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08-13-2013, 10:51 PM
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Malachi vs. Plot - {Malachi wins}
NEWBIE 2013 ROUND 2 No swaying, biting, feeding, recycling Line Limits -10 Minimum -14 Maximum First person to drop can edit only until the 2nd person drops. 2nd person can edit only until the first vote is submitted DUE: Saturday, 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time Extensions are available at request until Sunday 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time, exactly 24 hours later. Good Luck @Malachi @Plot |
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08-14-2013, 12:03 AM
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10 check
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08-14-2013, 09:32 PM
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take it away
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08-18-2013, 09:10 AM
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This faggot guy lives a shattered life
Leave him seeing thru battered eyes A salad type that'll never be mad or fly Its a blackened lied if he ever clapped a nine This is a noshow verse for Malachi Thinks hes outta sight like satellites Send this hollow guy to the gallows knife Don't ask why, hes not worth the keys or types Type to Noshow in the newbies, what a pike Stupid little kid aint got no hype This is a noshow verse for Malachi. |
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08-18-2013, 11:41 PM
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Negus
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Lol i was gon drop faggots, fuck it @Plot
I got them dope lines, bringing them punches is my duty fool My verse's crack, your more like a twerk vid from 2 beautiful Nerd, im always next to bitches that are quick for mal to get off look The only time plot reaches climax, it cause hes in the middle of a book How u gon come first with this simple shit, make it more interestin Even if The plot thickened, hed still be comin in for seconds What a faggot tho , hes the gayest nigga here by far So many nigga cummin at him, he mustve wrote that control verse for lamar The only reason your here is cause of that no show u queer That match was mo'ronic, nah worse cause if that was true u wouldnt be here
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08-19-2013, 07:41 PM
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Plot dropped a noshows verse lol.
V/ mal. |
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08-20-2013, 08:49 AM
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Stackin' wins...
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Hi...
Smh @ Plot... I got them dope lines, bringing them punches is my duty fool My verse's crack, your more like a twerk vid from 2 beautiful Nerd, im always next to bitches that are quick for mal to get off look The only time plot reaches climax, it cause hes in the middle of a book How u gon come first with this simple shit, make it more interestin Even if The plot thickened, hed still be comin in for seconds What a faggot tho , hes the gayest nigga here by far So many nigga cummin at him, he mustve wrote that control verse for lamar Ive seen the opener/kendrick lines before but i liked yours too... If youre going to do current events try not use reference material that is too easy or too obvious... climax was dope... Never seen your stuff before but you did well... Vote- Malachi... Bye...
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08-20-2013, 02:15 PM
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vs. Nerd, im always next to bitches that are quick for mal to get off look The only time plot reaches climax, it cause hes in the middle of a book im guessing that was a no show verse or what note but mal got this climax line was this only one that stood out but u didn't need that much anyway v/mal |
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08-20-2013, 04:05 PM
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v. mal
very easy to explain I lold at the 2beautiful shit. |
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08-20-2013, 04:11 PM
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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plot dropped a ns verse a lil too early i guess.
malachi was okay, lil choppy with wording but overall cool verse v/malachi |
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