Copy, is this better?

Witty · 06-16-2015, 09:21 PM

I'm a shark bite, a tiger poked, a bear in a bar fight, my tier's light years higher than my peers, throwing hard rights, the type of joker even the dark knight fears. I'm bat shit, a little, depressed, stroppy hoe, but when I start to rhyme it's like a match lit, my last shit didn't impress Copy tho :( He was right cuz it was sloppy yo, thank you for your honesty, I know you always got me bro <3 I gotta lay on my side cuz my back's bruised, thinking of getting tattoo's, eating cashews, tryna conceive of black jews...do they exist? i'm not sure so thought i'd ask you, you're tasked to find out the answer and hit me back soon. I honestly don't even try anymore, death been knocking with the scythe at the door, I hung up a sign saying 'out for lunch, brb @ 4' it's self belief I lack, and more, it's the 'kick me' sign that used to be my back, your entire shattered heart then just the piece i cracked, I went online hoping to see life hacks for depression, but it turns out it's just me, I snapped. Stature fractured and then toppled but i'll still fuck your ugly bitch, make the fat in her head wobble, kill her, put her in the sack with the dead model. i'd kick midgets in the head for six digits, fuck i'd do it for two, shit i'd do it for a room with a view, a twix, biscuits, and possibly Swiss triplets, i'll do it with this quickness, try to intervene i'll kick you in the dick, rape you n your bitch, bury you in a ditch, mail your fingers to your family, ruin your kids christmas, that's what you get for screwing with Wit's business. my own man, I don't respect no fads bro, I'm hating kale, I've seen some people making bail, and others go straight to jail, don't collect no cash, don't pass Go.

*had reservations about using 'peers'

*I tried to include the line 'I did a massive fart in Jurassic Park' but how to follow up on it was beyond me :(

Witty · 06-16-2015, 09:21 PM

@CopyPat

Mr. J · 06-16-2015, 09:51 PM

Stanzas start at the fattest mark, bulls eye pull back the arch and snap at Mars & watch the arrow as it landed hard, passing cards at the dealership, passing cars at the realtors, passing gas and asking for a meal card. what....

this was cool witty I nutted in my jeans
Copy all aflutter right now looking for Wise in the cypher most likely
My was cashews had me like ooooo son this is NUTS

CopyPat · 06-17-2015, 01:46 AM

not really????

feed mine and i'll feed urs

we should collab to inspire eachother since this sucked thx

actually i'll feed it. biggest thing i noticed was lack of any "cool" words or expressions or references. was just basic wording. feel me?? need to incorporate some original vocab in these shits g. this just bored me.

i've been drinking the entire day and i think ur one of the coolest fuckers on this site witty but step it the fuck up cause ur better than this. not saying im any better but this was quite basic. and i'll be honest cause thats all i ever am, and ur a bro so i'm extra honest fucka idiyote hope this is a kick in the ass. cypher soon. also collab soon.

Clutbuck · 06-17-2015, 06:28 AM

stayed in jail/making bail was a sick relevant multi

I'd def keep that in the back of your head at least to use later on

we refer to them as 'perfect multies' when they're both relatable to same subject matter and go hand in hand e.g Hand of God/Maradon-a

big baby · 06-17-2015, 03:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clutbuck

stayed in jail/making bail was a sick relevant multi

I'd def keep that in the back of your head at least to use later on

we refer to them as 'perfect multies' when they're both relatable to same subject matter and go hand in hand e.g Hand of God/Maradon-a

lmao wtf stfu idiyote

Clutbuck · 06-17-2015, 06:57 PM

lmao stop being so mean, bb

I gave you props in something's thread

play nicely :)

big baby · 06-17-2015, 07:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clutbuck

lmao stop being so mean, bb

I gave you props in something's thread

play nicely :)

but u fun 2 bemean 2 !

Ghost1 · 06-17-2015, 09:39 PM

Dead@not really

Witty · 06-21-2015, 08:06 AM

Shut up faggot bags.

Ghost1 · 06-21-2015, 10:46 PM

FUCK U FOX.FUCKFACE FAHOT.FUCKIN HEY PAT DID I DO IT RI!!??!? HAHA NO NOT EVEN CLOSE UR IN A DIFFERENT DIMENSION SO FUCKING FSR.OFF STUPID FUCKING IRELAND SYRUP ON HAM BACON NOT ON UR LIFE!!!

Youngest · 06-22-2015, 01:53 AM

LOL THIS FUCKING SUCKED THX. THIS MAKES COPY LOOK LIKE GOAT. YA'LL SHOULD TEAM UP. LOL CAN'T WRITE FOR SHIT CREW. WHAT SHITTY ASS AVERAGE LYRICS. BASIC. EAT SHIT AND DIE NIGGA

DonaldSterlingMommasHerpe · 06-24-2015, 11:16 PM

Oh, I get it, you Biggie and he's Puffy

06-16-2015, 09:21 PM	#1
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Copy, is this better? I'm a shark bite, a tiger poked, a bear in a bar fight, my tier's light years higher than my peers, throwing hard rights, the type of joker even the dark knight fears. I'm bat shit, a little, depressed, stroppy hoe, but when I start to rhyme it's like a match lit, my last shit didn't impress Copy tho :( He was right cuz it was sloppy yo, thank you for your honesty, I know you always got me bro <3 I gotta lay on my side cuz my back's bruised, thinking of getting tattoo's, eating cashews, tryna conceive of black jews...do they exist? i'm not sure so thought i'd ask you, you're tasked to find out the answer and hit me back soon. I honestly don't even try anymore, death been knocking with the scythe at the door, I hung up a sign saying 'out for lunch, brb @ 4' it's self belief I lack, and more, it's the 'kick me' sign that used to be my back, your entire shattered heart then just the piece i cracked, I went online hoping to see life hacks for depression, but it turns out it's just me, I snapped. Stature fractured and then toppled but i'll still fuck your ugly bitch, make the fat in her head wobble, kill her, put her in the sack with the dead model. i'd kick midgets in the head for six digits, fuck i'd do it for two, shit i'd do it for a room with a view, a twix, biscuits, and possibly Swiss triplets, i'll do it with this quickness, try to intervene i'll kick you in the dick, rape you n your bitch, bury you in a ditch, mail your fingers to your family, ruin your kids christmas, that's what you get for screwing with Wit's business. my own man, I don't respect no fads bro, I'm hating kale, I've seen some people making bail, and others go straight to jail, don't collect no cash, don't pass Go. had reservations about using 'peers' I tried to include the line 'I did a massive fart in Jurassic Park' but how to follow up on it was beyond me :( __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime. Last edited by Witty; 06-16-2015 at 09:23 PM.

06-16-2015, 09:21 PM	#2
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	@CopyPat __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

06-16-2015, 09:51 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Stanzas start at the fattest mark, bulls eye pull back the arch and snap at Mars & watch the arrow as it landed hard, passing cards at the dealership, passing cars at the realtors, passing gas and asking for a meal card. what.... this was cool witty I nutted in my jeans Copy all aflutter right now looking for Wise in the cypher most likely My was cashews had me like ooooo son this is NUTS __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

06-17-2015, 01:46 AM	#4
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	not really???? feed mine and i'll feed urs we should collab to inspire eachother since this sucked thx actually i'll feed it. biggest thing i noticed was lack of any "cool" words or expressions or references. was just basic wording. feel me?? need to incorporate some original vocab in these shits g. this just bored me. i've been drinking the entire day and i think ur one of the coolest fuckers on this site witty but step it the fuck up cause ur better than this. not saying im any better but this was quite basic. and i'll be honest cause thats all i ever am, and ur a bro so i'm extra honest fucka idiyote hope this is a kick in the ass. cypher soon. also collab soon. __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

06-21-2015, 08:06 AM	#10
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Shut up faggot bags. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

06-17-2015, 06:28 AM	#5
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513501	stayed in jail/making bail was a sick relevant multi I'd def keep that in the back of your head at least to use later on we refer to them as 'perfect multies' when they're both relatable to same subject matter and go hand in hand e.g Hand of God/Maradon-a

06-17-2015, 06:57 PM	#7
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513501	lmao stop being so mean, bb I gave you props in something's thread play nicely :)

06-22-2015, 01:53 AM	#12
Youngest Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Posts: 8 Rep Power: 0	LOL THIS FUCKING SUCKED THX. THIS MAKES COPY LOOK LIKE GOAT. YA'LL SHOULD TEAM UP. LOL CAN'T WRITE FOR SHIT CREW. WHAT SHITTY ASS AVERAGE LYRICS. BASIC. EAT SHIT AND DIE NIGGA

06-24-2015, 11:16 PM	#13
DonaldSterlingMommasHerpe sick shit homeboy Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 21 Rep Power: 0	Oh, I get it, you Biggie and he's Puffy