Interdimensional portal physics

veritas · 09-03-2013, 02:40 PM

Mothership walls plastered with memorandums,
that dictate the protocols, for dipping in vacuums.
How to Marco-Polo the deep ends of singularity magnets,
Where light tip toes, it’s disparities of masses.
Mechanical autopilot, the subliminal televised,
Radiation ultraviolet, Pi it Phi it, twice it’s analyzed
beneath the border of Switzerland and France comes the closest,
measure the span, then gravity bends and folds it…
bring two places in space closer, wormhole mojo,
Earth houses the eternal, but that’s on the low-low.
Fa sho though, speed is irrelevant, if distance is manipulated
Distance is irrelevant, if speed breaks the rate of where flesh is mated
186 thousand miles a second keeps the spirit in it’s cocoon,
That’s how God knew you before you were formed in the womb
Sacred geometry describes the Golden Lotus bloom
Too soon. Keep it underground like water on the moon.

Split · 09-06-2013, 06:59 AM

Nice hat.

Wording was dope as fuck here. You didnt waste or misplace a single word. Content was cool... I'm not really familiar with Star Trek or sci-fi but this gave off a light-hearted vibe, kinda like a cultural supplement to explain the magnificence of future technologies. Was that a CERN reference I saw?

Marco Polo line was srs dope.

Had a hard time fitting God into this verse and I mean that figuratively. like I feel like any sort of religious allusion is a tactical ploy but I don't get it, other than the idea that people claim we're "toying with God's physics" but in a way God has always been the alpha and the omega of human development... as we figuratively, literally move away from the idea of the garden of Eden we move closer to it, figuratively, literally.... such a self-fulfilling prophecy. like sending your kids out to go on an adventure/ play and they always come home as the sun sets

Good verse! I really liked it. Could have done with some more full-bodied flow or advanced rhyme control, just as icing on the cake. You're definitely capable.

veritas · 09-06-2013, 08:52 AM

Preciate the feed split. We dont know nothing is the point. And yes at cern lol

MarylandMade · 09-07-2013, 06:24 PM

What the hell? This is Bill Nye The Science Guy poetry on steroids! lol I love this.

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Originally Posted by VERITAS

Fa sho though, speed is irrelevant, if distance is manipulated
Distance is irrelevant, if speed breaks the rate of where flesh is mated

This is my favorite line. Amazing work.

dead man · 09-08-2013, 02:10 PM

sometimes i read your overly pious posts and sort of furrow my brow. you have some great insight on a broad range of topics but when you begin to provide the bible as your baseline it tends to waver my confidence in that insight. you know i talked to a buddy of mine who tried to argue that psychology wasn't a 'real' science?

anyway

i mention said furrowing because this verse sort of points a different light towards that attitude. one which i think we share to differing degrees.. that science and religion are not opposites. they are equal parts of one whole process. a system of thought and consequence.

even the conception of a God has it's root in scientific doctrine. why we have faith.

numbers are only as true as God. depending on how far you take it.

feeling stupid right about now but that's sort of a place i've been working towards for a long time. because a unilateral belief system never gave me peace.

thanks V.

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09-06-2013, 06:59 AM	#2
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899396	Nice hat. Wording was dope as fuck here. You didnt waste or misplace a single word. Content was cool... I'm not really familiar with Star Trek or sci-fi but this gave off a light-hearted vibe, kinda like a cultural supplement to explain the magnificence of future technologies. Was that a CERN reference I saw? Marco Polo line was srs dope. Had a hard time fitting God into this verse and I mean that figuratively. like I feel like any sort of religious allusion is a tactical ploy but I don't get it, other than the idea that people claim we're "toying with God's physics" but in a way God has always been the alpha and the omega of human development... as we figuratively, literally move away from the idea of the garden of Eden we move closer to it, figuratively, literally.... such a self-fulfilling prophecy. like sending your kids out to go on an adventure/ play and they always come home as the sun sets Good verse! I really liked it. Could have done with some more full-bodied flow or advanced rhyme control, just as icing on the cake. You're definitely capable. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

09-08-2013, 02:10 PM	#5
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,468 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	sometimes i read your overly pious posts and sort of furrow my brow. you have some great insight on a broad range of topics but when you begin to provide the bible as your baseline it tends to waver my confidence in that insight. you know i talked to a buddy of mine who tried to argue that psychology wasn't a 'real' science? anyway i mention said furrowing because this verse sort of points a different light towards that attitude. one which i think we share to differing degrees.. that science and religion are not opposites. they are equal parts of one whole process. a system of thought and consequence. even the conception of a God has it's root in scientific doctrine. why we have faith. numbers are only as true as God. depending on how far you take it. feeling stupid right about now but that's sort of a place i've been working towards for a long time. because a unilateral belief system never gave me peace. thanks V. 1 __________________ Zack Wicks for president