Haters gonna hate this greatness

[DonaldSterlingMommasHerpe]

Simultaneous rhymin crazy shit. Hymen specialist inside ya residence. Hide the evidence. Vagina negligence is why you’re leverage is.. nonexistent. I crossed the system up, proxy’s mixed em up. Went to prom to get some butt but promptly gived a fuck. Conjured little sluts and conned em in to love. Condoleezza Rice with condoms, speakin rights. Like my dick right in the ass, right in a flash, right in ya ass lightning fast, right when I smash ya right in the ass. In the gluteus max. My medulla reacts to tom foolery unusually fast; so my apologies. And when I see a Tom Cruiserly, I usually attack a lot ruthlessly and smash scientology outta the galaxy. My brain is a healthy grey; I came in the Milky Way, that’s why they named it the Milky Way. I trained for the belt and take eggs in the mouth, plus some whey and some milk to replace what comes out a day. In the Canadian mountain ranges… just for the altitude. Adjust for the attitude: Longitude Latitude, since I’ve always been mad at you. Call me an animal. More like call me infallible. Crawling the rabbit hole cause I’m magic with hats in tow. Matter of fact I'm dope. The leading manufacturer of actual coke when I’m rappin a flow. Feel the cascade of the ocean wash your mind away. You’re mad gay in the moment when I drop a rhyme display…and you gargle my sack whole. Tryna give me compliments but it’s hard when your mouths full of all of my asshole. Embrace the odd warmth when I lay the wrong words. I’m a laser/bomb/sword, you’re a lazy slob dork with a ladies bod, twerp. I’m the latest hot rage, I’m the winner all day. Simmer sauté. Lights get dimmer how haters all hate. Razor sharp wit cause I bit it off Big. And when it comes to my dick, ya’ll bit it off big. Spittin all sick shit; never been clean. Forget it dawg, this is the greatest ya’ll seen.

[big baby]

didn't really
enjoy this. It was just too dense. Littered with tidbits of non intricate schemes and repetitive predictable instances. A lot of lines seemed stretched to try and accommodate for the lack of wording to fit a certain amount of syllables. filler words like of, off, just, my, all, and, I'm should be reduced when trying to retain a ridiculously intense flow. This was your backbone, and in being your backbone I felt you were too simple in your delivery. Nothing was imaginative or creative. Just simple sentences that explain simple things, cascade of the oceans/ wash, mad gay when you drop a display, razor sharp wit: but it off big. These were endings and climaxes that didn't do anything but let the reader down. Wasn't that interested throughout. Good attempt, thanks.