Week 4: Maximus & Echo vs. Frank & MMLP (FRANK & MMLP WIN BY NOSHOW)

asylum · 03-22-2016, 06:13 AM

Season 6

Verses are due SATURDAY 3/26 11:59 PST

Voting ends MONDAY 3/28 11:59 PST

RULE
Pick a story lead from the thread and include the number of the story lead along with your verse.

VERSES MAY NOT EXCEED 64 Lines

Voting on four battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your four votes in the voting thread.

Story Leads: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...811#post574811

Good luck to our participants. @Maximus & @Echo vs. @Frank & @MMLP

Frank · 03-23-2016, 02:53 PM

@MMLP

Pick the story lead and PM me.

I'll show sral how it's really done

Frank · 03-23-2016, 04:03 PM

Quote:

8.He turned the key in the lock and opened the door. To his horror, he saw…

Frank · 03-26-2016, 06:51 PM

@MMLP

Check PM

asylum · 03-27-2016, 10:58 PM

Frank & MMLP
8.He turned the key in the lock and opened the door. To his horror, he saw…

The feet of his mom’s, as he stopped at the door
Seemingly shocked, I was lost in the pause
as her bottle was pouring, my mind was aghast
She wanted the story of the night that I’d had
The silence would last, as I think what to do
whilst hiding the stash, so its hidden from view.
The lips wouldn’t move in her wondering look
I’d shift to the room as I uttered ‘Its done’
Stunning me shook, uncomfortably numb
Dumped in the brook, Her body clumsily crooked, inside the luggage, blugeonedly stuffed
I covered her up in the dustiest rug, covered in soot, soaking up the loveliest blood
She mumbled and gushed, as I shoveled her up with a troublesome look, befuddled and bugged
She discovered my drugs, in one of my books
She flushed it, mistook it for rubbish
I punished her good, until I no longer was on the hook
I was too stubborn to look at how my evil unfolded
cutting her up in the heat of the moment
no real emotion as I start cleaning the knife
I needed to focus on concealing my fright
I was weeping inside and my mind was gone
I needed to hide as the time went on
her lifeless body had never left my sight
my sight was groggy and left me sensitized
But her severed thighs left me mesmerized, rectifying my floppy
I set her dress aside, eyeing her body with sexual intentions
I called over my posse
They answered their cell phones early in the morning like aspiring zombies
Mate "Remember the time, you said you had the hots for my mommy?"
Lip balm on her balmy mouth, he removed her blotchy stockings with awful desire
Nonchalantly, hardly desensitized over her flat lining heartbeat
The director rises, decrepit, fondly, impressed by everbody involved
He calmy calls for the Lars scene, ending it promptly

03-22-2016, 06:13 AM	#1
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	Week 4: Maximus & Echo vs. Frank & MMLP (FRANK & MMLP WIN BY NOSHOW) Season 6 Verses are due SATURDAY 3/26 11:59 PST Voting ends MONDAY 3/28 11:59 PST RULE Pick a story lead from the thread and include the number of the story lead along with your verse. VERSES MAY NOT EXCEED 64 Lines Voting on four battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your four votes in the voting thread. Story Leads: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...811#post574811 Good luck to our participants. @Maximus & @Echo vs. @Frank & @MMLP Last edited by asylum; 03-28-2016 at 04:42 AM.

03-23-2016, 02:53 PM	#2
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	@MMLP Pick the story lead and PM me. I'll show sral how it's really done __________________ *VETWORK*

03-26-2016, 06:51 PM	#4
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	@MMLP Check PM __________________ *VETWORK*

03-27-2016, 10:58 PM	#5
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	Frank & MMLP 8.He turned the key in the lock and opened the door. To his horror, he saw… The feet of his mom’s, as he stopped at the door Seemingly shocked, I was lost in the pause as her bottle was pouring, my mind was aghast She wanted the story of the night that I’d had The silence would last, as I think what to do whilst hiding the stash, so its hidden from view. The lips wouldn’t move in her wondering look I’d shift to the room as I uttered ‘Its done’ Stunning me shook, uncomfortably numb Dumped in the brook, Her body clumsily crooked, inside the luggage, blugeonedly stuffed I covered her up in the dustiest rug, covered in soot, soaking up the loveliest blood She mumbled and gushed, as I shoveled her up with a troublesome look, befuddled and bugged She discovered my drugs, in one of my books She flushed it, mistook it for rubbish I punished her good, until I no longer was on the hook I was too stubborn to look at how my evil unfolded cutting her up in the heat of the moment no real emotion as I start cleaning the knife I needed to focus on concealing my fright I was weeping inside and my mind was gone I needed to hide as the time went on her lifeless body had never left my sight my sight was groggy and left me sensitized But her severed thighs left me mesmerized, rectifying my floppy I set her dress aside, eyeing her body with sexual intentions I called over my posse They answered their cell phones early in the morning like aspiring zombies Mate "Remember the time, you said you had the hots for my mommy?" Lip balm on her balmy mouth, he removed her blotchy stockings with awful desire Nonchalantly, hardly desensitized over her flat lining heartbeat The director rises, decrepit, fondly, impressed by everbody involved He calmy calls for the Lars scene, ending it promptly