Artificial 0-1 vs Sharp 4-2 - SHARP WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Artificial

[Sharp]

10's fine. we can do more if you want tho

[Ronin]

Maybe 12...

[Ronin]

10 @Sharp

I kill with txt, ur raps r wack.
My blade been 'sharpened' for the purpose of doing exactly that.
Call for back up n it'll be the last time.
When ur fgt friends arrive in their vw golf to play ur back, 9.
German fgt. No way I would've lost to ya.
Leave this Nazis jaw sitting crooked like a swastika.
Im accosting ya. U shook n might fall
U ain't gotta ratchet that's just what girls say u be lookn like dog
Ya body dissolved in liquid to hide the crime
I got that revolver spittn, put the six to nine like the zodiac sign.

[Sharp]

Try to test Sharp n what happens ain't my fault
The Fallout 4 fuckin with me'll put whatever's left of ya in a vault
Brains'll get mashed to shit. There's no doubt bitch
You'll have my Rage movin thru your skull like that Inside Out flick
just quit, its obvious that text just ain't your talent
We'd know you're not capable of thought even without todays Veritas' challenge
n ya girl wants to marry me, can't imagine nuthin that's worse
I oughtta cut that Hozier off for thinkin she could Take me to Church
Brought tools for blood. You're gettin cut n this is your notice
You can battle the Scyth'er run away on some pokemon safari zone shit

[IAmRhetoric]

I kill with txt, ur raps r wack.
My blade been 'sharpened' for the purpose of doing exactly that.
nah

Call for back up n it'll be the last time.
When ur fgt friends arrive in their vw golf to play ur back, 9.
meh

German fgt. No way I would've lost to ya.
Leave this Nazis jaw sitting crooked like a swastika.
:/

Im accosting ya. U shook n might fall
U ain't gotta ratchet that's just what girls say u be lookn like dog
usually girls look ratchet never heard a nigga called ratchet lol

Ya body dissolved in liquid to hide the crime
I got that revolver spittn, put the six to nine like the zodiac sign.
okay i feel you

sharp

Try to test Sharp n what happens ain't my fault
The Fallout 4 fuckin with me'll put whatever's left of ya in a vault
meh but that game look fresh

Brains'll get mashed to shit. There's no doubt bitch
You'll have my Rage movin thru your skull like that Inside Out flick
okay

just quit, its obvious that text just ain't your talent
We'd know you're not capable of thought even without todays Veritas' challenge
nah bruh

n ya girl wants to marry me, can't imagine nuthin that's worse
I oughtta cut that Hozier off for thinkin she could Take me to Church
okay

Brought tools for blood. You're gettin cut n this is your notice
You can battle the Scyth'er run away on some pokemon safari zone shit
lmao nice

v/ Sharp the closer was what got it for me
close battle kinda wack

[El Muffin]

Art

Opener was kinda eh. I get it. Just eh 2 me. The concept itself was meh
Vw was ok
swastika was just not good. N sharp isn't german
A guy being Ratchet? Not feeling this one
Zodiac pretty creative

Artificial ur cypher shit is better. I don't understand that at all tbh. This looked lazy if I'm being 100% honest w/ u


Sharp
fallout pretty cool
inside out eh. I dun get it
veritas sounds like u tried to channel ur inner karaoke it's ehh ok
hozier. Des just used 5his wp?
Closer was dope af tho n lotb


Kinda weak battle but I got sharp

His opener n closer took it


V/sharp

[ill nik-A]

This was VW and zodiac vs opener, hozier and closer

I think arts misses were really bad in comparison to sharps

I got sharp winning this one

[Junto]

I kill with txt, ur raps r wack.
My blade been 'sharpened' for the purpose of doing exactly that.
Ya body dissolved in liquid to hide the crime
I got that revolver spittn, put the six to nine like the zodiac sign.

vs.

n ya girl wants to marry me, can't imagine nuthin that's worse
I oughtta cut that Hozier off for thinkin she could Take me to Church
Brought tools for blood. You're gettin cut n this is your notice
You can battle the Scyth'er run away on some pokemon safari zone shit

This was a solid battle. Art had sharp-end & Zodiac...
Sharp had hozier & pokemon... by quotables relatively even.
But I think Sharp had the more consistent verse here.
Swastika & ratchet were misses - you mean Snoop? ratchet I seen & not a good twist here
Inside out from Sharp I wasn't feelin but otherwise cool stuff

V/ Sharp

[Sn00p]

I kill with txt, ur raps r wack.
My blade been 'sharpened' for the purpose of doing exactly that.
^sharp-end or sharp-pinned? works either way. solid line
Call for back up n it'll be the last time.
When ur fgt friends arrive in their vw golf to play ur back, 9.
^okay
German fgt. No way I would've lost to ya.
Leave this Nazis jaw sitting crooked like a swastika.
^he's not german. this doesnt work, sry
Im accosting ya. U shook n might fall
U ain't gotta ratchet that's just what girls say u be lookn like dog
^eh okay
Ya body dissolved in liquid to hide the crime
I got that revolver spittn, put the six to nine like the zodiac sign.
^okay

vs.

Try to test Sharp n what happens ain't my fault
The Fallout 4 fuckin with me'll put whatever's left of ya in a vault
^okay
Brains'll get mashed to shit. There's no doubt bitch
You'll have my Rage movin thru your skull like that Inside Out flick
^okay
just quit, its obvious that text just ain't your talent
We'd know you're not capable of thought even without todays Veritas' challenge
^eh, okay
n ya girl wants to marry me, can't imagine nuthin that's worse
I oughtta cut that Hozier off for thinkin she could Take me to Church
^i've seen that wp a cpl days ago. uh okay
Brought tools for blood. You're gettin cut n this is your notice
You can battle the Scyth'er run away on some pokemon safari zone shit
^okay

not a bad battle. in the end, sharp takes it becuz of consistency. he had no lines that fell completely flat. so yea.
v/sharp

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Artificial

I kill with txt, ur raps r wack.
My blade been 'sharpened' for the purpose of doing exactly that.
Sharp end. Cool. Simple but I like it. You completed wasted your setup tho. It's not necessary with a solid punch but it will upgrade a decent punch to dope.
Call for back up n it'll be the last time.
When ur fgt friends arrive in their vw golf to play ur back, 9.
Lot of connections packed in there but still comes off light to me. Still comes off a little forced but not bad
German fgt. No way I would've lost to ya.
Leave this Nazis jaw sitting crooked like a swastika.
Too simple.
Im accosting ya. U shook n might fall
U ain't gotta ratchet that's just what girls say u be lookn like dog
ill pass on this one also
Ya body dissolved in liquid to hide the crime
I got that revolver spittn, put the six to nine like the zodiac sign.
meh because its not setup up. could have been better with any cancer reference.

Originally Posted by Sharp

Try to test Sharp n what happens ain't my fault
The Fallout 4 fuckin with me'll put whatever's left of ya in a vault
aight. little obscure but not bad
Brains'll get mashed to shit. There's no doubt bitch
You'll have my Rage movin thru your skull like that Inside Out flick
like the concept but the hit is a little light to me
just quit, its obvious that text just ain't your talent
We'd know you're not capable of thought even without todays Veritas' challenge
cool current events, but worded very straightforward
n ya girl wants to marry me, can't imagine nuthin that's worse
I oughtta cut that Hozier off for thinkin she could Take me to Church
this would have been dope if you set up the ear part
Brought tools for blood. You're gettin cut n this is your notice
You can battle the Scyth'er run away on some pokemon safari zone shit
haha at the pokebars. not a hard hit but cool

My dude Art is nice with the concepts. If you had a better grasp of effective wording you would be hard to beat. Use your setups to give your punch more impact instead of just throwing in filler that rhymes with the punch. If you don't its really a wasted line, and you'll lose to people with better wording.

Sharp is sharp. Nothing too heavy as far as the disses, but didn't really have any bad misses. I would like to see some harsher wording. Be mean. It's just a text battle, nobodies feelings should get too hurt over this shit.

Cool battle, but I gotta go with Sharp for the more effective verse overall. Concepts are only part of the battle and they don't mean shit unless you word them to hit. As soon as Art gets that, he's gonna be tough to beat.

Vote: Sharp

[iSpaz]

I kill with txt, ur raps r wack.
My blade been 'sharpened' for the purpose of doing exactly that.
// thought this was going to hit but it didn't :/
Call for back up n it'll be the last time.
When ur fgt friends arrive in their vw golf to play ur back, 9.
// nah
German fgt. No way I would've lost to ya.
Leave this Nazis jaw sitting crooked like a swastika.
// not feelin mang
Im accosting ya. U shook n might fall
U ain't gotta ratchet that's just what girls say u be lookn like dog
// so he looks like a tool? meh
Ya body dissolved in liquid to hide the crime
I got that revolver spittn, put the six to nine like the zodiac sign.
// this was fire


Try to test Sharp n what happens ain't my fault
The Fallout 4 fuckin with me'll put whatever's left of ya in a vault
// not feelin it
Brains'll get mashed to shit. There's no doubt bitch
You'll have my Rage movin thru your skull like that Inside Out flick
// haven't seen the movie, nice wordin
just quit, its obvious that text just ain't your talent
We'd know you're not capable of thought even without todays Veritas' challenge
// lol
n ya girl wants to marry me, can't imagine nuthin that's worse
I oughtta cut that Hozier off for thinkin she could Take me to Church
// wtf lol
Brought tools for blood. You're gettin cut n this is your notice
You can battle the Scyth'er run away on some pokemon safari zone shit
// this was dope


v/sharp
not that great of a battle maybe sharp didn't think there was much needed. art had that closer which was nice. but sharp still had enough to win imo.

[~RustyGunZ~]

eh ratchet was kind of okay but corny, same with six to 9, idk didn't feel much.

vs

Try to test Sharp n what happens ain't my fault
The Fallout 4 fuckin with me'll put whatever's left of ya in a vault
Brains'll get mashed to shit. There's no doubt bitch
You'll have my Rage movin thru your skull like that Inside Out flick
n ya girl wants to marry me, can't imagine nuthin that's worse
I oughtta cut that Hozier off for thinkin she could Take me to Church
Brought tools for blood. You're gettin cut n this is your notice
You can battle the Scyth'er run away on some pokemon safari zone shit

lmao @ closer

pretty solid, nothing wowed me but it was good

v/sharp