German Shepard Herman Lester the Urban Wrestler

Mr. J · 09-15-2015, 02:06 AM

In that moment I was entranced by the melody
this second became hope, & the dance became destiny
losing all regard, while evading any type of sense in me
I proceeded by the minute to make worth in each pressing beat...
it felt so long, but went by so quick..damn...
one moment we were one then we miss hands...
falling into a abyss of forgotten bliss, it's quick...
the more that carries on the more none of it exists..
I'm sick, is it something I ate, I hate these moments
pull it together...another chance has just opened..
easily grasped, seizing me, catch! I needed this...
beat grows immensely, my minds beaten to bits..
yet...I feel as though I'm needing to quit...
I'm going to go get relieved with a piss...
I have a battle to write for this was just me playing with skits

yea....

sral · 09-15-2015, 07:44 AM

LOL @ thread title

cool little verse

obv a little underdeveloped but i liked what i read

keep that pen moving!

09-15-2015, 02:06 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	German Shepard Herman Lester the Urban Wrestler In that moment I was entranced by the melody this second became hope, & the dance became destiny losing all regard, while evading any type of sense in me I proceeded by the minute to make worth in each pressing beat... it felt so long, but went by so quick..damn... one moment we were one then we miss hands... falling into a abyss of forgotten bliss, it's quick... the more that carries on the more none of it exists.. I'm sick, is it something I ate, I hate these moments pull it together...another chance has just opened.. easily grasped, seizing me, catch! I needed this... beat grows immensely, my minds beaten to bits.. yet...I feel as though I'm needing to quit... I'm going to go get relieved with a piss... I have a battle to write for this was just me playing with skits yea.... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

09-15-2015, 07:44 AM	#2
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,609 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	LOL @ thread title cool little verse obv a little underdeveloped but i liked what i read keep that pen moving! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)