02-25-2019, 02:35 PM | #1 |
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02-25-2019, 03:18 PM | #2 |
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02-25-2019, 05:02 PM | #3 |
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02-28-2019, 08:51 PM | #4 |
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Lol wat fucking fantasy flute landed me here!?
,Aero u better show up for this match Not even sure if this is real life.or.not |
02-28-2019, 09:45 PM | #5 |
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Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1 Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag 15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes
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03-01-2019, 06:46 AM | #6 |
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We've been best buddies since 2003 & it comes to this
. . When you're out of town phone sexing your wife We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya? I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!
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03-01-2019, 09:04 AM | #7 |
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Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead fucking dope You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses wording was meh imo but the concept was nasty You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1 sick lol Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag pretty sick 15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside loooool aight You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever lmfao cool wp But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has concept is dope but a female "groaning on u overtime" is the biggest concept reach of all time. still love the punch/concept tho I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings lmfao cool punch but idk about the whole setup just being u flexing. it's still cool tho This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning getting his diction airy seems like a reach but as usual cool wp Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes cool .. We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me dopeeeee She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee lol sick Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew quite dope I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade pretty light, it's aight Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya? I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture lmfao aight That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay what on earth, i must be missing something here other than that uh oh thread Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate sick Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude idk how this will be accepted nowadays but this was lotb for me Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?! lmfao so corny but it was funny .. Idk man this is by far the closest battle I've read since being back. Dom came with some sick WP as usual and Aero also came with some sick WP but had more of a joke verse/some funny shit mixed in. Either way this was absurdly close and I doubt this battle will be a sweep in any means. Both verses were also pretty clean structurally as well. Dom had a few concept reaches to me and a lil wording problems throughout and Aero had that one bar I clearly did not understand. Overall I have to barely edge to Aero but it wouldn't surprise me if this went down to the wire. Two very dope verses & good shit. v/ Aero |
03-02-2019, 09:52 PM | #8 |
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When you're out of town phone sexing your wife
We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me Didnt like the intro "friends" part but this was good. She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee Cool current event line, worded good Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew Lol..cool personal, I didnt particularly like the reference here as it's a bit too straight forward I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade raw.. but a little too simple Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya? I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture I liked this, I just read Blue line but it didnt take away from the concept to me That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay Didnt care for this one Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate i think ive seen this but I dont recall where offhand, this was cool & setup well Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude straight Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?! was ok, feels a bit corny tho. VS Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead I've seen this the past season, I think Schade did it. But you had no way of knowing...this hit. Solid opener You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses good personal, tied to two things pretty well. You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1 Individually the wordplays are played but the tieins helped here imo Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag This was fresh. Good meta tie in and humor in the line was done well 15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside Hmm it's ok...clever but not really hardhitting or funny to me...but it wasnt bad at all. It is still a creative take on a 'trailblazer' compound word. You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever 'Cauterize' wp feels old to me and the flip wasnt anything fresh enough to give it a pass for me tbh But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has Wording is good here, setup helped this as well but I just didnt feel this as a personal or wp as much I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings Cool. I had a safe space bar years back but this was a good flip & hit This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning This was creative...not sure saying his diction airy means anything but I know it's just the wp for the searching for meaning part. Points for creativity Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes Solid wordplay. Wharf Aer was good to me Tough call. I liked Aeros humor & crispness in execution and I liked Doms wordplay & personals. BOTH had high hits, equally as good wording & executing their concepts well. I think though Dom was a bit more versatile here. I enjoyed his read a bit better tbh. A couple of Aeros lines that werent heavy like the "Uhoh line' and Katana Blade were written well but felt a bit dry in terms of a good punch. Not to say Dom didnt have a couple passable wordplays. Aero had that opener, Austin & Hit Sack. Dom started solid, cooled a bit in the middle *& finished solid again. I can see how this can be close depending on preference. I think Dominate resonated w/ me more though. Good battle BOTW probably. vote - Dominate Last edited by Saint; 03-03-2019 at 11:44 AM. |
03-03-2019, 04:30 AM | #9 |
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you have the written composition of a vet here. you're truly skilled in wording and phrasing..I enjoy your lines..the cauterize line was fire..niice one.. Aero - Good verse here man..I enjoyed the steve irwin line and the katana line..you came well equipped.. Overall - dope battle here..but dominate vet skills long lasted him in this battle..good battle guys.. V/ Dominate |
03-03-2019, 09:31 AM | #10 |
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questionnnaire was niiiice, solid wording
tag team was statement ish d composed has been done, decent twist spring collection was ok sweatervest was corny to me cauterize was cool.. not bad wasnt feelin groan safe space was aight, everything intertwined i wana like diction airy bc the execution was flawless but nahh, not fuckin with that wp closer was a stretch vs toy story i was actually waitn for a gun bar lol.. this was a lil light zion works, nice irwin was ok liked katana blade cock and ball torture was a pause uhoh second pause, ummm golden gate was nasty australia was light wasnt feelin the closer this was wp heavy.. dom was really up and down, he had some jabs with the best line being the opener.. couple lines aero dropped i wasnt fuckin with, but his highs were alot better with golden gate the lotb.. yeah, he gets it even when dom dropped 1 more bar v aero
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03-03-2019, 12:51 PM | #11 |
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Dominate: This was a good read from you. I like your wording. Questionaire was
cool. Tag verse was a decent personal. D composed is an old idea but the personal tie in made it ok. Haven’t seen cauterize before, the flip was ok. Safe Space was original. I dig it. Warfare was a save closer. Good verse. Aero: nice concise bars here. Zion was nice. Irwin was a nasty. Tie ins made katana ok. Hitting the sack was cool. I liked golden gate. Descriptive. Thought Australia was decent. Overall: Aero takes it. On first read I had Don but I thought Aeros concept Were fresher. More entertaining. Good read, this a close battle Last edited by Ryno; 03-03-2019 at 01:05 PM. |
03-03-2019, 01:42 PM | #12 |
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Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead (Heard similar concept - a scantron fill something with led scheme - so this didn’t feel the freshest. Executed well though) You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses (I like this. You weaved two solid personal angles together well) You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1 (I think the D composed, the carrion, and dead meat flips would have been just okay by themselves. When you put them together, it’s a solid scheme though. This wasn’t heavy but it’s pretty good. I like the personal dig too) Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag (Spring collection/dress like a fag works but it’s not the cleanest flip. The Spring Collection phrase also seems a little awkward for the making him pay meaning. Overall this was decent. Execution kept it from being a miss) 15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside (The trail blazer flip was light imo. I didn’t care for this line) You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever (Good. The wp was slick af. Tied it back into the punch pretty well) But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has (Lol thought this wordplay was slick too. Solid wording here. Pretty good) I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings (This works but I thought the safe space flip was kinda basic. This one is just okay) This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning (Son...this is nasty. The set up damn near perfect - “no purpose in breathing” sets up both the throat shot part and the searching for meaning part. Diction airy was dope to me. Yeah I fuck with this) Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes (I’m missing the punch/wp here. I’m not getting the pushing you off it part) When you're out of town phone sexing your wife We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me (Lol the flip was light but the humor is there. I think this one is decent) She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee (This works but the association is kinda loose imo. Hard to explain but it’s like he came out his shoe and I guess he went down on bender knee but those not the phrases you think of when you think of the Zion shoe incident. Hope that explains it well, but pretty much it works but didnt feel like the cleanest flip) Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew (This is pretty good. I think his death or bday or something was recent so the reference feels fresh. Personal jab. I do like Dom’s carried you punch better but this one’s pretty good) I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade (Yep this is good too. The run by him flip is good) Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya? I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture (Pause. Getting dominated by his mom is a very weird angle to take. The flip does work though. Set up coulda been better. Ay if this the route you wanna take in the battle, go ahead - the wording was fine. I guess this was solid) That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay (Lmfao pause but this funny af. Technically speaking, the last bar was better. This was funny though) Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate (This is nasty. Red beams over a body is nice in itself but ending it with The Golden Gate entendre is dope af) Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude (I think this was ambitious but wording wasn’t clean enough and it felt forced/stretched. You got Austin to Aust which feels reachin, then you got rail ya/railing which is kind of a stretch too. I like the ambition but this was gonna be a tough concept to make work) Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?! (I like that’s you staying true to your style. The the wp seem so corny and stretched that it kinda works in your favor. Adds to the humor or the whole bar. I thought this was light but it landed) Ay this battle was fire. Dom’s dictionary and aero’s golden gate bars were disgusting. First time Ive read Dom before and was impressed. It’s always dope to see Aero make an appearance mix it up in the ring and he was dope here. Battle was very close. It’s going to come down to a combination of preference and how you judge certain bars. I think Dom had a miss or two but overall had a very clean verse. All the wp came off smooth, creative concepts, personals, overall just a very well written verse. Aero came with a very consistent verse as well. Had some personal angles as well, creativity, and the humor is what sets aero apart from any other battler here. This one’s close. I think aero had less misses but I think Dom had a very clean verse and a lot of very heavy punches. I got Dom narrowly edging this one. Mvgt Dominate |
03-03-2019, 03:18 PM | #13 |
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Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1 You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning This is some gd writing while staying strong wit wp you successfully accomplished. That diction airy bar was nasty. Pretty much well written verse all the way through utilizing a lot of different techniques. You have a few elements to your setup/ punches which allows you to take different directions on how you want to execute. Nice. Vs We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate The run by him was coo, but came off a bit simplistic. I like the bar, but I didn't love it. This was a dope verse as well but had a couple wtf moments. You have a lot of sex bars lol. Some were funny, but others make me wonder what you're into irl. No judgement. I feel D adds different levels while staying aggressive in his style. Its actually intriguing to read. Aero has humor which also a quality I like but just felt dominate had the better 2 if I had to pick one. Great read guys but Vote- dominate |
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Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead Nice opener You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses I think this personal was well put together You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1 Ehh, think the wording here a little out of place Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag Ok, think the concept was nice, but the execution lacked abit 15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside Lol this was fire imo You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever Nice again But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has Didn't to much feel this one I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings Ehhh, very light hit This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning Nice Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes This is a miss only cause it kinda like your almost making a statement in there, with no punch executed --------- We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me Lol funny & fiya She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee Nice hit again here and very current Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew I like this, solid wording too I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade Light on the execution here Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya? I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture Didn't to much like this one That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay Lol Nahhh Aero Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate This is nice, picking back up Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude Light jab here, could have set it up to hit way better Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?! Nahhh This was a good read here, took me a couple reads, but I got to go with Dom with at least being more consistent. Both had fiya highlights, but Aero started drifting near the end which his misses came off lower then Dom misses. Good shit props to both V-Dom
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5-3 thanks to all who voted you’ll be receiving positive rep from me. Jabari had most in-depth breakdown thanks.
Good job Dom!
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03-03-2019, 07:39 PM | #16 |
Tread Lightly.
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2,313
Battle Record: 26-9
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You too brother. Always a pleasure.
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