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07-03-2013, 01:36 PM
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Mic Check
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
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NOT a Site Diss! CopyPat Double Feature (with audio)
All Booty
https://soundcloud.com/copypat/all-booty-oct-06 I run tracks, your shit is usually walkable I'm terminally ill, sick as humanly possible Mc's is dying and I am hugely responsible Ya beating me? That's just proving impossible I'll be brutally honest bro, the facts so surly I rap noteworthy cause I'm truly remarkable Cooling you off with cold brooding and frosty flows Shooting a topical, soon to be at it quick You'll be an asterisk, I'm booting your asses quick All booty ya rappin is, ya gluteus maximus You wanna drop a rhyme but who would give half a shit I come exceptional and you ain't suitably adequate Double D Lyrics https://soundcloud.com/copypat/bumble-bees-sept-06 It's CopyPat and ya lovin me hear it My verse is sweet like a bumble bee's syrup Ya fumbled each year its like ya lines don't catch Cause ya rhymes is flat and i got Double D Lyrics My stuff will teach here its a Professor flow The professional, kick exceptional rhymes for pleasure yo And I'm getting so fed up with these cats With heads up in they ass They said nothing that has any meaning to it And I lean into it when I'm delivering punches Littering mugs with the sweet chin music Any MC task yo, we can do it So now you've seen it in a nutshell man How convenient that you suck well damn With the foulest lyrics in the cut tell fans Cause we found a reason to bust swell jams hahaha, old fuckarounds from '06 |
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07-03-2013, 03:36 PM
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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
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I remember the second one haha.. these were decent, second one was definitely more solid.
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07-03-2013, 04:11 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2013
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first dude was cool...I liked his cadence switch at the end...but since it's 06 I can't really critique really until I hear suttin more recent..lyrics are on point like most textcees are..flow was decent...
second one was def more flowable...more natural... juss work on your delivery...maybe recite the lyrics with more aggression or memorize the bars so you can work on your emotion... it's pretty coo...y'all both would benefit alot from a better Mic...it would add that punch to the bars... |
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07-03-2013, 04:14 PM
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Mic Check
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
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ha they're both me man.. haha yeah from like 7 years ago
yeah that mic is puuuuuuure garbage, getting a better one here soon |
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07-03-2013, 04:52 PM
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Senior Member
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Lol my bad...but yea...watch..ya shyt gon be way more wavier...
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07-04-2013, 04:14 AM
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BITER
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: England
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lmao liking the terminally ill and gluteus maximus lines
nice shizz Copy |
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