10-01-2018, 08:39 PM | #1 |
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Knucklehead vs Sharp[OPEN [KNUCK WINS]
NWL:Season I: Week III
Verses ares due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30 Voting on 2 battles is required. TOPIC: THIS WEEK IS HAIKU GUNBAR WEEK PRETTY SELF EXPLANATORY. FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO DONT KNOW WHAT A HAIKU IS. ITS A JAPANESE FORM OF POETRY CONSISTING OF 17 TOTAL SYLLABLES.FIRST LINE IS 5, SECOND LINE IS 7 AND LAST LINE IS 5. SINCE ITS ONLY 3 LINES, THIS WEEK YOU HAVE WRITE 3 SEPARATE GUNBAR HAIKUS, SO A TOTAL OF 9 LINES. PRETTY EASY. VOTING WILL BE EXPLAINED IN THE MAG. GOODLUCK. @knuclehead @Sharp Last edited by Inno; 10-08-2018 at 08:03 PM. |
10-01-2018, 09:22 PM | #2 |
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10-03-2018, 09:20 PM | #3 |
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Killer. Unfeeling,
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10-07-2018, 07:16 PM | #4 | |
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Spin midair, Ballerinas Those heatseeking rounds Best armor up kid And you betta check ya brakes Metal on metal Headshot with the snub Put noodles outside mugs And this ain’t craft day
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10-08-2018, 01:57 AM | #5 |
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Sharp: First haiku ends in 6 syl. to me.
just cause you put a coma, in the middle of a sentence don't make it haiku. What's unfeeling? Knock: First 'ku is the best of this battle. Craft day was a shitty rhyme other than a few nice cuplets. Honestly....I had hoped you guys strung the 3 haiku's into 6 bars or so and punch with some swag and flow type shit....aint that why you signed in here? With that said, Knuck had the better 3 v/Khead
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10-08-2018, 08:02 PM | #6 |
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Thought knucks first ku was his best one. Thought sharps second ku was his best. Out of the 2 I got Knuck edging it out with a bit more smoothness. Feel like knucks was more comfortable with the topic and it kind of showed. Thanks for showing up fellas
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