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Foreva us, neva them.
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![]() NBL Season 8 Week 3 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Schadenfreude @Muff docked -2 votes for not voting
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DOHpe since 02'
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ion even kno if I feel like doing this but we'll see
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Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople |
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Well drop something Bro, cuz I'm showing.
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Fool prob won't even show..
Complain u're not motivated, regurgitating accomps ya supposed to have done Must be some math I don't recognize son, shit cuz even in yo Prime, u couldn't multiply one. Even proudly said u like BBWs that love & respect ya needs Cept spell check must be broken, ..cuz those hoes KEEP missing that 2nd "B". Nasty ass chasing bitches w/ cow tits & saddle thighs only reason I even Herd u like women's cuz them heifers all belong in a cattle drive. Irrelevant fag hasn't had a thing to offer cept that wack shit out ya head Dead.. swear the last impact u caused was after dropping one ya big bitches out the bed. German nerd, boring us to death w/ the sauce u be serving Determined to put dudes to sleep, don't even have an accent calling u - "ZZZ German". Even tho ammo's expensive, fuck w/ me & take the hardest lost Get carted off, the price is ya life, bitch how could U Nazi the holocaust? ...BODY. |
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u have quite the imagination. :/
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me n cred'll get at you. no football - ull get hit on the play the closest U'll get to a shovel pass is coz its MY turn to start digging ur grave ak negative 2'd me. but when I shoot he knew ud hardly survive u 'thought the Dock would help'. but ull get sent2 another time like marty mcfly ill blackbag n torture u. grab an axe n decide WHEN to give u a chop u wont Faraday Caged'. but when ur arms r lopped off I hope ur resistant 2 shock I pick up game from OG's. u cant walk a mile in these J's YOUR idea of a pick up game is posting niggas up w/ a smile on ur face hes a pillpoppin madman. dnt believe the lies that hes feedin ya last time he took molly she missed school n her family cried to the media u mkin me mad hoe. blood boilin when I unleash aggression itll be like trepanning. but ill put a hole in YOUR skull just to release some pressure
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Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 01-23-2016 at 03:31 AM. |
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schad
Complain u're not motivated, regurgitating accomps ya supposed to have done Must be some math I don't recognize son, shit cuz even in yo Prime, u couldn't multiply one. Even proudly said u like BBWs that love & respect ya needs Cept spell check must be broken, ..cuz those hoes KEEP missing that 2nd "B". Nasty ass chasing bitches w/ cow tits & saddle thighs only reason I even Herd u like women's cuz them heifers all belong in a cattle drive. -----opener was eh, seen it done against prime back in the day, bbw was ehhhh, herd/cattle? No way. Irrelevant fag hasn't had a thing to offer cept that wack shit out ya head Dead.. swear the last impact u caused was after dropping one ya big bitches out the bed. German nerd, boring us to death w/ the sauce u be serving Determined to put dudes to sleep, don't even have an accent calling u - "ZZZ German". Even tho ammo's expensive, fuck w/ me & take the hardest lost Get carted off, the price is ya life, bitch how could U Nazi the holocaust? -----I mean big drop I guess, German line, read it to yourself, notice the redundency of using German twice, what do u mean with that ender? Man, after ya first week I thought u do damage but last two verses have been underwhelming Muff me n cred'll get at you. no football - ull get hit on the play the closest U'll get to a shovel pass is coz its MY turn to start digging ur grave ak negative 2'd me. but when I shoot he knew ud hardly survive u 'thought the Dock would help'. but ull get sent2 another time like marty mcfly ill blackbag n torture u. grab an axe n decide WHEN to give u a chop u wont Faraday Caged'. but when ur arms r lopped off I hope ur resistant 2 shock -----shovel pass was good, so was doc, faraday was eh ok I pick up game from OG's. u cant walk a mile in these J's YOUR idea of a pick up game is posting niggas up w/ a smile on ur face hes a pillpoppin madman. dnt believe the lies that hes feedin ya last time he took molly she missed school n her family cried to the media u mkin me mad hoe. blood boilin when I unleash aggression itll be like trepanning. but ill put a hole in YOUR skull just to release some pressure ---pick up game is played af, same for Molly lol, treppanning? Wtf First half was dope, second half not so much but u had more than enough Vote muff
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....Hakuna Matata....
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Shad
Herd, holocaust maybe Vs Muff Shovel, molly, faraday, mcfly V/muff....he hit hard when he did it...wasn't feeling shad verse really...no offense |
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The Biggest
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impact line, zzz german was almost funny
vs shovel pass i liked, dock shit was nice, faraday was cool too Expected more from both here too. Muff had 3 straight bars that hit tho imo, shad od'ed wit the fat girl then tried german bars bck to bck, nahhh. Vote - muff |
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Scream
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I think schade didnt think muff would show and the verse looked rushed/keyed... things were over worded and I kinda thought zzzz German was ur best...
muff - shovel pass was cool... faraday was ok, doc was ok because sent to another time is a bit too abstract of dissing someone lol.. trepanning could been cool, but ur wording didn't sell me on it.. vote muff |
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Schad
Opener is cool, but a lot of wordiness to get to a pretty straightforward concept. Not saying it was weak, but less would've been more in this case. BBW line was not great Herd line is alright Ok, getting a little overkill on the fat chick jokes ZZ German is a big stretch - and making fun of someone for being German when your username is a German word is not a strong play Nazi line? I did nazi that coming! That's the oldest joke in the book Muff shovel / grave - ok "sent 2 another time" is the diss in this line, which isn't that hard in the end I don't know wtf faraday caged means Ok - pick up game is pretty comical - points for that Molly concept is ok Again - I don't know wtf trepanning is - I guess it's cutting a hole in someone's skull, but who knows that shit? Honestly pretty disappointed by this one and I can't just not vote on it cuz I already wrote all this shit. In the end, Pick Up Game was LOTB for me. I think Schad had a chance if he didn't go so hard on fat girl jokes. A little variety is the spice of life, my dude. Vote -- Muff
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Bags will be avenged
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got muff here
seen schad come way better than this concepts were simple muff had opener, faraday cage was ok, he had enough to take it v/muffy |
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Impact
Holo vs Opener Doc Caged v/ Muff schad, i dunno i think u tried to get way too personal with too little ammo. decent concepts but not enuff variety. Muff ur first 6 were good, last half of verse kinda dropped off for me. pickup game was funny but ive seen it before. good battle tho guys |
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