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Old 11-21-2016, 09:55 PM   #1
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Old 11-22-2016, 08:49 AM   #2
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Old 11-23-2016, 10:26 AM   #3
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Check & goin 10 i don't have time to do 16 this week.
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Old 11-27-2016, 11:10 PM   #4
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i could only key 12, tired as fuck about to sleep, my bad.

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yah..
wife'll fuck anyone any where, she been railed on the pavement
ur sluts a Freaknik & she smashed more guys than Atlanta's male population
i Hershey was tryna get u killed, i'll do it if she sendin me cream
when Metal Rings & hits ur spine the Krackel be wider than a vending machine
im 3-0 vs you & i just keep merkin ur frail nonsense
for yrs ur faggot ass been Fidel's longer than ur country was held hostage
drive-bys on u & ur crew, hear the tires squeeling quick
shells pin down ya team one by one till they out... this Survivor Series shit
but we kno ur a closet homo, ur lookin to freak men
cuz NBA faggot & he's touched more balls than a 3pt contest All-Star weekend
kill u then beat u in the after life while i blatt uzi's
i'll have 13 Ghost's floatin thru walls shape shifting more than that movie
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Old 11-28-2016, 01:30 PM   #5
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Dear Mexico...
I got that clean on the streets so I really get paid
Don't need to get my hands dirty to shop... while u in ur family one fixin hoopties for minimum wage
I got killers with rage; put a hit out on this bitch cuz I deal with problems like a rebel
u don't have those kind of authorities... except for the kind u call when u're in any type of trouble
Too wise & subtle; I'll disappear this faggot somewhere in the earth's green
that body will never turn up... while I'm partying with enough liquor to fuck up ur whole search team
u, hurt me? Ur gun-talk weak as fuck & u thinking it's good stuff
Nigga, I show my strength with the arm extended... I call that a Rocky push-up
Bring ya squad against me & lol at u thinkin it'll be a true dog-fight
But homie, I got enough cans to spray ur team... I call that the new bud light
Ur daughter's got freak-potential so fuck what this scorned nerd says
cuz I'ma teach her how to work both ways... otherwise she'd just grow up to be ur forced wordplay
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Old 11-28-2016, 09:43 PM   #6
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wife'll fuck anyone any where, she been railed on the pavement
ur sluts a Freaknik & she smashed more guys than Atlanta's male population
im 3-0 vs you & i just keep merkin ur frail nonsense
for yrs ur faggot ass been Fidel's longer than ur country was held hostage
kill u then beat u in the after life while i blatt uzi's
i'll have 13 Ghost's floatin thru walls shape shifting more than that movie

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I got killers with rage; put a hit out on this bitch cuz I deal with problems like a rebel
u don't have those kind of authorities... except for the kind u call when u're in any type of trouble
u, hurt me? Ur gun-talk weak as fuck & u thinking it's good stuff
Nigga, I show my strength with the arm extended... I call that a Rocky push-up

This was a good read.
Allen botched a word or 2 wording on the candy vending machine to cause it from being complete. & something took away from the survivor series line. It was something minor w.wording, otherwise his whole verse could've been quoted imo.
Nik, i almost quoted the first bar, & I'm pretty use to reading your steez but it was a bit off. Last bar didn't grab me. The cans & bud light one needed better wording execute to it. It was like a couple words shy of getting your point of reference across , although I saw where you were going with it.

Mvgt -Allen .

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Old 11-29-2016, 07:23 AM   #7
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wife'll fuck anyone any where, she been railed on the pavement
ur sluts a Freaknik & she smashed more guys than Atlanta's male population

Solid

i Hershey was tryna get u killed, i'll do it if she sendin me cream
when Metal Rings & hits ur spine the Krackel be wider than a vending machine

Heat

im 3-0 vs you & i just keep merkin ur frail nonsense
for yrs ur faggot ass been Fidel's longer than ur country was held hostage

Too raw

drive-bys on u & ur crew, hear the tires squeeling quick
shells pin down ya team one by one till they out... this Survivor Series shit

Okay

but we kno ur a closet homo, ur lookin to freak men
cuz NBA faggot & he's touched more balls than a 3pt contest All-Star weekend

You know what you doing

kill u then beat u in the after life while i blatt uzi's
i'll have 13 Ghost's floatin thru walls shape shifting more than that movie

Okay

ear Mexico...
I got that clean on the streets so I really get paid
Don't need to get my hands dirty to shop... while u in ur family one fixin hoopties for minimum wage

Okay

I got killers with rage; put a hit out on this bitch cuz I deal with problems like a rebel
u don't have those kind of authorities... except for the kind u call when u're in any type of trouble

Solid

Too wise & subtle; I'll disappear this faggot somewhere in the earth's green
that body will never turn up... while I'm partying with enough liquor to fuck up ur whole search team

Okay

u, hurt me? Ur gun-talk weak as fuck & u thinking it's good stuff
Nigga, I show my strength with the arm extended... I call that a Rocky push-up

Okay..

Bring ya squad against me & lol at u thinkin it'll be a true dog-fight
But homie, I got enough cans to spray ur team... I call that the new bud light

Double liquor lines is in poor taste

Ur daughter's got freak-potential so fuck what this scorned nerd says
cuz I'ma teach her how to work both ways... otherwise she'd just grow up to be ur forced wordplay

Hot punchline, rough delivery


Good shit

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Old 11-29-2016, 08:07 AM   #8
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wife'll fuck anyone any where, she been railed on the pavement
ur sluts a Freaknik & she smashed more guys than Atlanta's male population
decent

i Hershey was tryna get u killed, i'll do it if she sendin me cream
when Metal Rings & hits ur spine the Krackel be wider than a vending machine
some good shit in there but bad execution

im 3-0 vs you & i just keep merkin ur frail nonsense
for yrs ur faggot ass been Fidel's longer than ur country was held hostage
nice

drive-bys on u & ur crew, hear the tires squeeling quick
shells pin down ya team one by one till they out... this Survivor Series shit
whack

but we kno ur a closet homo, ur lookin to freak men
cuz NBA faggot & he's touched more balls than a 3pt contest All-Star weekend
not only is nba played, calling him "n" for a nameplay is whack

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cool

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I got that clean on the streets so I really get paid
Don't need to get my hands dirty to shop... while u in ur family one fixin hoopties for minimum wage
nah

I got killers with rage; put a hit out on this bitch cuz I deal with problems like a rebel
u don't have those kind of authorities... except for the kind u call when u're in any type of trouble
good concept, bad execution

Too wise & subtle; I'll disappear this faggot somewhere in the earth's green
that body will never turn up... while I'm partying with enough liquor to fuck up ur whole search team
dece

u, hurt me? Ur gun-talk weak as fuck & u thinking it's good stuff
Nigga, I show my strength with the arm extended... I call that a Rocky push-up
dope

Bring ya squad against me & lol at u thinkin it'll be a true dog-fight
But homie, I got enough cans to spray ur team... I call that the new bud light
cans/spray concept, nah

Ur daughter's got freak-potential so fuck what this scorned nerd says
cuz I'ma teach her how to work both ways... otherwise she'd just grow up to be ur forced wordplay
take the "s" off says n this is a pretty good hit, otherwise says & play don't rhyme

sooooooooo

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nik coulda got this if he spent a little more time on his verse
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Lol @ freaknik , Vending machine was dope, I liked the survivor series jawn too. Solid verse



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Opener was koo, rocky push up was nice n budlight cans i was fuckin wit


This was another solid match this week. Definitely had sum good shit from both. Ak barely edged this one imo.


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ill-nik-A aka thirteen

yah..
wife'll fuck anyone any where, she been railed on the pavement
ur sluts a Freaknik & she smashed more guys than Atlanta's male population
cool wordplay...set up was light but punch was solid
i Hershey was tryna get u killed, i'll do it if she sendin me cream
when Metal Rings & hits ur spine the Krackel be wider than a vending machine
nice
im 3-0 vs you & i just keep merkin ur frail nonsense
for yrs ur faggot ass been Fidel's longer than ur country was held hostage
dope
drive-bys on u & ur crew, hear the tires squeeling quick
shells pin down ya team one by one till they out... this Survivor Series shit
dont know the fuck you talkin bout so fuck this
but we kno ur a closet homo, ur lookin to freak men
cuz NBA faggot & he's touched more balls than a 3pt contest All-Star weekend
Not a fan of this bar tbh. read real choppy and not a fan of letter plays
kill u then beat u in the after life while i blatt uzi's
i'll have 13 Ghost's floatin thru walls shape shifting more than that movie
at first i wasnt a fan...But your set up tied in nice here to complete this for connection

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Dear Mexico...
I got that clean on the streets so I really get paid
Don't need to get my hands dirty to shop... while u in ur family one fixin hoopties for minimum wage
read a bit choppy but nice personal
I got killers with rage; put a hit out on this bitch cuz I deal with problems like a rebel
u don't have those kind of authorities... except for the kind u call when u're in any type of trouble
this was aight...
Too wise & subtle; I'll disappear this faggot somewhere in the earth's green
that body will never turn up... while I'm partying with enough liquor to fuck up ur whole search team
thought this was dope tbh
u, hurt me? Ur gun-talk weak as fuck & u thinking it's good stuff
Nigga, I show my strength with the arm extended... I call that a Rocky push-up
nice
Bring ya squad against me & lol at u thinkin it'll be a true dog-fight
But homie, I got enough cans to spray ur team... I call that the new bud light
Really? shits played
Ur daughter's got freak-potential so fuck what this scorned nerd says
cuz I'ma teach her how to work both ways... otherwise she'd just grow up to be ur forced wordplay
dope. bit wordy but i fucks with this

Overall close battle imo. both had some dope concepts ILL had that cans bud light spray bull shit bar.... allen had a bar that went over my head. PM me and we'll see if i change my vote cos i got this close in quotables but edging this to NIK
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Old 11-30-2016, 06:15 AM   #11
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4-1 AK up.
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Nika - your carry over multis were horrendous. I didn't like one punch or concept in this verse. This was a wordy, choppy verse with predictable punchlines.


Allen - you had a couple good concepts. That metal rings could've been so dope but my how you butchered it. Only line I kinda liked was Freaknik even thoug preductable. The more balls than all star game was just lazy, Fidel fed Ls is no good.

Poor battle here and I won't honor it with a vote.


But since Cred will delete this post if I don't I'll go Allen for being a lil more creative even though he bludgeoned good concepts.
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