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Working On A Mixtape |
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This was cool bro i dig it. Couldve left the fresh prince quotes out tho. But yea this was cool man. Keep banging shit out
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The production quality could use a lot of work — particularly the mix — and you're a bit languorous and loquacious. But the skills are there, and the lyrics are strong.
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Loquacious.
Good job.
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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That would have made sense if you flipped them.
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Eh, close.
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Sounded cool to me. A lot more polished than what I heard from a few of the dudes that record around these parts.
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