seein my 4-5, the phrase "views from the 6" causes panic attacks we'll work together, ill take charge of this bloodbath, u just pitch in slit your wrist in a tub of water then ill plug up a microwave & throw that bitch in
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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Ext port favor
I'll have it up tomorrow afternoon |
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tutankhamen
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Aight
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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Why the fuck are you here?
to post glamor selfies n shirtless pics wherever you can, cunt? The way you supplied those suspect images we can tell you're on a manhunt Can't front. Your generics are expired bro. The 05 swag been on That ancient language reviving the dead is barely text. It's the fucking Necronomicon No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up I'll swing aimlessly n still knock his block off. Leaving Kenny plastered bruh He wanna go Live? My Strahan'll Ripa bitch head off like a morning show massacre Fuck him. I'll get his girlie next, could give a fuck bout being decent I'll leave Ken Doll unmoving and wrapped in plastic. Call it the Barbie treatment I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer |
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With me you don't want a run-in, I'm alpha & you act like a woman
How u 'pose to cell a tough image when u take selfies laying flat on ya stomach mmm idk I'm not Feelin this Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long decent here Twin beams @his chin piece, fag dodgin side 2 side like he's cotto when I draw 2 arms on this fruits face & put 2 dots on em like the netcees logo damn I thought you were going a complete different route based on that setup, the wording and execution in the second line was bad Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash bud light wp played but haven't seen lime a rita, cool flip After I popped nothin was the same. post traumatic damagin cats You'll b so stressed from seein my 4-5, the phrase "views from the 6" causes panic attacks ok at best we'll work together, ill take charge of this bloodbath, u just pitch in slit your wrist in a tub of water then ill plug up a microwave & throw that bitch in horrorcore type bar, no concept here really. Vs Why the fuck are you here? to post glamor selfies n shirtless pics wherever you can, cunt? The way you supplied those suspect images we can tell you're on a manhunt lol ok Can't front. Your generics are expired bro. The 05 swag been on That ancient language reviving the dead is barely text. It's the fucking Necronomicon eh decent No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up decent nothing special could have done more with the k camp ref I'll swing aimlessly n still knock his block off. Leaving Kenny plastered bruh He wanna go Live? My Strahan'll Ripa bitch head off like a morning show massacre lol stray hand smh Fuck him. I'll get his girlie next, could give a fuck bout being decent I'll leave Ken Doll unmoving and wrapped in plastic. Call it the Barbie treatment this was cool I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer alright Damn idk maybe it's just me but I wasn't really feelin kens verse this week. He had a few concepts but I just wasn't feeling the connections or the way he did them tbh. Sharp had a decent verse, his opener and last 2 were cool, some shit I just shook my head at like shrahan lol. Vote Sharp |
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@Kenny the OG
With me you don't want a run-in, I'm alpha & you act like a woman How u 'pose to cell a tough image when u take selfies laying flat on ya stomach Get him!!! This was a little light for an opener but made me chuckle Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long This was a cool concept, but the wording in the punch hurt you. Just take out decomposing and it's a much better punch imo. Wordiness rarely makes a punchline better Twin beams @his chin piece, fag dodgin side 2 side like he's cotto when I draw 2 arms on this fruits face & put 2 dots on em like the netcees logo I've read <10 battles on this site and i already know that concept is played out lol Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash My apologies to kenny, i fucked up this one. Wordplay works perfectly well After I popped nothin was the same. post traumatic damagin cats You'll b so stressed from seein my 4-5, the phrase "views from the 6" causes panic attacks I see what you were going for, it just didn't hit for me. we'll work together, ill take charge of this bloodbath, u just pitch in slit your wrist in a tub of water then ill plug up a microwave & throw that bitch in horrorcore bars are something he gotta deal with. @Sharp to post glamor selfies n shirtless pics wherever you can, cunt? The way you supplied those suspect images we can tell you're on a manhunt hahaha this was dope, clever wordplay Can't front. Your generics are expired bro. The 05 swag been on That ancient language reviving the dead is barely text. It's the fucking Necronomicon ehh, not really hitting for me No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up wooo this was dope I'll swing aimlessly n still knock his block off. Leaving Kenny plastered bruh He wanna go Live? My Strahan'll Ripa bitch head off like a morning show massacre worplay unique af, really feeling this Fuck him. I'll get his girlie next, could give a fuck bout being decent I'll leave Ken Doll unmoving and wrapped in plastic. Call it the Barbie treatment Didn't really hit for me, punch was kinda expected once you got to ken doll I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer Topical, but was solid. Not too much else to say here, thought sharp got it clearly. V/ Sharp Last edited by SuckaFreeCashier; 04-09-2016 at 11:55 PM. |
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low tide in serotonin bay
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Thought Sharp took this pretty convincingly, Ken just didn't have the firepower and some played concepts too. Sharp had that Strahan'll bar, K Camp, at the buzzer and manhunt and I thought those four were enough by themselves to win this battle. Ken had some good ideas but as well as with Cashier, the lime-a-rita line didn't hit for me because of the mispronunciation, it was an alright concept though. I also liked the logo line but not much else, but good verses fellas my vote goes to Sharp.
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Foreva us, neva them.
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Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong
I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash Vs No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up Fuck him. I'll get his girlie next, could give a fuck bout being decent I'll leave Ken Doll unmoving and wrapped in plastic. Call it the Barbie treatment I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer V/sharp, this was a nice battle both had some dope shit tbh....kennys lime a rita bar was flames an LOTB imo... but sharp had 1 more dope bar imo to take an unc line was firee... enjoyed this read from yah'll props. |
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Scream
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Ascent, Lime a Rita
Manhunt not bad, K camp, UNC Sharp didnt have too many misses, cool battle here but Kenny's fruit line hurt his verse as its been done back it was first up, closer too bland for me.. Sharps only line I didn't like at all was the necronomicon line... otherwise cool verse. Vote Sharp |
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Kenny
Fresh off a loss but moving up, ya folding cuz im coming to strong I'm making ascent off a body like I left him decomposing in the sun for to long Everything u drop bud, light.. whole site knows. Believe it it's ass The Lime-A-Rita verse of yours & drink itself into a coma before completing that trash Sharp No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up I'll swing aimlessly n still knock his block off. Leaving Kenny plastered bruh He wanna go Live? My Strahan'll Ripa bitch head off like a morning show massacre I'm the underdog cuz last second writings what I love, brother Don't matter. Dudes'll just bet on you UNC a Philly kid crush you at the buzzer Those were the ones from each that I really felt. Overall, I felt Sharp's wording was more crisp and concise and helped his punches more. His non-standouts were still better imo. v/ Sharp |
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