Contenders Match: Dancake 2-1 vs. Mr. J 5-2 - J VIA NS, OPEN FOR FEED

Adonis · 09-24-2015, 11:55 PM

AOWL Season V, Week 10

SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due
Tuesday at 9 p.m. Pacific/West Coast or Tuesday 11:59 PM Eastern / 6:00 AM Wednesday Central European/London
There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Friday at 4:00 p.m. Western / or Friday 7:00 PM Eastern / 1:00 AM Saturday Central European/London Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

All competitors must vote on THREE battles and post links/ references in the voting thread.

Read the full rules here!

Topic: http://100.best-poems.net/brown-penny.html

William Butler Yeats – Brown Penny

G/Luck

@Mr. J @Dancake

PancakeBrah · 09-25-2015, 12:17 PM

Yessir

Mr. J · 09-30-2015, 01:50 AM

Caught up in a ripple effect I ponder my next conquest
my dreams reflect from the bottom of the pond, progress
the competition needed a gift so I wish em' well..
another transaction into the future what do prisms tell??
go out there young soldier take it to them & give em' hell!!
whose the most worthy maybe x ray vision would help?

The ridges were upon us, our proper print left the peasants in awe
this world is built by one thing, no longer containing the presence of thought
battling among fellow man, pride in hand, with heart unguarded
there's no telling the amounts of people, the innocent lives they slaughtered
a disgrace...
the words stay in my thoughts as I cross into low incoming traffic
the wind pushes me back while I ponder the actions that have happened
with the Captain abandoning base in the middle of a hindering invasion..
I couldn't believe what I have read & was struck by awe, amazement!
thrown into such anxiety, my realization was on a cliffhanger
a legend. about who one is when hunger causes this anger..
all promotion aside, the story ends with such high anticipation
with this thought & change I bear, I wish for a better situation
brown penny, brown penny left over from the weekly comic..
I wish em' well brown penny, I wish em well, with change from the weekly comic...

a brown penny down into the pond, into...your...wishing well...

Adonis · 09-30-2015, 02:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dancake

Yessir

Closing this when I wake up in 5 hours

09-24-2015, 11:55 PM	#1
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Contenders Match: Dancake 2-1 vs. Mr. J 5-2 - J VIA NS, OPEN FOR FEED AOWL Season V, Week 10 SUMMARY OF RULES: Verses are due Tuesday at 9 p.m. Pacific/West Coast or Tuesday 11:59 PM Eastern / 6:00 AM Wednesday Central European/London There are NO extensions. Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words). Votes are due Friday at 4:00 p.m. Western / or Friday 7:00 PM Eastern / 1:00 AM Saturday Central European/London Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week. All competitors must vote on THREE battles and post links/ references in the voting thread. Read the full rules here! Topic: http://100.best-poems.net/brown-penny.html William Butler Yeats – Brown Penny G/Luck @Mr. J @Dancake __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR Last edited by Adonis; 09-30-2015 at 08:41 AM.

09-25-2015, 12:17 PM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Yessir __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

09-30-2015, 01:50 AM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Caught up in a ripple effect I ponder my next conquest my dreams reflect from the bottom of the pond, progress the competition needed a gift so I wish em' well.. another transaction into the future what do prisms tell?? go out there young soldier take it to them & give em' hell!! whose the most worthy maybe x ray vision would help? The ridges were upon us, our proper print left the peasants in awe this world is built by one thing, no longer containing the presence of thought battling among fellow man, pride in hand, with heart unguarded there's no telling the amounts of people, the innocent lives they slaughtered a disgrace... the words stay in my thoughts as I cross into low incoming traffic the wind pushes me back while I ponder the actions that have happened with the Captain abandoning base in the middle of a hindering invasion.. I couldn't believe what I have read & was struck by awe, amazement! thrown into such anxiety, my realization was on a cliffhanger a legend. about who one is when hunger causes this anger.. all promotion aside, the story ends with such high anticipation with this thought & change I bear, I wish for a better situation brown penny, brown penny left over from the weekly comic.. I wish em' well brown penny, I wish em well, with change from the weekly comic... a brown penny down into the pond, into...your...wishing well... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you