Chyeahhh!!! 2-4 vs Wanderer 4-7 {Chyeahhh!!! wins by no show} - OPEN FOR FEED (COUNTS AS VOTING LINK)

[Hush]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 16th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes

@Chyeahhh!!! vs @Wanderer 4-7

[Chyeahhh!!!]

Bet yah crew gave you pointers, im dolo with some red dots of my own
I dont plan on taking 2 L's, so you can take these 14 Shots to the Dome
Since our match i thought Wand would go far
But every round had this bitch lookin weaker n weaker like Bill Cosby was behind those bars
I'll pull yo card, Remy Lebeau would hit the deck when this Yugo folds
But with the hands, ive got em in spades, plus I'll Trump you in the polls
Callin me paranoid when u should take a look at the ones in your cljque
Walk around with an S on your chest and Hush will kick you out for making fun of his lisp
Lauch missiles at this cub scouts club house, im mad max shooting niggas off my shit list
So stay in yah lanes, im shotgun with automatics and yall still working with stick shifts
I dont follow trends, could give a fuck if I intrigue the damn readers
Im on some shit like snatching yah Earth and breaking that bitch into pieces like Pangea
Keep the Thing with me... even run with the Torch..you cant stomach a loss
When i win you'll turn this into a big issue like Christopher Wallace on the front of The Source

[Aero]

Walk around with an S on your chest and Hush will kick you out for making fun of his lisp
LOLOL

[Hush]

That's fire haha

[Orc]

Bet yah crew gave you pointers, im dolo with some red dots of my own
I dont plan on taking 2 L's, so you can take these 14 Shots to the Dome
lot of swag but no real punch bro
Since our match i thought Wand would go far
But every round had this bitch lookin weaker n weaker like Bill Cosby was behind those bars
okay current event hit here bro coulda tightened up the punch maybe took a couple words out and made it hit harsher imo
I'll pull yo card, Remy Lebeau would hit the deck when this Yugo folds
But with the hands, ive got em in spades, plus I'll Trump you in the polls
this was slick as fuck to me from the set up to the punch
Callin me paranoid when u should take a look at the ones in your cljque
Walk around with an S on your chest and Hush will kick you out for making fun of his lisp
hahahaha this was so fucking dope
Lauch missiles at this cub scouts club house, im mad max shooting niggas off my shit list
So stay in yah lanes, im shotgun with automatics and yall still working with stick shifts
mmmm lot of swag here, slick af. not really a diss tho. more of a swag n flow hit ya know
I dont follow trends, could give a fuck if I intrigue the damn readers
Im on some shit like snatching yah Earth and breaking that bitch into pieces like Pangea
creative here and flow was sick again
Keep the Thing with me... even run with the Torch..you cant stomach a loss
When i win you'll turn this into a big issue like Christopher Wallace on the front of The Source
this was slick yet again. ya style very reader friendly this week


man this probably the best battle verse i've read from u. you've always had ya own style which is respectable u write for you and don't write to please the masses. i do feel tho that if u could maybe conform maybeeee just a little bit to the netcees norm of battling and how to deliver punches & whats considered dope then you could really become a problem. the swag and the slickness is there, the rest is up to you

[Destroyer]

some swag here
hush lisp was fire
shotguns and stick shifts was nice

[O. Lineman]

Hush line was pretty bananas. Rest was alright. Stay up.

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!!

Bet yah crew gave you pointers, im dolo with some red dots of my own
I dont plan on taking 2 L's, so you can take these 14 Shots to the Dome
simple but not bad
Since our match i thought Wand would go far
But every round had this bitch lookin weaker n weaker like Bill Cosby was behind those bars
haha. nice
I'll pull yo card, Remy Lebeau would hit the deck when this Yugo folds
But with the hands, ive got em in spades, plus I'll Trump you in the polls
i see the wp but its not really connected well. need better setup
Callin me paranoid when u should take a look at the ones in your cljque
Walk around with an S on your chest and Hush will kick you out for making fun of his lisp
a little corny. didn't really like the concept.
Lauch missiles at this cub scouts club house, im mad max shooting niggas off my shit list
So stay in yah lanes, im shotgun with automatics and yall still working with stick shifts
this is ok
I dont follow trends, could give a fuck if I intrigue the damn readers
Im on some shit like snatching yah Earth and breaking that bitch into pieces like Pangea
nice concept. wording is bland, but ok bar overall
Keep the Thing with me... even run with the Torch..you cant stomach a loss
When i win you'll turn this into a big issue like Christopher Wallace on the front of The Source
this isn't really hard, but cool reference

Bill Cosby bar was pretty clever and nicely worded. The rest was mostly hit or miss, but the shotgun bar was decent. Enjoyed the read overall.