not ready - new beat

Dove Dozer · 10-19-2014, 10:17 AM

https://soundcloud.com/oveozer/not-ready

Geno · 10-19-2014, 11:57 AM

Beats dope as fuck. Thought coulda did better rapping though. Had its good kmenta and hen bad ones

Kin · 10-20-2014, 09:13 AM

This is straight....beats ok...the volume with the vocals throws me off a lil. Tho.

Rhyme scheme is nice...diggin ur delivery needs a lil polishin here an there...also vocals could use a little cleanin up... send me a pm if u got any questions bout how to get that sound a lil more crisp...

Overall solid track...hook was ok but the verses stood out more to me

HoLLa

Dove Dozer · 10-28-2014, 10:44 AM

thx kin

10-19-2014, 10:17 AM	#1
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	not ready - new beat https://soundcloud.com/oveozer/not-ready

10-19-2014, 11:57 AM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Beats dope as fuck. Thought coulda did better rapping though. Had its good kmenta and hen bad ones __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-20-2014, 09:13 AM	#3
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	This is straight....beats ok...the volume with the vocals throws me off a lil. Tho. Rhyme scheme is nice...diggin ur delivery needs a lil polishin here an there...also vocals could use a little cleanin up... send me a pm if u got any questions bout how to get that sound a lil more crisp... Overall solid track...hook was ok but the verses stood out more to me HoLLa

10-28-2014, 10:44 AM	#4
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	thx kin