12-14-2014, 11:21 PM | #1 |
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timeless 0-0 vs Sharp Nine 0-0 - SHARP WINS
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12-14-2014, 11:21 PM | #2 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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10 cool? I'll prolly drop early I'm supposed to go to victory brewery on thursday
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12-15-2014, 11:17 AM | #3 |
past tense
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that in downingtown? I might be thinking of something else
yeah 10 cool ill drop early too |
12-15-2014, 12:25 PM | #4 |
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That's the one haha. Lot of high abv beers I figured any sixer fan would be well acquainted
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12-15-2014, 12:55 PM | #5 |
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this pro bmx rider dude collin I used to chill with years ago from Downingtown either worked there or knew someone who did, went there a few times.
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12-18-2014, 03:43 PM | #6 | |
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Worst newb tourney verse? That's really something, bruh Objective criticism's good, except when even he thinks you fucking suck we both like philly b-ball, but i'll still bring the torment u entered the league w/ Noel but this loss'll be worse than a Sixer performance dude can only score with the fattest & shittiest of hoes any bitch that T-Bone got enough meat on her for like 50 of those n ya girl ain't satisfied. all she thinks about in bed is better men she wants a change in Late Night... n I dont mean swapping Colbert for Letterman i dont wanna talk to this loser any more, i fuckin had it If I could put time in a bottle, I'd throw it in the ocean w/ a note saying 'I'm a giant faggot' |
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12-19-2014, 12:41 AM | #7 |
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Stuck with the L on his forehead, death come from under you
You get dumb and dumber to, you won't get a W Get a rubber too, your heat bringing wont be lasting long If you ever make it rain, I'll be checking for cats and dogs. Get pissed, beat it out to the tune of some astro-glide Raising hands to women only tells them you need to go outside. You dont fuck em, love em or trust em. You have sex with a tree So fucking gay your ecstatic, and she feeds off my electricity. Failed your marriage proposal, girl like the ferraris I sell, b This rookie with a kneedown make jabari look healthy. |
12-19-2014, 12:54 AM | #8 |
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Noel and time bottle were nice. The t-bone was ehh ok. The rest were eh....
Vs. Jabari Time ur electricity bar if worded better could have been nice bruh but ur first 3 bars were ehh bruh couldn't Fuck with it really. v/ sharp clearly
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12-19-2014, 01:14 AM | #9 |
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Lol dope verse
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12-19-2014, 01:38 AM | #10 |
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Noel - played concept but this worked for me
Late night - i was diggin it, nice set-up Time in a bottle - felt long but had a sting Vs Kneedown - nice current concept Ecstatic- had potentiaL Timeless shake off the rust and as everyone says work on wording so those lines pop. I think you can focus less on flow and carrying over rhymescheme and more on the set-ups. Sharp not much i can say other than i dig your set-ups and feel your verses read smooth. Vote- sharp |
12-19-2014, 01:40 AM | #11 |
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Time verse had no punches. Signs of being in the Aowl too long. Sharp took it with a better battle verse
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12-19-2014, 08:40 PM | #12 |
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Worst newb tourney verse? That's really something, bruh
Objective criticism's good, except when even he thinks you fucking suck good opener we both like philly b-ball, but i'll still bring the torment u entered the league w/ Noel but this loss'll be worse than a Sixer performance good dude can only score with the fattest & shittiest of hoes any bitch that T-Bone got enough meat on her for like 50 of those ok n ya girl ain't satisfied. all she thinks about in bed is better men she wants a change in Late Night... n I dont mean swapping Colbert for Letterman ok i dont wanna talk to this loser any more, i fuckin had it If I could put time in a bottle, I'd throw it in the ocean w/ a note saying 'I'm a giant faggot' lol vs Stuck with the L on his forehead, death come from under you You get dumb and dumber to, you won't get a W ok Get a rubber too, your heat bringing wont be lasting long If you ever make it rain, I'll be checking for cats and dogs. ok Get pissed, beat it out to the tune of some astro-glide Raising hands to women only tells them you need to go outside. nah You dont fuck em, love em or trust em. You have sex with a tree So fucking gay your ecstatic, and she feeds off my electricity. no Failed your marriage proposal, girl like the ferraris I sell, b This rookie with a kneedown make jabari look healthy. okish got sharp gettin it . pretty consistent had like 3 or 2 more punches i liked more v/ sharp |
12-21-2014, 06:59 PM | #13 |
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Worst newb tourney verse? That's really something, bruh
Objective criticism's good, except when even he thinks you fucking suck Could have flipped that a lot better, the concept was solid...but this was okay we both like philly b-ball, but i'll still bring the torment u entered the league w/ Noel but this loss'll be worse than a Sixer performance This line was dope dude can only score with the fattest & shittiest of hoes any bitch that T-Bone got enough meat on her for like 50 of those Seen T-bone lines, it was eh n ya girl ain't satisfied. all she thinks about in bed is better men she wants a change in Late Night... n I dont mean swapping Colbert for Letterman Solid i dont wanna talk to this loser any more, i fuckin had it If I could put time in a bottle, I'd throw it in the ocean w/ a note saying 'I'm a giant faggot' lol, but not that great vs. Stuck with the L on his forehead, death come from under you You get dumb and dumber to, you won't get a W nope Get a rubber too, your heat bringing wont be lasting long If you ever make it rain, I'll be checking for cats and dogs. what? Get pissed, beat it out to the tune of some astro-glide Raising hands to women only tells them you need to go outside. okay? You dont fuck em, love em or trust em. You have sex with a tree So fucking gay your ecstatic, and she feeds off my electricity. first decent line Failed your marriage proposal, girl like the ferraris I sell, b This rookie with a kneedown make jabari look healthy. nope Sharp got this pretty easily. Time, you need to really work on tying concept together into punches...something like that electricity line. Keep working on it, I was quite impressed by Sharp here, I didnt think he was going to drop as well as he did. Props. V/ Sharp
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12-22-2014, 04:29 AM | #14 |
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Ecstatic, Kneedown
Vs T-bone, late night, time in a bottle V-Sharp |
12-22-2014, 06:34 AM | #15 |
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time wasnt as bad as some r saying. just need to wrk on how u deliver ur punches. sharps was more nc friendly so straight away he had an advantage. i liked sharps bottle concept if not his delivery. late night was a nice flip too. i liked ecstatic from timeless. sharp was better so he gets the w
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