Blanco Bishop vs. Wordz AhGod [Wordz AhGod Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-24-2014, 05:39 PM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

Wordz AhGod · 10-27-2014, 11:13 AM

here.

Blanco Bishop · 10-27-2014, 12:45 PM

the stakes r raised n I'm all in, bet he folds with no resistance
but if WAG In...he'll need one full of d/r's for him to win this

Wordz AhGod · 10-28-2014, 08:01 AM

I take a loss n feel indifferent, while u let that baggage smother
the way u wine about pastels exposes blancos as the faggot color.

fresh · 10-28-2014, 09:35 AM

Wagon Wag in was weak imo. Flip was lazy too

I've seen pastel but wordz made it work with a personal approach, so he's gonna get my vote here.

v/Wordz

BROKE LESNAR · 10-28-2014, 12:31 PM

Blanco. Keep that style. I liked how you set the concept up, the format, and used the d/r personal. I'll forgive the WAG np as I'm overlooking the pastels wp. Both I've seen before. What this battle comes down to is the transition from the end of the first line to the beginning of the second line. "but if WAG in.." vs. "the way you wine about pastels".

I thought WAG did a better job of facilitating that transition.

As you can see I went technical bc I actually enjoyed both bars. And personals. If we dismiss the redundancy of the np's and wp's, and not focus on technical nuance, this could go either way.

v-WAG

Unfukwitable · 10-29-2014, 02:15 PM

v/WAG ...

Smoother wordplay and nicely executed. Wagon seemed like something thats probably been used a couple times on Wordz maybe alil more creativity to the concept wouldve made this more of a close battle.

Defiant · 10-29-2014, 03:49 PM

Yeah wag got this, close but wps been done but I like wordz approach more

Vote wag

~RustyGunZ~ · 10-29-2014, 03:53 PM

eh

wordz

Destroyer · 10-30-2014, 10:24 AM

got words thought it was clever

v/wordz

10-24-2014, 05:39 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Blanco Bishop vs. Wordz AhGod [Wordz AhGod Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 11-01-2014 at 08:17 AM.

10-27-2014, 12:45 PM	#3
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	the stakes r raised n I'm all in, bet he folds with no resistance but if WAG In...he'll need one full of d/r's for him to win this Last edited by Blanco Bishop; 10-27-2014 at 06:12 PM.

10-28-2014, 08:01 AM	#4
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	I take a loss n feel indifferent, while u let that baggage smother the way u wine about pastels exposes blancos as the faggot color. Last edited by Wordz AhGod; 10-28-2014 at 08:14 AM.

10-29-2014, 02:15 PM	#7
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	v/WAG ... Smoother wordplay and nicely executed. Wagon seemed like something thats probably been used a couple times on Wordz maybe alil more creativity to the concept wouldve made this more of a close battle. __________________ WICKeD

10-27-2014, 11:13 AM	#2
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	here.

10-28-2014, 09:35 AM	#5
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Wagon Wag in was weak imo. Flip was lazy too I've seen pastel but wordz made it work with a personal approach, so he's gonna get my vote here. v/Wordz

10-28-2014, 12:31 PM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Blanco. Keep that style. I liked how you set the concept up, the format, and used the d/r personal. I'll forgive the WAG np as I'm overlooking the pastels wp. Both I've seen before. What this battle comes down to is the transition from the end of the first line to the beginning of the second line. "but if WAG in.." vs. "the way you wine about pastels". I thought WAG did a better job of facilitating that transition. As you can see I went technical bc I actually enjoyed both bars. And personals. If we dismiss the redundancy of the np's and wp's, and not focus on technical nuance, this could go either way. v-WAG

10-29-2014, 03:49 PM	#8
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	Yeah wag got this, close but wps been done but I like wordz approach more Vote wag

10-29-2014, 03:53 PM	#9
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	eh wordz