11-27-2017, 08:10 PM | #1 |
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Week I: Incredible vs Diablo(SUB)[Diablo Wins]
Season 8 Verses are due FRIDAY at 11:59 Voting ends SUNDAY at 11:59 Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words Voting on 3 battles is required. Topic: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=126253 @2tripple0 vs @Incredible vs @Maximus Goodluck! Last edited by Inno; 12-04-2017 at 07:35 PM. |
11-28-2017, 05:51 PM | #2 |
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Checking in and my topic is: Floating with the Stars
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12-01-2017, 09:10 PM | #4 |
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Lost half my verse, tried to re write it last night and passed out. So Fuck it I'll post what I got
I cant even mustard the strength to stay sane for a day I've been dumped by the light and the darkness has nothing to say Sprinkled skies don't make it exciting nothing is enticing Floating with the stars but still fighting Deep sleep is the only time I see my future rising Trapped in this dark abyss with this current state is blissless If only everyone didn't know what a fist is, a gun or the real meaning of Christmas Up above it all but yet in the end I still fall Descending back to this hell shaped as a ball Back to the weekly grind, I wish this was the part that's all in my mind Wish I was just dreamin this time, not even a pinch could wake me & that's fine Floating with the stars I can see mars & its not too far It's within arms reach pardon me I'm so deep & this is not bazaar |
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12-02-2017, 01:50 PM | #7 |
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The world is our oyster with countless sojourns yet were preferring to loiter over setting out to explore. Every mountain we walk eventually has a summit in sight even if we've found it an awkward struggle to climb. Life is full of surprises, dead ends and avenues you'll discover in time they're tests meant to challenge you. Some extend into pastures new with funny results others end where the paths you choose come to a halt. It's wonderful just being able to live AND learn inside the push and the pull of the big, bad, world. There are twists and turns but we get there regardless and to begin that journey the first step is the hardest. So why not get up and march it as quick as you can it won't matter where it all started once you've finished the task. If you look back you'll never see what's ahead so think of the past as a means to an end. The key is to then learn from your missteps but keep up the venture, it's not worth giving in yet. Keep searching with interest, holding your nerve, and burning new bridges 'til every stone is unturned. Show your determination to succeed on your path once you know it for certain, it's as easy as that. So reach up the ladder and climb like never before it's achievements that matter, not who everyone saw. Don't count how many had soared when they flew your direction just be ready when your opportunity beckons... Edit: @Diablo let me know if your ok with me leaving 14 lines to match your opponent. Only seems fair tbh. Last edited by Inno; 12-02-2017 at 11:20 PM. |
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