3 Mile Ride

AndyHiro · 10-06-2014, 05:55 PM

It's a sunny day I look out the window it's round 10 after 12,
Inhale the car exhaust smells, take in soft blue and white in pastels.
Client on the Galaxy cell, time to make moves strike a deal.
Cruisin' the avenues in round about routes, cuz the scenery's swell.
Stop by my coffee haunt, I think that them owners are Greek.
They speak kinda funny, but their triple shots get me tweek'd.
Plus the cashier, she's real sweet, why I'm there least five days a week.
Then it's back on the street, head bobbing to radio generic type beats.
They say this place is run down, worn, just cracks on brick walls.
A den of crack addicts and bad habits, but I don't think that at all.
It's not a heavenless zone just full of the adreneline prone.
It's also home of the proudly humble and mentally strong.
And I could go on but I just arrived and my clients outside.
I get out the car adjust the tie, shake his hand and say "Hi."

CopyPat · 10-16-2014, 03:51 PM

this didn't feel finished bro. if this is actual realness then yeah cool thats cool and i get why u ended where u did. maybe now come back and add on to this and tell us the rest of the story?

i kept thinking this was coming out of the wire season 2 i think? or was it 3 where theyre at the docks? the one dude always tryna scheme and coffee with the greek etc and being on the streets, thats the picture it painted for me anyways..

AndyHiro · 10-16-2014, 04:06 PM

Thanks, I tried to write happy. I'm not good at it anymore.

10-06-2014, 05:55 PM	#1
AndyHiro Yeah Im kinda like that Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 107 Rep Power: 0	3 Mile Ride It's a sunny day I look out the window it's round 10 after 12, Inhale the car exhaust smells, take in soft blue and white in pastels. Client on the Galaxy cell, time to make moves strike a deal. Cruisin' the avenues in round about routes, cuz the scenery's swell. Stop by my coffee haunt, I think that them owners are Greek. They speak kinda funny, but their triple shots get me tweek'd. Plus the cashier, she's real sweet, why I'm there least five days a week. Then it's back on the street, head bobbing to radio generic type beats. They say this place is run down, worn, just cracks on brick walls. A den of crack addicts and bad habits, but I don't think that at all. It's not a heavenless zone just full of the adreneline prone. It's also home of the proudly humble and mentally strong. And I could go on but I just arrived and my clients outside. I get out the car adjust the tie, shake his hand and say "Hi."

10-16-2014, 03:51 PM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	this didn't feel finished bro. if this is actual realness then yeah cool thats cool and i get why u ended where u did. maybe now come back and add on to this and tell us the rest of the story? i kept thinking this was coming out of the wire season 2 i think? or was it 3 where theyre at the docks? the one dude always tryna scheme and coffee with the greek etc and being on the streets, thats the picture it painted for me anyways.. __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

10-16-2014, 04:06 PM	#3
AndyHiro Yeah Im kinda like that Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 107 Rep Power: 0	Thanks, I tried to write happy. I'm not good at it anymore.