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Old 04-20-2015, 10:25 PM   #1
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Default Mutilate 0-1 vs Witty 0-1 - CLAYTON WINS BY NOSHOW

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Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday, April 23th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
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Old 04-21-2015, 02:28 AM   #2
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Check.

Get ready to match my 16.


I'll bless ya girls pussy. Spread legs then begin to pray
Once she kills you, we'll take everything you own that's a dead giveaway.
Ya daughter? Smut. But I write love notes ti'll she's wetter than an ocean
That chicken head'll flee the coop.. poultry in motion
Witty's not slick w/ the lady's, he'll bag a 2 & nothin clearly over
But I guess beauty really is in the eye of the beerholder
Check it. I got the arm lit, so scramble bro or come see me
Cause once I crack ya egg it'll be over easy
I hope you make it to the top, then fail in your prime
you've had more bad looks than any alias of mine
We suited up with the mask. got clips for witty to sit em in his place
He'll have so many red dots on his head like he tried to recreate my face
Lift you High in the air by strength alone then Smoke you loser
Go Bowl-ing w/ your head.. I'm a chronic abuser
I'm not sayin you CANT beat me.. I'm kidding, dawg u can't
If Foxtrots towards me w/ two quick steps, he'll get the 44 in time like the Ballroom Dance

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Old 04-24-2015, 03:45 PM   #3
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ext plz
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Old 04-24-2015, 05:34 PM   #4
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LOL
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Old 04-26-2015, 07:51 AM   #5
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Old 04-26-2015, 11:20 AM   #6
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Opener was archaic

Reminiscent of lines like "leave u fkn dead like a perverted mortician "

Sorry celph Titl3d...lol just archaic


Poultry/poetry

Maybe In audio

But I pronounce the l in poultry


Beer holder ...no nono




Crack ur egg
n bad looks were the lines I liked

Rest but cheeks if I'm keeping 100 w/ u
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Old 04-26-2015, 11:22 AM   #7
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Bowl-ing

word association doesn't work like that man

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Old 04-27-2015, 05:13 PM   #8
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Liked these two lines. The rest were boring..


I hope you make it to the top, then fail in your prime
you've had more bad looks than any alias of mine

I'm not sayin you CANT beat me.. I'm kidding, dawg u can't
If Foxtrots towards me w/ two quick steps, he'll get the 44 in time like the Ballroom Dance
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Old 04-27-2015, 06:39 PM   #9
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I'll bless ya girls pussy. Spread legs then begin to pray
Once she kills you, we'll take everything you own that's a dead giveaway.
oh dude... played
Ya daughter? Smut. But I write love notes ti'll she's wetter than an ocean
That chicken head'll flee the coop.. poultry in motion
eh
Witty's not slick w/ the lady's, he'll bag a 2 & nothin clearly over
But I guess beauty really is in the eye of the beerholder
ok
Check it. I got the arm lit, so scramble bro or come see me
Cause once I crack ya egg it'll be over easy
ok that it work both ways but kinda played out
I hope you make it to the top, then fail in your prime
you've had more bad looks than any alias of mine
ok idea but nothing too harsh
We suited up with the mask. got clips for witty to sit em in his place
He'll have so many red dots on his head like he tried to recreate my face
lol. didn't hit too much but good use of your persona
Lift you High in the air by strength alone then Smoke you loser
Go Bowl-ing w/ your head.. I'm a chronic abuser
chronic is pretty played
I'm not sayin you CANT beat me.. I'm kidding, dawg u can't
If Foxtrots towards me w/ two quick steps, he'll get the 44 in time like the Ballroom Dance
okay


nothing really harsh here tbh. lot of played out ideas or basic flips but okay overall. tbh it could beat a verse that wasn't very hot but idk if it could hang with more than a newer/lower mid tier battle. clean wording was your strength but concepts were pretty weak
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