06-02-2015, 01:35 AM | #1 |
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Fraze 3-1 vs Tic Tac 3-1 - FRAZE WINS
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06-02-2015, 08:53 PM | #2 |
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06-03-2015, 03:14 PM | #3 |
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06-04-2015, 07:16 AM | #4 |
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Cool. I'm dropping later today.
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06-04-2015, 08:56 AM | #5 |
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May need the ext if that's cool.
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06-04-2015, 06:38 PM | #6 |
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sure that's fine with me if the mods are cool with it. my verse is basically done, but I might tweak some stuff.
Edit: sent 12 to sharp, hope that's cool with the ext. @Tic Tac Last edited by fraze; 06-05-2015 at 08:26 AM. |
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You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip Quote:
How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win @Sharp @fraze |
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06-06-2015, 08:39 AM | #8 |
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it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause)
Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved, fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him, til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum, splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for, cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war, i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is, then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic, excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment, is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided, more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch, he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit |
06-06-2015, 09:34 AM | #9 |
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You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand im sittin here trying to get this but i dnt.. Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again bit corny, meh at best Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip ehh decent at best for me No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season bleh not feelin We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face good i liked this Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win nah man vs it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause) Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved, didnt like the first line, decent at best fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him, til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum, against ur setup was weird, overall decent at best here splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for, cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war, nah not feelin i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is, then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic, nah excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment, is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided, ok pretty cool, havent seen this wp used on him more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch, he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit coulda been much better, decent at best Wow im very surprised at this battle. Idk if Tic rushed or if he just had an off week but normally i see him come a lot doper than this, i only have him with 1 good line in his verse. That being said, it didnt really take much for Fraze to win but he barely even edged it. Fraze you have some ok concepts but ur wording and setups could be better. I have Fraze having 1 good line (less impact than Tics) but also 2 decent ones which is why he wins. Could go either way tho.. Vote: Fraze |
06-06-2015, 01:12 PM | #10 |
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Opener. I love the flow. Humorous bar aight way to start I suppose. Nika was ok. top off reminded me of orc. And I'm surprised I never heard of it. That's fresh af. Won to was a dagger in the sternum.bare mineral was cool closer eh Fraze Lol ur opener was slick. The syllable choice made it stand out to me. tac tile- I'm thinking kinda played bro. I've seen that concept on him If I'm not mistaken front and center was an attempt but it fizzled midway through its conception tac tics. No. Twitching paraplegics? Tac. Tics? Nahhh death and tac was lotb Tho. I fuck with that closer was simple word association. cut Above rest/throat slit Too simple. Use more tie ins Int erecting battle tictac flow is high n thigt like a marine crew cut I see the,work Put in. Top off Won to bare minerals Vs Opener Death by tacs V/tictac in a surprisingly close one
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06-07-2015, 04:01 AM | #11 |
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You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand nahh Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again not feelin, too simple Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip ok, simple, better wording coulda made it hit harder No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season nah, old concept We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face best line so far Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win nah i've read some of ur other verses recently, thought this one just came off rushed like u didnt have a lot of time to think of concepts. Lots of simple and older ones here. Ur wording was solid tho, and the bare minerals line was nice. More like that woulda helped. vs Fraze it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause) Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved, nahh fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him, til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum, decent, coulda related tactile in the set up to make it better splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for, cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war, nahh i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is, then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic, aight excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment, is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided, solid, wording coulda been better. more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch, he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit eh Ok verse... I thought ur best lines were the 2 nameplays. Rest I wasn't feelin that much, I think your tactile impressions line coulda been good had you related the tactile aspect in the set up more. The wording was just a little off. Death and Taxes line was prob the best one. I dunno, this is a tough one to vote on. I feel like Tac had the better verse in terms of wording and execution and scheme, but the concepts weren't as creative as Fraze's. Problem with Fraze is the lines lacked execution. To me the best line was the Bare Mineral line by Tac.. and that's what sways it for me. Vote Tac.. honestly is a toss up tho |
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06-08-2015, 09:10 AM | #13 |
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Did this earlier and was basically tied at 2 quotes a piece and had tactile as lotb edging bare minerals. Could go either way tho lol
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06-08-2015, 09:12 AM | #14 |
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You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand ok i guess. Kinda simple Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again same as opener, kinda simple Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip blah ok at best No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season blah We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face lol Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win simple again Vs. it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause) Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved, lol fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him, til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum, not really splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for, cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war, liked the tick-its/scalping tie in i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is, then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic, cool excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment, is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided, tax punches are played to death on tic but i liked the wording between death and tac's is more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch, he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit bad closer. i was gonna vote for u based on harder hitting punches until this line Got tic tac here, even tho i felt like giving it to fraze |
06-08-2015, 09:18 AM | #15 |
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You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand lol tru that nigga scarf food Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again meh/ Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip okay No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season okay We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face i like that Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win lmao fraze it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause) Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved, okay fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him, til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum, dope splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for, cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war, wack.. i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is, then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic, filler bar. excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment, is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided, dope more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch, he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit meh v/ Fraze just had more quotables for me. I think Tic had more consistency but the quotes outweighed the consistent jabs/misses |
06-08-2015, 09:20 AM | #16 |
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I have fraze here
wasn't feeling much at all from tic this week, no hate dug the tac tile punch, scalping punch... death & taxes was good too v/fraze |
06-08-2015, 10:14 AM | #17 |
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Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip - slick, but have seen these flipped A LOT in my day. We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face - this was solid. vs fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him, til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum - dope. excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment, is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided - had mad potential. could have been crazy but was mild, as is. OVERALL: Close one here. I think Tic underestimated his opponent and/or couldn't dig anything up to use against him. Fraze tac tile bar was dope, I liked it. Clean wording w/ a nice harsh execution. Other one I quoted was a nice concept, as well all thou I feel you could have been a little more creative and harsh with it. Kind of left the execution to open. Tic's top off bar was worded nicely, but have seen a lot of those flipped in many ways all involving the dome/gas fill up concept. Bare minerals was nice, tho. Tac tile was LOTB for me, so I'm give it to him... fraze got it |
06-08-2015, 10:33 AM | #18 |
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Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face Vs fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him, til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum, excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment, is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided, V/tic, this was dumb close had to re read, fraze really stepped his shit up, this was way better then any verse he ever dropped, i only quoted the dopest shit, there was alot of solid lines from both...i think tic had lotb & wins imo, could go either way, props to both. |
06-08-2015, 12:05 PM | #19 |
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Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip ^light but smooth We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face ^ set up coulda been better fraze fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him, til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum, ^ sick excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment, is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided, ^ concept was nice, wording was garbage two quoteables each. fraze had the better hits even tho they were both nps. tic didn't bring it like he usually does here v. fraze altho using a cut above the rest line in 2015 is disturbing |
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