05-12-2015, 02:31 AM | #1 |
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Razah 1-0 vs fraze 1-0 - FRAZE WINS VIA DQ FEEDING
Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates:
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Razah @fraze |
05-12-2015, 06:09 PM | #2 |
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hey! check it out.
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05-12-2015, 11:36 PM | #3 |
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05-15-2015, 12:09 AM | #4 |
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how bad?
you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders.. concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable, you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King, Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC, i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether, he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either… ….is there even a point in me coming with a closer… i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters... |
05-15-2015, 07:02 PM | #5 |
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yo, ima need an extension. bulls game later.
if that's cool with you, then dope. if not, it's whatever. cool verse. |
05-15-2015, 07:28 PM | #6 |
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go for it man. ext is yours. i might edit my closer if you haven't posted. we'll see.
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05-16-2015, 06:49 PM | #7 |
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Busy week.
All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea// They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore - Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours// That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles Now, on to the weekend. Holler |
05-16-2015, 10:55 PM | #8 |
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you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders.. miss concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable, you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you light faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King, Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC, good i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether, he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either… light ….is there even a point in me coming with a closer… i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters... miss razah All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce good He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea// airball They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt miss I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore - Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours// light That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles miss vote=fraze |
05-17-2015, 12:48 AM | #9 |
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you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order
Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders.. Reach. Nah concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable, you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you No wit at all here. Really? faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King, Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC, Wording was weak af. Concept okay i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether, he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either… Very played ….is there even a point in me coming with a closer… i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters... Wtf is this shit All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce Hahaha good He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea// Feeding? They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt Played out I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore - Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours// A jab That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles Wtf is this Razah wins with the opener |
05-17-2015, 11:30 PM | #10 |
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SEC
vs. Frasier there were some close hits and misses on both sides. really could go either way. v/fraze |
05-17-2015, 11:36 PM | #11 |
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Sec,
Vs David Pearce Man. I don't think I can go into massive detail about this one cos not exactly feeling enough it to muster the energy but the fraise line was enough for Rasha to take IMO V/razah |
05-17-2015, 11:57 PM | #12 |
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what's going on here?
did razah feed with that Somalia bar? withholding my vote til I see an explanation |
05-18-2015, 01:58 AM | #13 | |
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you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders.. ^some maulin/somalia or even somalian (which is neither the name of the country nor of its inhabitants) doesnt work for me at all. which is a shame, cuz it would'a been a rly direct personal hit w/ wp. but yea. too stretched concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable, you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you ^aaaite. it's a personal, but not hard-hitting faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King, Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC, ^aite i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether, he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either… ^dece, but sharp wp is pretty played at this point. and this isn't even that direct. but yea, kinda okay ….is there even a point in me coming with a closer… i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters... ^nah. don't like this kinda line. vs. All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce ^cool He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea// ^so yea. apparently flipping isn't against this league's rules. but it's still not cool. the bar isn't that gd anyways They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt ^ehhh. pretty basic wp I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore - Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours// ^this coulda been flipped harder, the concept wasn't that bad tho That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles ^nah well. seems like neither tried to hard here. fraze dropped the ball w/ his closer. those kinda lines never work, unless ur actually a txt legend w/ godly wording. his opener was too stretched. sec was his best line, the others weren't misses but didn't rly hit either. i think this verse cud'a been much better w/ some more time spent on it. like, there were a lotta concepts that would'a been hard hits if u developed the some more. and just don't use lines like ur closer anymore, pls. raz' opener was nice. lotb for sure. next line wasn't good, and even tho u probably can't be dq'ed for feeding (as it's not in the rules), i rly don't like the feeding nor the concept. then ur next two weren't bad but not rly hits either. closer, i didn't like. so each has one hit, but raz' hit was better & the lotb, so i think i gotta give it to him. would'a liked both to spend some more time on their verses, becuz the basics are def there, so i can see yall dropping something rly gd for sure. anyways, v/raz |
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05-18-2015, 03:21 AM | #14 |
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Some maulin & Razah back
Vs. Opener & name in the middle of yours Both had bad misses with frazes closer and razahs somalia bar which was feeding off his opponents verse. even on quotes but got fraze w/ better overall verse V-fraze |
05-18-2015, 05:50 AM | #15 |
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you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order
Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders.. He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea//
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