Artificial 0-3 Vs Chyeahh Guevara 1-4 - CHYEAHHH WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Artificial @Chyeahhh!!!

[Ronin]

12

[Chyeahhh!!!]

Originally Posted by Artificial

Why is my gif avy not workn?

cuz you aint about that action, and I'm known for smoking pistols
so when I do drivebys on this actors set,it aint a motion picture
heard you treasure yah hoes twat, bro you should let her be
cuz I can easily get in her box and leave seeds on her buns, thats open sesame
for the record, you owe in 3, I wouldn't advise pressing your luck
cause I can rob you for your yah shine before those 180 seconds is up
when it comes to you and skills, I'm at a loss Art, you bout to take a loss, Art
cause I can have you laid out on the canvas or missing, either way, you lost Art
and I bet your chips are down, all the chicks say your broke and your boring
the inside of your wallet was a Greek tragedy before the markets opened this morning
you's a discussion forum attention whore but we all know that you're fake
tryna hang with the big boys when you post reminds me of Muggsy Bogues in the paint
I battle for blood, but at any minute it can be shots fired, boi
I'm draped up like Bags living room, one wrong word and I'm outside yours
yah chances for a win are aweful slim, those odds should have you pretty annoyed
I'll go out on an artificial limb and say it's cause the voters and feeling yah joints

[Ronin]

I been reading ur shit, crazy, it seems as if ur txt has got worse.
So full of shit, ur constipated...it's sad but thats the type of concepts I expect outta ya verse.
Sorry brah, but I don't envy ur luck.
Hes always predicting disasters..I'm predicting his verse will never be anything but.
Y'all know I'm hell with the ratchet, shootn till ya home in piles.
I got them 'full metal jacket's, n we hoping u use em to shoot urself like gomer pyle.
Wording sucks, concepts r gay, even ur hair is queer.
Seriously, how can u go back to the basics when u been stuck there for years.
Ur pathetic, talkn crazy on fb n hopes any chick notice.
Watcher? Yea u stalker status..n imagine urself in every pic she posted.
Got the guts to chase the greats, I'd win at the rim or the mound.
Call ya bluff n raise the stakes. Then bring em down n pin ya limbs to the ground.
Ya text is horrible, that shits wordy n filled with niche n terribly weak jokes.
The way this arthritis cringe worthy, ya joints pain me with each and every keystroke.
U supernaturally wack, no ones in luv with u.
I see bs, while u stay producing stupid scripts like the cw.

[Mr. J]

cuz you aint about that action, and I'm known for smoking pistols
so when I do drivebys on this actors set,it aint a motion picture
heard you treasure yah hoes twat, bro you should let her be
cuz I can easily get in her box and leave seeds on her buns, thats open sesame
for the record, you owe in 3, I wouldn't advise pressing your luck
cause I can rob you for your yah shine before those 180 seconds is up
^^^^
this whole section was flames, & I literally lol'd at 'open sesame'
that owe in 3 line almost snuck by me but I was like whaaaat..
as for the rest I didn't find too much that fit the bill for me...
otherwise I enjoyed the 'Lost Art' section, saying out loud sounds better than it looks
either way smooth verse...

Sorry brah, but I don't envy ur luck.
Hes always predicting disasters..I'm predicting his verse will never be anything but.

Wording sucks, concepts r gay, even ur hair is queer.
Seriously, how can u go back to the basics when u been stuck there for years.
^^^^
these were the stand outs for me, I enjoyed some of the other lines
but I felt your execution was kind of out of sync for me, but I rolled with it
I felt if you set up some of the other bars like these two, I would have had a tougher time voting
either way you did have some slick concepts & that was enjoyable for me.
otherwise, I think I have to go with Chyeahh...

v/Chyeahh, he came with some stronger lines, a few of them made me laugh
I actually forgot to quote that Mugsy line, that gave me a light chuckle as well
Art came through pretty clean to, I just felt his execution was unstable
either way both writers brought some smooth work to the table...
nice work fella's

[Split Eight]

Open sesame
Greek tragedy
Feeling joints
Lost art

Predicting disasters


Chyeahhh dropped the best verse I've ever seen him drop & absolutely bodied this dude
He mustve banged out an 8-ball and channeled Nbiru on some other shit

V/ Cjyeah Ina bloodbath

[Bash]

Sesame (almost quoted opener but rhyming was off)

Vs

Disasters

V/Art. This was hard to vote for as both had their flaws. 2 of Chyeeahs bars didn't rhyme but I liked the tone n overall swagger of his verse. Almost quoted his opener. Arts misses weren't that great as well. Didn't like the wording for Arthritis not do I think it really goes. Might be a pronounciation thing cause it doesn't go when I say it. SLIGHT edge to Art

[Amen.]

opener was weak & didn't rhyme lol
seeds on her buns was eh
rob you before 180 was mild
canvas missing lost art was too simple
greek trajedy needed a better execution
Muggsy Bogues was corny too me
bags living room was bad
closer was off

vs

full of shit was wack & basic
predicting disasters had potential but wordin & execution was bad
full metal jacket/gomer pile concept? stooooooooopppp bro lol
back to basics was simple but nice straight jab
oh a watcher concept? the irony comin from someone that always crs someone flippin shit
raise the stakes old concept and execution was mild
arthritis? not sure what you were trying to get there
closer was off

I got to be honest here, I didn't like this battle at all. but art definitely got it SLIGHTLY. I think chyeah focus on flow to much and uses underwhelmed concepts too much. try and be creative bro and get harsher. same w/ art tho... concepts were old 2005 era type shit b.

art got it

[Pinot Grij]

Chyeah had a good flow and swagger to his verse - it was very readable. No line really stood out as a knockout punch but everything was consistently even...

Artificial - rhyming "piles" with "Pyle" gets no love from me... line was kinda ehh.. back to basics line was very played. The FB line was pretty funny, just imagining a guy imagining himself in some chick's pictures, lol. Raising stakes, again, just not a very elaborate concept.

Overall, I felt that Artificial had some groaners and Chyeah, although not overwhelming, didn't really do anything wrong. The verse felt like a solid verse, if that makes sense, and didn't really fall off at any point.

Vote --> Cheayhhhh

[Kill Spree]

cuz you aint about that action, and I'm known for smoking pistols
so when I do drivebys on this actors set,it aint a motion picture
played and didnt rhyme
heard you treasure yah hoes twat, bro you should let her be
cuz I can easily get in her box and leave seeds on her buns, thats open sesame
could have been waaay better, dope concept just poorly exicuted
for the record, you owe in 3, I wouldn't advise pressing your luck
cause I can rob you for your yah shine before those 180 seconds is up
this was nice, set up was dope
when it comes to you and skills, I'm at a loss Art, you bout to take a loss, Art
cause I can have you laid out on the canvas or missing, either way, you lost Art
nah
and I bet your chips are down, all the chicks say your broke and your boring
the inside of your wallet was a Greek tragedy before the markets opened this morning
concept is there but executed poorly
you's a discussion forum attention whore but we all know that you're fake
tryna hang with the big boys when you post reminds me of Muggsy Bogues in the paint
no
I battle for blood, but at any minute it can be shots fired, boi
I'm draped up like Bags living room, one wrong word and I'm outside yours
no
yah chances for a win are aweful slim, those odds should have you pretty annoyed
I'll go out on an artificial limb and say it's cause the voters and feeling yah joints
meh


I been reading ur shit, crazy, it seems as if ur txt has got worse.
So full of shit, ur constipated...it's sad but thats the type of concepts I expect outta ya verse.
aight
Sorry brah, but I don't envy ur luck.
Hes always predicting disasters..I'm predicting his verse will never be anything but.
light
Y'all know I'm hell with the ratchet, shootn till ya home in piles.
I got them 'full metal jacket's, n we hoping u use em to shoot urself like gomer pyle.
NO!
Wording sucks, concepts r gay, even ur hair is queer.
Seriously, how can u go back to the basics when u been stuck there for years.
light..
Ur pathetic, talkn crazy on fb n hopes any chick notice.
Watcher? Yea u stalker status..n imagine urself in every pic she posted.
ok
Got the guts to chase the greats, I'd win at the rim or the mound.
Call ya bluff n raise the stakes. Then bring em down n pin ya limbs to the ground.
nice
Ya text is horrible, that shits wordy n filled with niche n terribly weak jokes.
The way this arthritis cringe worthy, ya joints pain me with each and every keystroke.
ok
U supernaturally wack, no ones in luv with u.
I see bs, while u stay producing stupid scripts like the cw.
nah

overall
both came with played/generic shit. chee had a few dope concepts but poorly executed and art had some played stuff but had better misses and was more consistent

Vote Art

[Bust]

Cheeyya

Opener was light
I liked open sesame
Yah shine was ok
Not feeling lost art
Greek tragedy was lacking executio
Mugsy bouges coulda been doper if worded different
Wasn't feeling bags living room
Closer was ok

Art

Didn't really lije ur opener
Predicting disasters was ok
Didn't like full metal jackets
Back to basics was ok
Stalk her status was cool
Raise th stakes was pretty damn cool too
Arthritis cringe worthy was kinda cool
Wasn't feeling the closer


Aight, I think cheyyyyyya has good concepts just gotta rearrange the wording to make um land hard couple good hits tho.. Art to me was more consistent throughout pretty much jabbing his way through this match.. Some cool wp but yeah art took this

Art

[ribbit]

Wasnt feeling either of these..well they both started alright But by the end of either of them I was having trouble keeping my eyes open. Both these verses were very generic and although there were a few quotables I just had trouble following along...anyways all in all I though chyeahh took this battle with lines that felt harder with the punches and although art had some decent lines they weren't as I'll as chyeahhs

Vote//chyeahh

[Cred]

Open sesame, yah shine

vs

Raise the stakes

Ok battle here. Both didn't come with anything outstanding but sum cool lines. The ones quoted were the best lines. I really only liked arts stakes line. & Chyea had the 2 I quoted. Open sesame was dope n lotb. He edged dis one

Vote Chyea

[Sharp]

heard you treasure yah hoes twat, bro you should let her be
cuz I can easily get in her box and leave seeds on her buns, thats open sesame
you's a discussion forum attention whore but we all know that you're fake
tryna hang with the big boys when you post reminds me of Muggsy Bogues in the paint


Wording sucks, concepts r gay, even ur hair is queer.
Seriously, how can u go back to the basics when u been stuck there for years.
Got the guts to chase the greats, I'd win at the rim or the mound.
Call ya bluff n raise the stakes. Then bring em down n pin ya limbs to the ground..



Close as fuck

Mobile right now but imo Chyeahhh got it. Even on quotes but I thought his misses were just light while art had some played concepts like full Metal Jacket. Thought muggsy was lotb. I know the rest of y'all hate it but I thought it was done well. I tend to prefer creative and personal concepts over played out but well worded and Chyeahhh was more creative. I think art coulda won by keeping personal but I've seen some iteration of his generics before

C/Chyeahhh in a cloooose one

[Destroyer]

I got chyeahh here with more consistency
art's shit was like almost there I dunno
what's with the arthritis joint? the way this arth write is...? I didn't quite follow
anyway chyeahh had some ok stuff here
I think he takes it

v/chyeahhh

[murda sho]

Art

Sorry brah, but I don't envy ur luck.
Hes always predicting disasters..I'm predicting his verse will never be anything but.

Ya text is horrible, that shits wordy n filled with niche n terribly weak jokes.
The way this arthritis cringe worthy, ya joints pain me with each and every keystroke.


Chyeah

when it comes to you and skills, I'm at a loss Art, you bout to take a loss, Art
cause I can have you laid out on the canvas or missing, either way, you lost Art

you's a discussion forum attention whore but we all know that you're fake
tryna hang with the big boys when you post reminds me of Muggsy Bogues in the paint
I battle for blood, but at any minute it can be shots fired, boi
I'm draped up like Bags living room, one wrong word and I'm outside yours
yah chances for a win are aweful slim, those odds should have you pretty annoyed
I'll go out on an artificial limb and say it's cause the voters and feeling yah joints


Art your wording isnt really bad like that but you gotta turn up the heat in ur punches bro, some of your shit was just bland. The ones you did get off shows ur potential to put together a good verse but u just gotta stay consistent with the hard hits. Chyeah u started off so fuckin corny and I was about to just stop reading ur verse but then u started heating up towards the end.. Just enough to edge u the win imo so vote Chyeah