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Old 01-05-2016, 02:06 AM   #1
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Old 01-06-2016, 12:33 AM   #2
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Haven't seen you for a while. You delivered the usual dose of braggadocio that you do. Albeit, you differentiate yourself by adding this images of places, and objects, such as rye and cinnamon, so as to give a tangible flavor to your writings.
This time, it seems the rhymes were a tad below your standard. But, it was a fun read. Nice and simple. Thanks.
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Old 01-06-2016, 04:14 AM   #3
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Great job, I love this shit...I could legit read just straight rhymes like this all day and not get bored. I like that it isn't JUST rhymes though, you go off in tangents and come up with unique little ideas and turns of phrase that I probably wouldn't have thought of myself. I like that, one of the things I like seeing is something that makes me think 'I could sit and think for days and not have thought of that particular angle' good job man. Props.
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Old 02-17-2016, 03:14 AM   #4
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Interesting concepts.... good for what it was but seems you've accumulated a little bit of rust during your hiatus.

Still better than most but clearly you have more to give.
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Old 02-25-2016, 01:44 PM   #5
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Kewl beans dood. I want to start traveling. Sounds dope
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Old 03-01-2016, 12:19 PM   #6
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This was a cool verse, I enjoy the paragraphical formed irradical manical sabbatical collapsible rhyme style
I forgot which section it was but I think you said...what are these weapons for...kind of Em esque right there
I just cant put my finger on which song that whole idea came from, either way this was dope altogether and is hard to break apart to dive deeper into
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