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Old 06-26-2015, 02:49 PM   #1
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all smiles friend, but that's where the profile ends
I retort in a 'trial' sense, anger found in my wild grin
my name isn't in the system, my card was a lie since..
early '96, I was a gambler, manager of 5 kids..
my wife's sick..she became a burden & my mind split
but all of that is private, in any case you describe this...
'crime of passion' as if it wasn't one of MY attractions
it's quite tragic to tell you the truth! I'm ecstatic..
with anger...I've crafted a well executed plan with graphics
I even left a picture to match it to my specific enhancements
you people act as if art is merely meant for a craftsman
this is instinctive its only perfect when it's meant to happen!
because honestly what's living without a little senseless action?!?
I even spelled it out for you, NEWSFLASH the best distraction
this is just a blurred view so the truth is dissected in fractions
isn't that pathetic of fantastic? I never understood the facet...
but you need to describe the horror & the mess you captured!
I CARVED A SMILE IN THEIR FACES BEFORE I LEFT THE MANSION!
using the bullet hole in the forehead for a lipstick styled fashion
and even phoned it in on how it was perfectly mastered...
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Old 06-27-2015, 03:44 AM   #2
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Ur qwarters?

Lol I kno u remember a nigga from back then

I'll feed this but that hit me like a e Honda slap when I saw that name
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Old 06-27-2015, 03:46 AM   #3
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you people act as if art is merely meant for a craftsman
this is instinctive its only perfect when it's meant to happen!

Lmao! Tell emm

That's how I feel about some omers. Try too hard (great stringing syllables )but still dull as fuck. I ain't saying no names. Ur def not one of them. It's just a few. Most I enjoy reading here for sure. Some more than others
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Old 06-27-2015, 06:31 AM   #4
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lmao i thought everyone knew J was QuarterZ?

anyway, this was my shit:

isn't that pathetic of fantastic? I never understood the facet...
but you need to describe the horror & the mess you captured!
I CARVED A SMILE IN THEIR FACES BEFORE I LEFT THE MANSION!
using the bullet hole in the forehead for a lipstick styled fashion
and even phoned it in on how it was perfectly mastered...

LOL @ the lipstick/bloody glory hole idea

that ish is right up my street given you know he films I watch haha

keep that pen moving!
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Old 06-27-2015, 09:53 AM   #5
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Haha I didn't know that was Quarterz. This is siah/solomon fraze from nc1.

This was nice. You had some wavy bars.

with anger...I've crafted a well executed plan with graphics
I even left a picture to match it to my specific enhancements
you people act as if art is merely meant for a craftsman
this is instinctive its only perfect when it's meant to happen!
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Old 06-27-2015, 01:37 PM   #6
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